【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ^# Z; ~3 a1 O0 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; V' q/ h5 g, ?1 C7 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- L% |3 [- M5 z1 H; k; K2 Y0 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ~% |7 }, ?" i  J7 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 b! N, X3 m. W. j9 M6 q( QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; [. F' d: x7 X7 C$ U6 c# Z% gI love you I love you with all my heart
& _$ Q$ m+ Y! c0 {( D2 WNothing can compare to my love
" [7 i+ C" H; KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 b/ a$ l; x2 X: J$ g& ^# {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ m( Z, s1 [% G$ g& D) z+ L' DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- N* j8 t& F- Q( PI regret not dying
9 ~  x* _; G) W" HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, L! O) d3 W% k) jWith such a tongue as yours,
. m1 n: B1 B$ m+ j- ^' pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 x* q# H0 U: c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 u( F8 Y9 `2 U/ E  F+ U5 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 L. J! y6 W7 J; e! O) h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 r/ W, X  ?* C' r% Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ v' L. S  P+ T" k" b4 u! \6 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 {& b+ E4 s0 N7 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 J7 ~8 z' n* \9 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ \  X, M, d$ l+ \% l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 f; ]6 Y4 ?* d* Z0 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ^  |* b- x" G; h2 V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; B2 _" u3 H9 {6 r. l# Q) [3 A2 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 _( `9 z8 o( I5 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. q5 m" ^5 a8 J7 Z/ j7 Y' l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( b  t# Y/ S! x7 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 X2 e, |' L' b8 ~7 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 y& [4 m9 U5 q9 S+ \8 ~* A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. `* F# W3 F5 \7 t% r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 v3 r# U9 C5 L5 i  t# b2 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# s# F8 M# T1 X$ Y& T1 e8 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 I- {" [' P3 d- U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 b- @( f" j+ u3 _: V# R' {) }) d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 T2 C/ l4 v8 k$ d$ a% @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 c# ^9 C' B3 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 C: h, i: K, n  Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ D/ f/ }+ o% O+ @- Y4 _& P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- c7 R2 I. ?. |9 ^$ p) |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& G) a# Z1 [0 ^- _: m: e% t5 g/ f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- ^6 [2 ]3 h1 K" l我请你剖开它

) T9 l5 J9 X% ]: f" E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ P( F8 C( E2 C$ y8 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>