【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; a, F! ?9 o3 S: F/ l$ u+ i# ~) bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& g2 J- L- T& B6 W4 W5 p* MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ [8 A/ @( g8 h0 iLove… just the word love
5 g$ Y: E" o$ M6 k+ d9 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: r5 x: ?6 h5 c. d' gBut I never did
. Z. o2 Y% e2 [9 w% zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 v  m1 V: R+ @: eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! _% K2 ]( r1 B  Z$ w  bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" M" D: t0 m) a$ LLove… just the word love
6 E5 v& d6 y5 P& T4 W4 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
* o. I: O; I  i% e! u& bI want to confess that I love you,
! f4 P4 _8 w  W# y5 [7 z1 i- LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) _% `( Q2 V. MCan I entrust it to you?
! j* V7 ]4 w8 y  @( E4 YEntrust my love within your heart
! y" f7 U6 u  H/ E& k" G5 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 l3 C+ R- C/ f- s/ T7 w% P, w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% d+ }. \7 j5 z  l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) @. N' d% Q9 q$ b3 e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 J$ I+ k! X1 ~( \9 I5 P# E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 e8 x: T& w2 z' v( |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 Y* C& F& ~0 X  Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  c; e  E* k. h) u; H6 c7 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- ^3 w4 U# c6 ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" [' S) U' q) h& Z, h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! a2 C7 @; f5 g8 D7 A- X! [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" u( g) [; q* T+ O: i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& X. G, `/ ^1 ?7 F0 s9 [6 V# w) I0 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# h8 A; l( h0 s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- a2 Z2 j9 w2 P" a# [0 t( q5 {4 m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. J7 V8 _; }' v* Z) A  {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; s1 r* f" m# c: o  G( r) _2 l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 x- k( e& m: [$ k9 s; n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 H' h! t. ]+ Q( }2 b) K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* }$ {" S+ P6 A" V& ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: U0 Z4 X. D, z) W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- P6 I0 C0 |9 I1 n9 h2 e% a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 i6 Z$ t$ V8 l$ p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# n9 Q+ h* g& F- i( w' N6 Y+ G7 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* R! A* g3 X! V) |9 a5 D2 _3 o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* |+ W  k# P9 Y$ H<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ `( H) r0 Y. |( ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ s& p2 b6 g1 c. b% m7 ?: O3 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& j# s7 @6 m0 v; [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- b" d2 l" q, Y! a4 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, \: B& [( _1 ~. Y$ K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! ?0 j% d3 I  j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; M6 L$ Q1 x' A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ E7 s+ {0 i) ?: f$ \; |8 D 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 _/ I7 K- o2 [7 P1 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 h3 j4 g1 N& P2 [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 X7 s/ w+ e0 ^- u* C$ N  {) C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>