【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# }/ O& E. B- Z+ a+ D# m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 d- _% u( k+ W% E0 c+ U+ _% }4 K( n! gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' k" t# E3 \  ~6 N! b5 D1 C& ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ `! `" K6 x/ p. f' y( xWith the moon kissing it every night
- x0 z3 z: k8 y% dSeeing the sky content with its love
4 n2 b- Y# l* @5 U0 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 L" q; M" R9 W/ I% f2 Y* gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 A: r$ J1 L9 ]: C; PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) H6 H6 P, B+ P: n9 MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( U2 B, w# L( |8 w6 q! g1 z) ~I want so much to see inside your heart
4 F. Q" t+ T0 N# g* o0 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 L) Z; U; P( f2 DWith such a tongue as yours,
: R8 K. w9 h4 g# K$ SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  J. X9 q8 L# ?. N, CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 @; q0 z8 S  `* S* g, kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( {# O+ Z: Y, m3 f( l6 g1 }+ y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 s: k. c, T* o& c# b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# H5 r1 q( |- G  A( R( l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ [2 [& J3 C0 X1 D7 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 g& A% a& D( W/ D5 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% X' B6 t7 k7 W5 w; Z4 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 D4 R% [' f2 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, ^, u' p+ L, t# D1 h( Z2 _1 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* Q( n6 w  T6 \8 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' M& d, h! X) O& B% {0 M; K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 V# g. b- E6 E) s7 m! C, i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: n6 }6 M; l# R' O( u) ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: f+ |9 W- g5 [+ h8 c# o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 f' l' w8 n- C; j  H7 E) L; b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P1 @+ ~2 X! A' L3 S/ E+ |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% X! a% U4 b" M* _; ^: ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 R6 |# f- d! y" _6 ?5 M$ E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) w( U& b1 I) Q2 @( Y9 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 z5 y' c+ z  T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: Y( S/ |6 _9 g, k2 r. B: P  I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. M- n4 c" H) R7 y3 V- k: y+ U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 J* U8 j) c5 u) j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 S  f2 V( v" x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 C" g7 P: ?  n  `5 C9 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! _1 G/ C5 o6 {8 I' H9 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ x. E9 L! C& a" ~" V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>