【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" H+ \$ S8 B# `2 m( T" ^; n1 r. K我另将歌词附在此。
2 }, I" c3 ?2 @+ U3 }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* A  k" J; B/ o' x' V3 ~3 qFrom the first moment we met,
" {( ?" A. Q7 @$ \& HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( u9 j0 g) [$ m5 w% d4 C6 zI would probably know how you feel
( D% R8 g: M* `( lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  R7 s; r2 W4 {8 G: pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 |6 i# D8 [$ w- I1 x; X( qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; r! r2 _2 ?) R* w4 QIf today isn’t too late,
! t! ?8 Y( j* J- DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" w0 a( a* }' y0 wLove… just the word love
, X2 i) C1 J! ~* pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 E: e( k9 @9 A$ t7 X( dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, R$ \( F- a; |3 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  q: n. b+ x# R% [9 y" E4 k( iCan I entrust it to you?
) n, Z( p3 I. ?" Z; H6 {4 E$ g! ^Entrust my love within your heart
& ]  D+ g# @9 Q, ]& {( ICan I entrust it to you?
- n8 a. Z- [! l: R# H- yEntrust my love within your heart

7 N1 i  [- z0 u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! C+ G% O% \% ?7 X7 q% n1 w: T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 Z, Y7 C# e2 J: Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' [) q; g2 i3 k2 g  |4 r. \5 A5 R" }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; v1 u3 N( o2 j  w  c3 T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 W) ?" p, ~" L; J3 o* m# O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 ^9 L# k! Q8 K" N( c- p" R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 ?) v, p! }6 B6 C: S' _0 [% t& P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ O4 S3 t9 j7 T' B' S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. o& p* h6 I$ F* l/ J" C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* u) `3 ~+ k3 [& J3 w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 l5 a, p9 C! S7 R7 q: ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' Q' C% K7 |8 _" ^! C  t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ \: q* T" L' P& A6 t% Q  |+ ^$ ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 u7 n! _, T4 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 X! i2 i) m( F; b# _1 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% ^; z& i$ u7 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! z% H$ r; r5 j+ T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: m: }8 |* p) `* O* B- L* \! V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ Y$ b5 s' _8 R. }, p. O6 y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ D/ ^& e( S* V, A6 @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) r' h7 S( t4 u8 G# ^# e<P>But I never did </P>
! J" e# v. n1 b+ [  T# ^<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 X8 p- a9 E. a0 c- F7 m3 O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' `2 z) i( }% A' ~9 x# D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: L3 v) i+ V* v& s# `% P- b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 t& q  O. i; R3 K5 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 r; u9 \* t, G: T8 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; j9 t9 O" x2 g& J+ Z' e: ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ \# Y2 a" E- K2 [/ U' Y5 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 H9 q2 i4 \- B+ S 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ {9 Y7 V5 m. F* _2 Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>