【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( s" G1 h* A5 u- E: k; {From the first moment we met,
5 M' k  C( y* [( [3 {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 J7 a/ F8 E2 b' ?+ `. |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 P& t. b* F' F+ `( F  @# KI would probably know how you feel
' C, s/ s% T% A; Z9 YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 @/ j+ O# V8 L# K' n$ a* HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ ^5 Q! a" t6 p( h4 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; p. n$ u6 a* ~9 A+ f0 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 @  J. U* h) y/ S% ^7 DCan I entrust it to you?
1 v; y2 s7 a* q0 j4 \' P, v& mEntrust my love within your heart
# K  V7 \" ~4 g/ U/ K( f& rLove… just the word love
9 a' ~* A- d% ]5 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: U; G; v5 c4 B8 pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 K1 U3 f) j/ m7 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 {3 x# q2 ^6 o0 g$ fCan I entrust it to you?
, Y& _# H2 B  q- W( A4 ]Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 r% y1 F. ?4 t) \4 Z% V% x7 W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 u2 m! e3 J4 D6 h# W. B3 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 o9 C" ?& b3 |/ L1 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& j5 E% M/ J; s- n1 o8 t0 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% e: G* s. j: X. d; S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* I) u/ K/ t0 u+ N9 l  U# ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ Y' q) c0 y3 U0 m/ d3 m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 C+ }( n. ^1 d- v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& Z  c; u0 R- v5 \6 M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ Z: w" A& a% }1 q5 G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 i. S% Z3 ]; A7 M8 l& S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  b, u: S# Q7 e. M7 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" b8 l+ T% N' T3 N3 {3 D  T- [<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ C/ |5 ^2 W1 O+ X1 F9 u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& j( ~  E: v! t# y* T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 `% N: |! @$ C8 d$ z5 k: |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 k" B9 K4 [3 _9 [6 }  D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& S* r9 P. d! I# t/ j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, u* O( I6 ?' F/ _( d' O: y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 G6 T3 i' v; D: S' w1 }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. {" D2 D, s5 {) p1 s0 T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- h. \, q$ I1 H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) f. \$ C' G* i+ r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  a+ a2 M6 K! U  V4 R  x9 E' W( s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) D( R& `7 V0 T; \% j' s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) I" ^/ L3 L  a7 V+ @% g. E& c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( |$ a7 ]" i, n  v4 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- Z1 W9 Q) n( ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ c9 U9 J, Q( w) S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ Z7 J/ N8 N+ n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) U0 E/ g& u: ?0 F# h2 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 a# }. Z5 ?6 Y4 V  _+ q& L' _  W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. w" ?/ P! L: P8 ^/ I5 t; L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- [8 ]( k& z: L0 P; \$ G% D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>