【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 \/ A" q8 K$ ~6 ]) N0 X% b( E1 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 Q1 H, r( _% g  ^# x3 T6 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- ^# [9 P; l7 u# C9 mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& ~3 s) P( a3 n# i* aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) R+ J$ n. X! \2 [8 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* e$ F# a% j# X$ o+ BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' Z' N+ o. S3 }. H8 vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ @  O) A# ?" A+ O3 V. M. N6 L& {; M- P3 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 w6 }; d  U* U0 g7 eI’m still filled with fear
2 F0 C9 y6 F" N0 J- LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. ^) R! n! r7 A8 U% k9 ]8 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 C% w3 x' U( |# F4 b3 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* Y: x, `3 O6 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* Z: N& C$ l$ C: ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& X3 C! ^/ C' G' z" Q, q$ R1 i/ X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  C5 f2 O) T/ w) ?# a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ e# D  d( p1 X6 [9 J) l' j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 L! z0 r& L3 S) l$ |) i8 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 Y, Y4 q: t' x1 u  U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; h$ l6 i7 U* p2 l' Q( K' w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 f- H& q1 H' p: W0 Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 K+ k3 ^7 T: Q& S3 l! C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 C7 U3 x0 K+ L! Z2 z. O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ~- ~$ Z7 F4 K, @. K1 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  W+ P+ R* h( t4 X- M( @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! B/ [  ~* j% O) c2 w4 `3 f+ g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 y# U# k, U3 \* I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 \! w  `6 H0 M5 @! @! F' E& Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  c9 i. l+ w- t! Q& A/ ]7 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; f) A7 d: ~# o+ O! s$ m$ C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% d* C! z6 O& G; J  I4 ?3 \8 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 @9 j  A" q; L& R3 z2 G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 \, r% Q8 v6 O/ J% {) E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 p0 S7 a. q5 r5 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ w4 F8 N3 h0 N, B" X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ Y' Z% w/ @3 J& L+ v- H# S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# r/ Z: y& k& q. O3 w6 w, c9 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ G" Z! K: ^) U# s0 j1 T& J/ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ?1 |- E2 x5 g* w; A) }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ n: k9 ^$ r0 m* ?3 h8 \; `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ G8 o  @8 V8 B- J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 V) `# ~8 q) M2 o& x! b& |) d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& i* k- b5 ]% q! X+ g3 k( D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>