【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 S* r2 b" b( l- R' n* ~我另将歌词附在此。
7 ]' M) }# T: DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# P! C$ R" g' Z; g( PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 N6 b6 u) F- R9 r! n6 l* b: MFrom the first moment we met,
" p/ |: y+ `$ C. b: D9 P3 C; I/ \9 b, WI already loved you with all my heart
2 `/ E  A8 v; E. i% mWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ P. ~3 y" U9 y7 s( LLove… just the word love
" [5 N% y% B9 `& e5 X# c( `Why is it so difficult to express?
) A0 M" |+ N8 R4 ~5 HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% _/ \6 P$ q. D, L3 SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 _3 z, K  p' P& `0 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 I8 G# f/ |2 a6 b( \1 R# g8 HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" Y$ R# r& T- l+ f* V( A1 DI want to confess that I love you,
: z; z/ C, o8 P  A( G' X6 Q2 y9 ?3 n/ dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ Z! J+ G$ o: ]0 RIf today isn’t too late,
! z% l& n# W$ n% ?. a# vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" W8 @+ D0 O# t! }' x: I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' ~0 v, Z1 v2 _3 x7 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 s4 V. S, _. c( R4 u6 j! b  w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 L) Y, P) X; F- ?/ H- h" Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  E, a4 s1 ^# \* f6 v% v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' Y9 r; }1 o* O6 R4 F! H) ~$ ]% @' L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 p* _7 O' \9 P5 h! B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 p2 y+ ?9 v3 O' H2 h# H+ j# {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: P, A9 G* o+ S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 j. l$ `, G8 T! x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* ^2 \% v5 [0 v3 v" z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' O& H% D. w3 t& Z5 p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% \7 i; T0 d) A# U- l; i6 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ K4 c' Y  V3 M9 j, L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, v6 s, s/ I. L$ M( y% ?& n0 b; k7 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! p) u' L5 i7 X) x$ ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ Y+ j% x; C+ S( Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' }, O! @! _; a: B; j+ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; E2 [. N( z$ a8 J0 m% w1 P( C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) J& G! ?; E9 U: h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ i& O7 O" C/ P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 _4 W1 j, n8 x  o9 H' H  S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) ~6 k5 l8 D& C' N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; ]2 h9 m& P2 M' m$ J& M+ w$ v" s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ U0 v( G4 ~& }; a* ?0 M: x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ O8 w1 M: U7 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 M# X  ]/ r3 |/ T2 _' ]& F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 l9 p0 A, A4 f2 ]5 b+ G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( a1 C+ h' `- c( e% R/ i2 e. W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# I$ k( ]# q, b! U" {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 x  h9 d7 Q' M, X* F+ N4 j7 o' Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' v- f8 _( a8 @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 c' N7 f: p. w/ c- Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>