【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
4 e' Z1 G2 Q' C" \) }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 J. {$ h% X- _% M9 K7 W. z, }' eI already loved you with all my heart
& _$ s9 q. a: [2 s4 T' f8 B0 o9 L0 }) C: @We meet and talk everyday,
) T6 n) E- s  _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. r) T5 \  h" v5 {7 B: aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 s) V! Z4 ?7 z; [/ @I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! W7 v: D: W- m; V+ M- H6 s, MWhy is it so difficult to express?
' [& K4 t/ S; |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 d% w6 F1 ?0 X: tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 h4 X( @3 g3 p  Z4 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) c( @+ y! e% q. ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  ]: o' H* F. f$ m# ?. n) K2 YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- Q$ r, t) j. ?, @/ z/ LBut I never did
# @. P/ u" o/ e; X7 r* cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% B2 S% T1 B5 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 c  t' l* l0 K: u& G( F( T3 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( h/ s  t  U; B% j. S  F& ^Entrust my love within your heart
# F& r& ?# o* h! t2 dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 p% _( F+ o+ E$ t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  j2 a' d# N" y2 x# i! q0 i, K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- }% I& L1 Q+ g4 N2 }" N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" Q& ~4 n$ `( Y' V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 n, r' S( i0 j& m1 o* k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- K" ^# d$ j6 h  @+ I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* B, x0 u; V) \+ K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: L# r2 R# Q; w* d. M0 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 W& [3 d) s' L5 C0 `' A% O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 s0 A- K! p1 O7 I<P>但我不会</P>
% U1 f5 R# H6 g& i. }( c; [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" c6 ~: e. ?  u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% ~( t0 o" z9 j8 @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, S+ j' n+ u, v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 T, r: a3 g1 D' W: Z& }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# e0 q) L- c% _3 C3 d* D# ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" c% L, }  A2 V! G' R% o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- D3 g$ B# K# Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 H- a/ Y, \6 C. e5 f, p. ~( h, v+ m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, Y: w( r: Q8 A+ B/ t* y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) @; |3 l) `5 N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, V$ P4 [  c2 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* b: ]/ E. Z8 X* T5 c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 L2 Z! u6 d: C5 s& W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ G6 y; Y* d/ `7 u: D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 p3 y& N5 N' a# R, s1 a. B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 \# V4 D. ]/ n: |5 c( ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>