【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) O7 q! v3 N+ |! s, u9 ^, O我另将歌词附在此。
% v/ A: D' F& E. b7 \) {# J. y* y3 |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 E% S2 S/ u' s4 c# k6 wI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 T# V3 N* `6 }8 r5 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 z% N0 C! F3 K) PI would probably know how you feel
, ]% k* j9 T8 e- V0 [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 j- k# S3 v3 K4 \+ J" EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( ]5 q+ S8 v, Y+ B" r6 I3 m- Q0 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 s, _/ S, p% e( E0 k7 O2 b0 L( }' _/ CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: W/ T4 q+ H/ u* s8 `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( f; V- n+ }9 P' |* o: C* N; {, vLove… just the word love
/ _/ F! i. ?  Z+ a0 w1 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 W# x' m0 l6 YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 j2 c% H; W1 _5 ?) Q9 wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! e* Q9 s& I, n3 D' Y; I$ J* FEntrust my love within your heart
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% Q) m4 F# P( z( M! {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; w! ]# S& b4 Y6 C' F! X5 H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 y* z$ |* T" J7 u. }# u+ L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* |1 h3 A- Y3 k6 A% m/ C, G1 L7 W! v) o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* W) o: E9 Y  {$ J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: @8 j! z* q/ a$ b) A: i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* ~; R, @) d6 M$ |- r2 N9 V7 Q/ _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ r, O# |# X: y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( V9 i4 w6 s( P: t6 G+ ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 M3 X) L4 J$ O% q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; o! x2 s/ m5 o& Z# O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% \! |! k) w* |* s9 Q6 h0 {3 {: `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 p% Q; P5 z, a, J; b6 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 I; @: ^0 S0 B5 f/ h' r" }4 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 {" g: [. L: J+ n; F1 {2 t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& u3 p; c4 D6 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! R" @( s2 |5 y# B0 ^! o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# K9 j! L- ?0 d; I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 s& o1 Q7 R6 I& O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ q$ r7 Y5 Y0 J- T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- a8 @/ O/ q: y4 l' D; c' s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% E; u/ T6 p* }) b) Q5 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 x+ S! ]- H+ D: s' _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 k( Y6 J1 G6 B5 h. E. H( l5 O0 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 o1 R. P& P% P4 J5 K3 v. v! K/ a5 U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ g3 m3 f5 J: J- c  \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& x9 G$ Z, X- ]$ p1 E+ K: M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>