【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- b/ {( c8 W$ V4 n, ]( _) Q9 y我另将歌词附在此。
: K# l+ w; x7 w. [0 GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, t% j8 H$ a7 d. u3 _  H0 x* Y5 VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 V) @& j! v1 W2 @2 R( E  oFrom the first moment we met,
5 F$ i) f8 I) }* d, z) j# S5 ]I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" q% O0 u5 m" G/ w  F( |. gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ U0 W$ Z$ W) k, V; ?5 OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 Y/ \, e( B& t- K; n: RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- M: t& L- i8 j0 h+ d! CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' z0 ~( e3 U1 J6 h, qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, f' ^( \/ ~. E5 FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( g* I% y$ q- S. t6 z9 R+ ?' ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% ?% A6 p! n! d$ t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ g5 O! A. M' p6 S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( w- B/ W9 P" _; v, l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 t5 a. ~, B, H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ `! p) f0 |/ }5 N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. V* I/ G6 z, f; z( g( i7 q! S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. b, T# L/ r6 b" }! R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 {/ Q& n; x- {& ~$ {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 @; V% h! m: g3 w' d$ W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; G/ y, r) C, l+ B& l& G$ k, @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( P1 Y% d0 R; a6 G( M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 I! i5 S% g  A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 a3 d2 e& n  {3 X( k  t) a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* C3 a- O! l$ ?  R7 B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 \$ |0 i6 }6 m; |/ n2 F0 u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' q: g0 ?& C* Q; R  p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ a0 D5 o. P3 y# I! y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 ^; @. C: V# C. P0 o  A& i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# l$ r4 K" M2 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 J  Y9 |7 C/ c3 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 O4 B, Z* g0 R* s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 Q4 T2 r# g2 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( [* d2 L$ z- X! b! a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ B% C5 K: Z5 k' E$ x5 x$ R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 w1 B2 {- G* n+ p1 D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& b* D' h% ]/ g: s1 c& Y6 n& X<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ u% S- x! H' K4 Q$ a+ e& j; @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 b6 o8 X4 A( E: T+ C1 V# S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 S( V2 X/ z$ I& u2 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  }1 ]. l8 j" r7 S4 x* p1 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  v& X% a  [7 I( h2 \! a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 C6 w$ l7 x; s' `) P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  _/ O! T& p0 s' R1 t/ q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 y+ i$ ^' T5 e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>