【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 J. v9 {: P$ N; [8 D# [我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 p9 ^  D7 M( ~/ l9 HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- J( w; N, e9 l) E6 i' NFrom the first moment we met,
" A6 D+ ^* B1 X0 Q. W* ZI already loved you with all my heart
. ^* [- F) K( G$ B3 F. h. b5 AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# {9 ]. y* u/ WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& p" x3 B- ?2 W$ s  u$ y& _, SWhy is it so difficult to express?
" U2 ^2 F/ b  d, }- hI want to confess that I love you,
7 J9 n( f# K$ Y; D8 \, a2 @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- u* A1 D- S/ i) U7 f- @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 D5 D  {& k6 ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ U# V! o7 p6 l! ^! S1 Z0 o5 ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; L0 }; h$ @7 k- _  rLove… just the word love
, R  }3 z8 {- m& }, V* l4 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( c3 Q+ X, {9 }; P" PBut I never did
- w# Q+ y. @. N# N, UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 x2 m/ v# E+ Y5 ~; J2 f4 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# h, a7 R7 q/ K; LCan I entrust it to you?
: H. a- Z1 f" L$ h/ D; DEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ |2 Y# m7 G% R0 A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ `3 G9 `$ Y/ B1 K. Y* [2 X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ V8 h' u. D- `+ s9 e/ b6 v- n9 s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- p7 v. J) Q$ {" G! ]& T8 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: I+ v: a  w2 x# d" d3 Y7 x& p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 N( c9 s- x2 P, ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 U0 j5 V( F* ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% q2 f4 Q6 Y8 L9 {; @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ c- z, @: ?/ G; C% Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. S9 C9 |/ E5 Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" Y+ ^8 U  U  W" f) d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 h0 P1 e3 Q6 P5 R4 c0 H5 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( i. _9 m) x8 K+ A& |3 H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 T% p) t( B% H- Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: l9 m. H* h/ v, G( ^2 C& f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! ^6 Q4 C8 O- b, Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) ]7 l- g) y- y! |4 F8 |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ U9 _$ H+ t% b- [/ d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' d& ], |4 g5 k  K; T& Z" P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; e6 A/ e4 I# j$ R7 i! G" p+ O5 P3 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  T7 s0 v, K. H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ R2 U) y" l( s. `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# i4 O+ ?+ a. f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# V+ d" @7 L( ^  h, v: W- u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. O( x: y6 D6 ^2 F
3 F' w4 [8 N; p% o# s8 o# Z; H# r 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
0 e) x; I# A9 h6 B1 j/ R; a
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 o$ h  g! {$ ^5 B% A) x- m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

- P: s4 y6 O, v$ l  t- T- X<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" i% D: W% ], |" m1 e2 J+ I) t! \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>