【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% V) L  ]0 y, S4 J% P' PFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& |0 A0 K; J: ZWe meet and talk everyday,
4 u/ \6 ?( W# M& hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" ]& m) e0 T6 m6 i: i) u) _% gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 @3 ~  V* D; u% k7 i9 dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' p: ~* s4 z1 x3 m5 a+ m# @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 }( {) O2 Z4 y+ t0 J& u- p# }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 M; w4 h! D" `" JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& ]2 v; V4 y2 ~4 f% p4 j& lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" M- k. {! `8 J0 \# |$ C7 ]' vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  o: @2 R" X% GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 f! `! l% {, I, G5 DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ U& ^$ e+ P. u* \: @! q2 x# |, g  ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" c; q* I! A8 Y7 w! w. N; M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ m2 q. W( ]: a6 L6 r# N9 ~0 ^0 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* N8 H+ G5 w+ V1 S/ P5 ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- t% Z. [8 ]* `# W/ A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" P" [! C: w$ h3 B, o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 `* F/ L8 r9 k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 B+ {; s2 N! K+ \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 I# D( b; \* a8 g  c. A6 ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( k1 [5 s4 S" H+ T2 V- j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 r, d* L% F6 X- \! F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ z7 {8 s0 M, t# T  Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ h5 H) u  I0 b. |* m# e1 c  o( H; ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 G+ k' M: i$ {3 |$ }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. F, ~# N+ K+ q; h) {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) {4 J; k! Z+ a3 z# m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 `* s' \& ~4 g5 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% b1 [* F5 H1 O6 Z' L: A, Q" \! j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 e) ?+ M3 v7 h. l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* Z5 s4 A2 }, P6 n1 b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ s! e: ]: n: P4 f  \4 _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 p4 |" K0 [- {- @<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 t( v* }) Z1 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 m! B! G, \  ?. |8 D  t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) c) n) [! P4 S+ [  ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 d' i9 g$ b+ f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 O* T( h; _7 ~7 U# I% q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' v& P, C$ s4 }" N& b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 u  g3 b' Z+ {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>