【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 T- O# N; |( \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ ?9 w1 [6 h4 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 O4 V; d' |8 n6 S' j+ r! K1 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; V$ `3 k% b% eYou needn’t fear anything
$ {1 k/ z% u) wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; r- a0 y0 y' t8 {# pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* ]0 S4 G. y8 W" UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& J$ ?! k/ K- t% [6 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 J- ^- s/ _; j& \- ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ^6 n7 l. A+ ~3 P! @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 Z( D- x% U* c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 a( @" G+ K$ C" ]" |; v2 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; c0 V* o" v# \5 l9 G. P6 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 ]4 X( V3 [( I2 H8 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* D1 p* e, ~) _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ Q: j1 m+ G; g  z0 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- y  N4 d  N( s& f) Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 Q3 c) D! T( M$ K8 @# {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Q1 G# K& ?0 L( d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, N4 @  M' ?" Y1 i2 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ _# U9 ?6 A* I6 ]% Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 @7 y+ E- o4 D+ d& d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: P/ O1 w' i8 @& V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# H9 Y* v4 e+ S; o" Q. @2 q0 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; k+ h- }; A" J1 ?' {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" Q6 c# f. V5 C2 l8 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ t% @" T( f1 E- J: R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, c/ {5 A" n( @7 P  d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( `# N/ ~2 r9 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 l0 U# [. B4 H) P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; U$ K' S, ?4 q% i5 d  ^% n9 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ i; u) o+ V& Y) S) d5 \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( h# C' V, ]0 O7 W/ x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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