【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 o! }8 x7 f9 {  @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 t6 Q: a2 r6 t( r7 rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 x7 M$ _5 a" W: c0 QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ u2 A; b* ?5 A4 m* [I would probably know how you feel
! W$ R7 a: c* \Love… just the word love
7 Z+ R7 n0 r( V7 v! u/ t! r0 @* dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: [9 p6 \3 q$ T6 `3 l0 i0 DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; ^: i! O* ]! {# _* t8 R/ gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 q# E% @& E: t: D( y5 z6 eLove… just the word love
8 h& x4 B  f3 t# J8 E7 ?5 O/ yWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 V, g$ Z, u. |! G7 G* vI want to confess that I love you,
- v5 U; T0 {0 wBut I never did
$ M: T( s7 o& O  N! P6 y1 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 i" d/ A) W, B6 w, o. ZEntrust my love within your heart
# L5 ?: ]& ?  mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 z, u; e/ r- Q0 |+ X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 B- R# `  q& }  {2 H# M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- i2 e7 g. O$ d6 Y  c, Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& g% e0 v& P0 \/ P1 }# _1 z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" J0 [2 J' I% h" a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: n4 _- l& \1 X: X, N9 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ G; @/ S) l% I+ {) U& c1 I& `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; I0 ?. y! z' u, Y! X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) p; y* |! J3 e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 S1 H+ `4 Y) I* j2 _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( \2 k2 w9 G. \7 E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. l" f+ W: z7 M) F9 ~. i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 Z$ C, M6 h( W6 l; E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 T1 E$ u, n# O' b$ k) n4 l9 ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 S$ X! y, K+ _4 ?8 b# m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: ~  _9 G! a8 M$ d/ r0 V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 q! N5 W( N5 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ ~5 |& r) V' L<P>但我不会</P>
* e- R) l4 R7 x4 \" u2 ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 {0 p0 j: {* t4 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& t/ y1 M4 r$ l! W. I9 X7 ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& P/ {- y3 ?+ q2 y6 p* _7 J3 P8 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 w3 x( x! v) K7 T/ a! Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# E. U" c, s' t/ d, T4 M8 J0 |, U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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: n  }) t+ ^+ l4 c# s3 Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ X) x5 A( O5 B% |# H8 p8 Y9 N+ W' c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 n+ W2 Q) h' a# x% t- f+ K% [<P>But I never did </P>
5 u3 Y! A' {1 j! V0 _<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 V# n9 Z5 g" ]- A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# m2 v' v5 `- D5 ]5 s: G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) g3 x$ P1 x( T1 ^( }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' Y( J8 ~" r" [( g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( j3 G  d  o& @+ f. h  c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* {7 c5 H. F# K& o7 P& G" W& l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' B: Q  M; A3 c+ z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- U) G7 T  F: ~: Y8 I. Q4 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, R, R  t  j( j  U5 d4 ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: G9 ?( J* a+ `* d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; d# ]7 P6 i- s! K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>