【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 K$ `" E3 K) k. p; f/ W7 w" gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) y3 D. Q/ {$ h; UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# d' [& d. }' Y8 f( [! o. oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 l" R# V3 p0 \Love… just the word love
$ J- J, r' [, H. o' qWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 ^4 w8 w: t4 Y9 w- m4 OI want to confess that I love you,
& O8 k5 B& C5 r. b( ]9 I  cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 Q, I' M# ~  q) u  f8 HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( ~) z9 G% @$ ?: |( q# ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 g2 ]7 p4 b0 \8 O9 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ W; ?8 {; G. kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ ~+ A, _# W6 K( ]4 ]8 p% @Entrust my love within your heart
9 C8 C8 M2 a0 }6 \2 Q! hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; e- V. d0 R; p+ K) k! I3 b; L4 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 {2 b; q8 m9 n" f* K, M6 n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# J! O8 N+ u* P+ q% ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ Q, f+ @) L, Y# L/ i$ I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  e! h% J: [6 P; x: f1 |1 d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 L) M0 u/ y2 r5 n6 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. ]* A% ?- X2 n9 L" r2 ]4 {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 ]& V" I( i& z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 [( e6 M7 j7 A5 i% R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- o1 X& Z9 @: M9 y9 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ `# C5 R7 }& ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" ~7 b" X; q, E6 U* h8 I6 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, ~8 X% a1 M) `6 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' u2 w+ f9 C" L: u' T$ N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; ^+ \  U) q; Z  s0 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& A; S0 j4 V6 i. Z' H: q+ X8 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, F% A% l% A: V<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) {' _6 O3 \1 [' k- Q# s% X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  U5 N& C7 P" u4 a9 i+ u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: a+ G, i; ^0 O( V$ ]7 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# X/ K1 R' n  N3 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 G8 L+ T; I# p# x0 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) }0 ~. X' v$ S4 [0 f+ q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" [, n0 ?* ~0 A- T7 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 ^+ Q# J7 f* T8 O<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- k8 i0 \' N" ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& m. r: B! d+ e4 r: [8 {! j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>