【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, n5 C% X7 Z/ {" W& k9 t) F; CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& U% s4 R' J* o' ~) e3 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
. k1 t* a- J/ ?. i( [' A3 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. y: ^. o( Q# Z2 z0 \$ jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" I! @6 y6 E# ~: `You needn’t fear anything
. [! L) ]7 \9 H- N! H; SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 d; f1 h5 }- w# X2 q& M8 JEvery other word you utter is love
* X$ b3 o% W" B4 _/ I; \2 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' y- h; j' {1 I# qNothing can compare to my love
, I5 E. f& ]' b* R+ tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 E: `" Q6 _# [7 v' R1 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ y) V" E1 h- z. g5 i3 b# K' H8 dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  u* G) d: m5 \3 y& w3 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: _* t- n$ e7 z3 W4 ~# QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, J& R: s: l0 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& r4 a; H2 s/ h8 U& Y) g2 I( GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. [: a6 L! ]6 J, R/ T3 e" w# [8 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 G9 f' K7 }  x/ B, t& ?; F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: v, l" A1 N- {, f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ @1 h; d8 ~2 k& m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& p, _% m$ {' u3 V" A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) c0 l1 t3 V3 \4 r/ t/ u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 c. j0 ]9 o5 I' t8 d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! O& ~  ^+ v# w& o  h4 p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% f; x# U) O" x, Y8 C" ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: h& D) M0 T6 ~  C! X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 w9 U0 t$ k6 ^2 t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% D  A0 ~4 q3 Y. }/ j! K( p% X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 M" A& g. C# N* m. c7 s# D7 d2 f. s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  [2 w- J* H8 Q) [* m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 T7 F* Z1 p2 D" i! g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 Q- D- r7 c) `5 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 y2 ]' \$ H: E3 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# P* g9 q  C4 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 Z( ?& F/ @1 H$ N) D/ G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 @& e$ o, z' g& B' @9 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, p- @  u+ A5 n  R" A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# q1 D9 D5 x7 f6 v% k6 x& q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ d# q% A5 f7 H/ X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 a1 a; f0 v! B8 j0 `/ V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ `: T/ Y% o3 K" D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! F' _+ R- P; e  n/ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
( r, f3 f5 z% c% G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 z5 A: a8 o# }7 w" `1 m4 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ {+ N  b1 r: V  `: A  h  ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& {) X  X" q$ Z6 Q' t- N( c/ g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ k! ^) i+ d. v! S+ B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 e* P( C" N+ O! ~7 s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>