【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, I% i5 h2 U& P. M4 hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( U- Z8 n' V& c, ^6 t, ^* h4 oI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' N3 e3 F1 `# T1 N( Q0 ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; `* G3 z0 [7 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ n5 X' U+ e6 e" X1 BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" {  A9 k; ?# |0 e% U" t/ j* l* CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  m" e0 x  y+ Z. BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' W5 b& _* @! {2 ]' a! LWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ k1 [. `4 m. n  bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" i: w3 T' u8 M" D) c+ VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! D7 R* y& j0 l' GIf today isn’t too late,
2 M6 S% d+ X, [' {8 @# jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 E. q5 m( m; B  aEntrust my love within your heart
) s8 E) B3 d9 Q0 v3 P; bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

3 i- Z* _  }2 o& a) B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 J3 F7 _+ t4 Y; K1 n7 q8 v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  O" a! J" v! E3 t+ [& x! h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* ^2 C! N4 Z+ F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* D4 }4 ?/ U; F0 D" p) V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 E5 p+ g- g+ x% T( d: K1 `! ?. m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 o1 m+ ?: |% k: Z6 N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 d; y  N, Y' L9 u& x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 H  j$ _8 R' L0 D9 s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 n( c% z; ~' d+ T' I6 ^. \% w) f, \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% V1 `, ~3 Z, g* [# a) @3 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# v4 o# R, G* h) x+ f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! @6 O/ T' k7 ]4 g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& Q  m! j& B$ B" O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 H+ P2 _0 H% w$ h- p+ q) B<P>但我不会</P>
' P9 y+ b) w/ ?8 B' }5 B0 Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* \7 j! a$ S+ }- i3 _1 H1 t; _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# w  k( |# N" ]! v) L5 E0 F2 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( ]. o" R4 h) l  K  y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# i- R5 u* E$ m4 c% [$ I9 j. G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 D) Q* N2 }  X4 E6 ]7 T8 Y<P>But I never did </P>
% F# u; G5 _0 O5 ]8 s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) a: F1 }) p4 K  V5 Z# B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 b8 k6 I5 }4 w<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 T$ u3 X& |: V2 z9 D- w& I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) Y) t$ K; P; `+ F& s4 G$ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ r6 P  M5 i8 `+ \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ M  M1 C6 J+ P& k" x, S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' ^* a! D- L4 M: O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) j6 Y* s' @8 K8 D, c) d; u. j* i 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& |+ P% K' S+ i5 k2 U1 W这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ f4 ], ^6 Q& y- Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 [& i* ?4 Q7 t' v$ e; a& u& m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>