【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# J( |' y6 B: `' Z! UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" Z& k! E+ g7 l0 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; w  R# E- H. {& E# ^2 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  N" r& G  Q0 Q; }+ w: yThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 W  n: Q  Q; v, a, ?With the moon kissing it every night
5 S' f: x$ n1 D9 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ?) l8 v$ ]& t1 t. a6 a: WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( W+ v# ~* `- u8 a7 INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* m$ j/ q& [2 d! V2 W* ]1 EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( P; o/ o& I" EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 @" v* Z4 \6 x# d# H9 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ p1 h+ ^5 |6 w9 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" R4 s% _' D* l( I+ p8 p( H0 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ f* g; G& G+ g1 L, E" x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 l  i" x4 Z6 N: ?1 O! \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: _9 e+ e2 e1 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) @5 @- d/ r, }' Q  U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* D( P5 S6 M: I; t: ]4 |0 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- u) ?6 l/ N2 H' j: e: j, k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  I. P% \3 X+ s+ v( S<P>你无需担心</P>
+ j2 G+ w" f6 M5 b; H) W: [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 G$ ^$ V! w/ n4 q# b% B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 d$ L! ?, `' @5 @* {# g! k4 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( S" E1 E8 J; ?% v: u+ W# I4 _: Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% d& m# C, M% `  `6 |& p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- U& r; Y% ?4 n9 V' t0 |' t' s! ~# @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# f$ d6 t8 @9 o' C* m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* m4 z7 n" O% D6 X7 Z* a' y* D. t! b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 l' u* O! S$ g  y' j5 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 e4 y  N' {; x5 b& I, @8 E9 G) m, Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Z1 G/ Q$ q1 s7 C+ @: p! T; B5 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 E' n4 s/ K# A7 F# E: R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 \2 _: a' Y$ g7 o* `( d$ e' h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 @  d" `4 v8 J4 g8 \) P0 m3 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 r  z+ o0 e( N3 \% |8 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ t1 R# U: H& f1 t" L4 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% E; H# @, m& p# h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 C( Z! }" \! a6 x# \<P>I regret not dying</P>
& [! A6 \- X2 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' u- |  m3 r7 e5 a) v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 [9 |- f" ?( C6 G0 A) ]  B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' N; {; z$ m1 L6 t$ W; Y+ L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  m2 O- F, K" p* h* S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( B, ?7 |, e& h2 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 |7 v! M: p* a/ X5 w7 p- v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  ?) d: G2 L6 [6 l7 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. D" T- N$ p- Q6 N* R% c( s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) H, d  l9 w! O: B; W" M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>