【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 T4 n  r; _/ ~6 }/ l: h' \3 z我另将歌词附在此。
  f, R  f0 A7 C* h! g! q7 ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 G. [/ h+ p" J/ c, x: g5 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) i+ X; Y9 \$ z( sFrom the first moment we met,
! U% I$ d% C% x+ ]. r0 l& o; o, [* kI already loved you with all my heart
6 b' p1 @1 ^8 c+ C7 \. nWe meet and talk everyday,
9 S; D; j- K, q% VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% z2 i- R' j( J# s# qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: u* }' U4 H- ~" v1 [* {I would probably know how you feel
& j# }: o$ R& ?% v: D5 qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 b* g2 v3 H: d, ]I want to confess that I love you,
6 {3 z2 Z: n- h* p! {+ ~But I never did
  p, u1 C& n' h# F6 a! xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% z1 O; w6 Q3 c( j, q7 |3 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ V4 m- U6 t. C2 c3 EEntrust my love within your heart
+ R! T* T) M  n5 vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ t4 r# `9 T$ V% A' wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

: |9 g" h$ h2 ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- T: }" {+ ~/ `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  {1 @' V9 j9 Y5 h- B* ~! \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 v. M+ d. E* B5 V7 X0 j- {  ^, C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 a" P. N1 H9 j1 q9 j* z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  x% ?, D# e3 o0 D6 f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- d7 h$ r/ c" `2 d) J2 K) Z5 d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, L  I7 Q6 P. x: _$ L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ [: t6 Y7 j+ H6 P/ R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 s8 H) R2 |* t7 O6 N' S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! ]$ b& ^  M# I- |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. n6 H7 [. @5 v<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; V. ?) b5 P6 W: G7 Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ P  ~5 o4 b) o9 r# p/ z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ C# B4 _/ L$ I6 a/ y% R* h; m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ Q- f% s9 a6 |* M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ t7 g" _1 S2 x( c  A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ q6 k' \* K/ ^1 l* b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* V: S) I- i- ]- j1 P0 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ K" S3 t% i- _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) V7 p0 J- x1 c' O" i9 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  u0 r9 }5 H9 z6 @1 b0 i1 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& @5 k7 C" R1 _2 }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 l) F2 v0 z) |2 F) G7 O1 {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 b6 a* V; s# q# r  w. H+ X  J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) c! z! D/ F4 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! Q9 N5 V6 ~, g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  r6 \1 ?2 T' Y. p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 `) s2 z+ L0 l7 k& h% y; a, T8 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 r/ B: D# d7 R2 F& P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( v* Q' m9 _. U( E$ I' w3 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 [0 H" M. y) r 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( y5 ?! R" }, F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 {" ?. \2 i6 ~8 W5 {$ C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>