【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
% g3 v" j1 A- }2 o; W% u' H' oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; V* `" ]) c- `- C: U6 }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( Q0 C" l2 |+ i% `" D2 H; t! J0 iFrom the first moment we met,
4 D/ g! w2 d$ C; g' u8 ~8 {& y$ hI already loved you with all my heart
- q7 a) ^  k9 X, TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ c: Q3 T, w' ^1 HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! j6 ~' h/ `1 x$ t) r- BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 w" S6 {8 r. \) v% }7 O3 e7 m( aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ ^' Z6 f/ Y, k" JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. {4 Q6 n6 C8 ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 l0 W, z. F/ v" Z% r) B; `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: ?. E  P8 ^3 t7 w! o  P7 zI want to confess that I love you,
9 j, k% L! o$ E3 ~4 Z) `But I never did
& ^- s/ f; S) J" M. u& {2 OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( Y: z% }" u0 ^, xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 {& C# \) [; ^7 a: ECan I entrust it to you?
( _' I0 m' C! v+ w3 OEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 c  o. |8 u: H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& I4 t3 d) c: q7 i4 k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 `+ ^! ]) n& L  T& v' a6 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* N& Z. g1 S' ]% O. E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) H( W, ]; N" |9 w- [, [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, s" [/ w# x) O3 G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& ]& R8 Z; p7 B3 `! e) G( y$ n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 p& e" |# Z2 Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 [& E+ k: V' K0 z/ q# O<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 Y1 v' J, P3 R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; E$ {, v5 N( ~7 o6 V4 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ }& J- C& n5 G4 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& _* f' Q6 \$ k/ R0 \; ~+ E; H) J4 l4 a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 I' A" i0 X) s1 A# L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; l; n0 F. K0 C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# A8 p) T" u9 O* a; ^. N$ ^8 T9 q8 U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# q; f( _2 [/ B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: A2 o. M8 G7 v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 r* W2 c; _$ f1 }% x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) K& F+ ~0 c) m; N<P>但我不会 </P>
. k6 r' `; ]' y1 x( s. \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& }8 m" \* x9 Y6 B7 }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 H; M# D# [; D4 U+ Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 y  v1 @7 x5 ~0 [8 S" w1 a6 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ b) e+ a* s, B# J5 E& Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) `5 `# C- {, Y* I% t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, |, \. \$ R6 @" p- _* d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 R) m# T3 l' v3 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, g$ H  p/ \( B' r1 B4 A. x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

0 [7 h6 X; J/ m- X. W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ^9 s' Z: p, x( Z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 M( x1 j- @; Y+ t7 _9 t/ l4 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>