【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
  F: v# j) u& c7 ?, R/ k& c1 u! wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, P0 g" ?- Q) n" uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 _/ O( t" K! \$ H: YFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 F" N6 H. W, z# w- R" R6 u* P1 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 Y- k: f6 H6 D5 O3 [7 EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 Q+ J; g8 W* S% h% dI would probably know how you feel
4 |5 b5 \. ]6 T& h' x. TLove… just the word love
1 H: r( s" K' A  oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ w& Q7 l& T/ ~, J- YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 e1 D0 u) M6 ?( QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: L8 ]. s3 j! E0 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& {; G: q5 z& @' R( F7 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
. F7 P% W" Y1 B% ]4 P* n/ cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  i% @; a5 C+ ?  N+ t" W$ @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( P( \& U. k1 Q! _2 PCan I entrust it to you?
* I3 J  q, g, X: YEntrust my love within your heart
$ Y8 T6 i& `( vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 X: L. M3 d; x1 R5 S2 G4 P5 d8 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ E3 d! c" R# f& b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 G, ]& A  D6 `: p+ _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 f2 j# f' u* d* ]0 u4 x" ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( s/ D) a  p: [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 o3 H# I+ @: N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ M8 s6 ^5 J  C4 C" n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 u; \) q# N+ J& r- y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- S; `" E9 Y" _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ C% \1 P4 Z2 }4 T) K- C1 z! G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. f& z8 x" o1 D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 z4 j& b% J8 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- L! ^1 ^0 j% f9 i: O: h6 a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ J2 I+ [9 r4 X5 d( G+ {  \+ |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% T5 C6 R3 y4 f2 B% n: a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( ~, _7 h) z  {# c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 @* ~" X5 A: [5 x: h; F  l9 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 O- t& L7 C  f+ b$ p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! B# ~7 l: |; u: Z6 z+ |$ ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' H+ w1 F7 p7 [, X4 w) q9 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 P) C& O$ G7 @! I7 z( e<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' b2 \3 O- ~1 p& k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 @$ z* i! }$ I4 `: s- |' O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% F0 O+ \7 Y# I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% Q0 ]2 v- d- \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( `, H/ u6 a$ T2 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* S6 |2 u& ~7 S4 }7 B8 D1 {& n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 }$ a6 Z$ i& ]. S$ s6 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( z% Q" c' o5 @" R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& V* X6 }5 v  W& R, f7 S- T9 @9 N; |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ u2 [" W7 }- O+ u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& G2 @+ r* w) ^5 T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- w' E: N  y% y$ \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- j0 @$ B4 \8 p: E" K' O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>