【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 L* z) ~* V4 J2 E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" H, A& E" G6 b: _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 k* j6 x! ]2 X7 Q; A- v. N+ WFrom the first moment we met,
3 P& C! Q- ~5 W: OI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 S7 Z6 e% ?9 b: cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: A0 ]1 z6 ?( T+ C5 `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ L- P0 t% N* D. N2 }; A3 ULove… just the word love
) ]$ W* p9 M0 \" \" E; S: KWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 s$ ?4 X, Q7 G6 y6 `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. W9 |9 N* ~/ x8 c; w. IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: o5 \/ [: L* `) tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) R4 c) U, K% e/ j$ ACan I entrust it to you?
0 v! k* Q. y9 ?8 |, g% W. s3 b5 HEntrust my love within your heart
" _, \, A# B( U+ v0 {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* R/ n, t* Q% y3 [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" X1 J2 ^) r% _8 l! _* p+ x" tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. R' }+ M6 ~! Y" D! EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: i0 L5 {  r& h( Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; O; p$ r$ s1 `' a8 |; b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# O6 L! E. E8 n" S2 m" M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, [# b# y; v8 S; ~% M% r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. l) `/ n4 o; J; q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# O. X( `  U. }9 b' h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, @; F: S" _& q! I( w" t8 a7 g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% ^: |  [" Z, @( ^  \9 [$ f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 o: h2 Y4 \; g7 _, M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ i# Q7 v/ H4 ~2 b5 y1 o4 H4 L5 S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& I; y/ h/ M- H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% ?+ k/ T6 y4 l* n$ N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- a2 \$ m8 n2 I; y+ v7 Q0 |/ f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 k9 ^7 O; K0 [! n. M/ R6 m$ R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% x% m6 |& e4 M& y" p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. Z! N: U) w% r2 R( n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" A) K1 A7 H2 H4 y$ p) H( a0 j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" N+ h6 h2 O9 @" @' L9 j- w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( D! P% `1 Z. G; J1 y0 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ u+ z- |' K; a" B3 T: u# t# n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" f& {& J" ~% b5 e- m0 E% r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 a% K! {1 v" a; `  L& ^0 Q. D5 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# N7 f+ v2 O: \, p1 q# @7 y5 Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 M; _5 n) q, |! _" Y/ S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: G5 E. x5 `( Y  @9 R# w0 \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# j, q# S4 l: p! `: G) ?) k2 s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ A/ \, _$ I2 x( i- ]<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ R. ]: x9 e3 E' R# [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 G  C' N0 Z' o! }& b' P6 n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 N  _4 T$ @: [' j2 ~/ {0 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 q% P7 ~. [5 _/ m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' M( p/ q1 p# X) D( R9 a4 R# [$ S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ |- K" R" |7 ], h* P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! J( u  @! }$ r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 A" o6 g3 ?# W! {  d7 A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ {% i, u5 Q, o1 |3 r" @5 I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 f7 }4 p! @0 O8 a) D& n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  t& k9 W) s. {) r# N) E" I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 W% E6 v8 d6 S7 z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>