【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
  k& u# {3 z- o2 V( B9 ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ E) o& j6 y+ i+ \& jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 \1 s2 e. i0 O( bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 R( I/ e) t0 W3 @( ~Love… just the word love
* ~3 k$ i  I0 x8 \$ _. E; IWhy is it so difficult to express?
- M! _' D5 N. v* h8 aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ b# `$ ]* Q  X8 Z1 EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( [) U0 F, v# U) x5 r8 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& U1 r, _. |% w. {, g% A4 {" qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ Q1 U2 {. E: N3 r# uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; E1 ^. ~  ]! p) fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, a" Q: H! L% y  I& b: z# rCan I entrust it to you?
- D1 Y: W( @' |* p( qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 F3 B5 o; D1 M8 zEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 ]9 k8 a) {; }& u* w/ o4 `( i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& q% z* E; a0 T% k: Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, r  c3 S" g+ q8 a  X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 ~4 \( O* z# W4 Y: Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ G- g6 Z# h- W5 Y6 }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# k6 Q4 f* m( B! U/ Y/ O! o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 n+ m( d  a2 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; H3 K  h  H" d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ }& a5 w/ U: C0 A0 s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: k- j1 c: s7 W6 h  }5 W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ O- o  u: Q& Z5 ~' }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ \! s/ |, |: U% S; ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* S( d- q0 k3 M% R7 d2 j0 q6 @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ i( X1 s/ g- Z, H0 x) Q' y( m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& g0 |  K& O0 m" L. m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 W  W% O0 f( @+ g" l8 q- i: d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% \% _* D4 O( r  Z% Y3 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! B3 G" y7 W5 Z: d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 A8 F  ~8 t7 @$ p  N) w. ~! {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) q- X% N8 v3 P' b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( \* R  b9 o- D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' n  n+ {4 Y  e* y0 V8 n  ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 Z& r" Y! j( L9 }2 T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" M4 T4 x- H1 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) ^5 T- Y! J7 K5 E3 V& C  I<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; d! a( Z& ]$ A' x: `2 T: k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
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<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 w$ H$ \: P: S& F/ c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* U% D, p" {4 C+ ^7 e& r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% c2 d. N4 Y! p' v6 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! n7 G2 @( s1 w0 `/ s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 i# k3 o9 T; O; w  b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 f3 U2 d8 G6 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 v: A# ^/ p) p* ~: Z" v* X  i/ C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 }5 o' R$ B4 ]: b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% ~3 c; U* ]4 t  c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. l7 B% _/ ^6 r9 Q! F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>