【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- G$ V/ E/ h0 T4 m' F8 W歌词我附在后面。
6 \. b% H7 _" b, T% o8 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
& C  P. x9 b; z: a% J+ O) @! r+ oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 j1 f8 h' Q) f3 w4 x& vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 o. T" Q! f/ Q5 B8 R6 o6 z8 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) k) t- b# t+ @) W5 F" yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 o5 ^" F$ A' [: I- rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- H0 i4 h7 \7 F: z) @Every other word you utter is love
1 \7 y5 h2 J- i. R5 ?, ~$ B# o. ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' x- B  x, ]% b( V# |Nothing can compare to my love
9 ]7 g2 K5 b8 z0 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ g- A- q+ \) s5 zI want so much to see inside your heart
) s7 ?% S! \" T& @6 G2 _+ FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 i. Q2 Y2 E7 E/ y/ V+ o* I% W7 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 O) V4 m3 c! L; k, [1 _' CI regret not dying
4 r/ U# E; f) p9 X. X6 ?: Y( w8 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 k, C7 b' [; c; Y; C# nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, K( C. C9 K& S& ]" NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 i: Z- S% d5 _$ L, L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- u# y, @2 u1 L3 p% }1 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: P8 Z  D, o" u# ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 y) c/ K, I, a; ?- ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, `: ?0 c8 j. I) O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 M; D. C9 ^9 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! @& B! O- M. I/ e/ {  Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  w# j. g# s9 p6 N$ ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  S# f9 @6 X3 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 L3 Z0 m& m- x) x( I* k. S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' C* k; O" M3 }# k' r# }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 E& d" s) S/ I8 Z5 u# z' G% S8 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% X' W- i5 C( Q5 r% t! M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( c, f3 {# v% w" H) c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 x3 H/ R  s: {7 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( ?8 A- e& R, R; m* h1 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# K7 I3 V- F, |+ ?3 h: G% X  S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* u- I1 k' P) O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) c3 @& x" f; K; _8 W8 `2 Q2 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# m: |. K" g8 Y, N2 m+ |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 d1 h* }6 D5 P7 b: x, T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 b) H9 t0 C1 q' s: I- T0 ]4 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ b4 }4 P+ J; X+ t7 H! \0 y  N% r4 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" q- k, p2 R6 |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( B8 T/ e6 |3 D; a5 U' s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. t  K1 |7 n6 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 s; a5 B" j, U& h, U7 w, t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; S8 L2 o/ Y# o) {0 w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! y) R8 J4 V9 Z/ C- R我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 M* T6 _0 [, F# V+ C. k# [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>