【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& }3 Y+ o8 N0 @0 D9 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 a7 G1 f" ?. YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' k1 @: j4 i2 O: e2 j% BWith the moon kissing it every night
: }- {, V) C# L, wSeeing the sky content with its love
3 @% Y( x3 a( o" |) uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& Q  o0 C& T* B( {I love you I love you with all my heart
4 M" @$ P7 C* j+ K& |+ h) KNothing can compare to my love
3 `% m" @. k) {  P4 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 m; `: W3 Y# M3 C) `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% s2 ^1 R" o* }/ w6 N$ m; kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" ~& A) u; x5 m+ Y2 ^; NI’m still filled with fear
, \* c  n. Q; a' A, wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* U, g9 i  Q: v( y8 x6 Z* y7 g' ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" p+ F2 t2 s3 P- o0 N1 j& ?  y+ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' O+ f% ~& R4 b+ \- m" A' ^" G9 u8 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 P, w0 u" J8 i  p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' J( m, X8 V) z8 y1 N6 D% s; H  ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 D# t; ?) G6 H+ E9 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 i% `. W$ T& r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 R/ _/ ^( a' S; R; k9 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; F/ n6 S: `: k! o: O. G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& ~, |. G, w5 i& a$ k; z- e8 _0 E  T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! O2 }; ^1 l! N$ u0 M, f1 Q& N) h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Z2 F' E1 _1 Z4 O- Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 s8 U& c- H2 I9 y. v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 f* q, i/ D, a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! c  B4 y1 E: p, g. W. @/ _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& t( x! b+ B. `9 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& R) }+ M4 a, d* p! t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 U7 H3 u3 ^, u5 m# W% V- r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! Z. ?1 v1 V  m! T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ]5 p3 C5 T& C  I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ S, i0 ~* {) r- @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, J. j8 B% n$ @" @& o7 o+ J' i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' E* t. m. C. E. X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" H! Q, }" [9 y$ k8 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 B2 x( m1 H# |3 h! W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 L! N/ T! n; u& z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; i2 V* l' m# F' a2 b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ H) K- N" ^: {* J, k9 S) n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 Q  h2 ]( Z6 ]0 O& a1 c- |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 _' n0 A7 W: G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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. S2 k3 \, E* H' a1 l) p6 T3 D* T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 C, F# i) C: R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>