【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ W; H5 o  R# A. i! @0 lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' v/ L" C: a! `From the first moment we met,
% E0 i% r' \. }" ]I already loved you with all my heart
& v% [* @. R, f7 E2 ~- O$ \We meet and talk everyday,
( r% _6 n5 a* M# A2 X4 `, Y& JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! I) }9 L. |2 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; k' X4 e" c8 G. a5 J4 @( c& c* p, VLove… just the word love
; J' @; O1 `: @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 u( S, c& K) z% K- `- s/ l3 Q3 q- B% pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 M* e: k: l& q* K- w, ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 D( [% p$ M& bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* }- o1 U2 x) B7 v) y2 w6 SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' O# g- E7 o. B7 wBut I never did
6 `9 f) o' k9 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 g7 m# |7 O/ `, V- X6 I; P$ D& jIf today isn’t too late,
/ G5 d! z- X3 d# c: z1 [+ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; z' k7 K3 ^  K7 k# m/ B5 e) dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 W2 B7 |$ H7 O) q3 ^) V$ N" v% GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! Q0 m/ N1 ?7 I( J# C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 X# {1 O5 Q$ F; t: C+ ?3 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* B) t/ t1 }6 v) ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) |; V7 ]! ~; P6 x# V2 K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 S1 w2 |) `' o/ Z% l* R0 t5 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 f% X( L/ H- `& [* H% Q$ W  z( O, W% g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 A# H% ?6 l7 x9 X0 f4 O' p9 N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ [  F4 z9 f" Z) x3 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ M! n' }' B  V# e5 _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 ~) u0 t- o3 x; V  L- o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# U7 @5 p- t9 J6 y; V/ O& i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 F" T2 f3 Y* G; l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" n; L8 z$ R5 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 M/ U) [2 O. m/ h3 P1 P$ s( u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; |3 Z1 M6 [$ N7 Y( P2 C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- x/ _0 D2 r$ _: w( I6 T4 K; E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 _5 A3 E- |6 e5 k5 b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ i3 `, k" p2 f/ @% k" W  C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! d" F' |* W8 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  w4 x* `9 x* f1 }9 n5 D9 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% m3 {( e/ q2 _$ L; Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ A3 E  F9 q4 E' i$ D. q2 |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ J! ^* n" m: S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ m. F. {( H0 u! V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 C* L! R/ t0 ^+ R' F1 Q: `$ u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! q; L5 _6 [0 G# A9 W  `4 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. M8 {. `6 u3 E* o  a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  N  N; B4 w5 X+ e) F1 o9 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- }; i, Q. h/ G0 U4 B5 X( @2 l0 m- Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( E5 y) W  E5 m/ M8 b5 C/ _4 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 J+ e9 \3 L+ |: U* S1 f) @8 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 [: w. @, P3 x" [0 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# E" t: j' g4 R% i, Y( Y9 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  P& d0 r8 c$ W" s. d9 Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. Q) x* q" ^# C* Q0 Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! p- R+ o5 B; v, U" O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! \/ }. D" d* c% ~, D  {( w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>