【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 b6 R2 P5 I0 M歌词我附在后面。
9 P: l7 h0 N3 [8 p" B. H) M1 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: o% H( ?; z- Q; A2 M5 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 j& f( K2 U& h$ uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) i/ J2 H" v' _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 c$ C8 W. K* D+ v( y" w0 {" @The sky is happy down to its soul
! ?: Z# L7 E1 v! j' ~1 k0 I0 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" s0 G& S, a( Y! y4 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 A" x8 ]' b% W( I0 o/ K2 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 Y8 H4 N9 S6 {' vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  O0 [$ \& p& p% n' [* h4 `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ^7 m: c% J% k7 S6 C$ zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 L/ f8 s  T2 x7 r" R7 t& k/ z7 zI regret not dying
; g1 \+ J2 n) X0 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' A7 H! j! V- w( wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ a" o- F9 }9 e5 V% }0 {1 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 C# t+ ?: h; L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 L  a: w; Z6 u; V% Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 o  u) r7 k$ M1 i% S( J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: |  A' C3 s$ w) u. l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& Q2 _, g. ]/ Q' E% s' _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 H5 K3 f5 `4 q2 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 T! Z' b4 N0 _' ]/ Z0 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- h, ~' c2 H' C" s1 g: N# Q: b- @  _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" ~5 T- Y" P2 B( f$ j3 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 `6 ?2 u% }+ [4 k/ q/ ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. p/ I% N8 j; H- C. o* ^5 k6 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ]) X( w8 \% i2 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 q$ i* `9 P) `4 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 ~) d! X9 l1 M4 K" ]+ V+ K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( a$ z$ T1 g* n' j1 w& `8 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, R1 ]8 z% h" Y* [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ h. s0 v* j) [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 V' S( Y! T# ~2 h' g5 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# ?* d: K  k) g$ }, h' W- m+ L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  L& i6 |0 _% N- Q8 |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( J% w, \+ L3 t! ?! ^$ `$ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. b* u) o9 K; D/ }0 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) _" x& f  x9 c9 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ j  Z6 X/ }# [8 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* g( a5 k  V3 ^* U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- I1 \# f. u5 ~* D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 j( `$ O: x9 e' u3 \+ Y  X# l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ^- M) L. {6 K/ M5 M8 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
" g3 R# t! q/ H- _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 p# r5 `2 N: V1 _  v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 i1 Y# ^! x7 f5 \. O. q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* H6 s3 B: j; |! x" U2 v1 m- [0 r: ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  H; W  B9 P& U, G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, @* O7 R0 B: z$ O! ^( s- [( N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" Q) B$ x) U+ h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& z& G: h" T' t" p( {$ {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: a( k! U* }) f! I9 t. d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 i# H, @+ q- s/ J8 }5 x/ @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 k6 O, Y- P4 u8 f: n我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>