【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 c! O. j% J8 c& j5 x% SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( }: B8 u5 a2 t+ A3 C# i$ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 {  W& r+ g2 h! IThe sky is happy down to its soul
" p; x+ H; D. D" W# QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) m$ G/ H7 U3 p5 Y; c* jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  m( l% Y7 ^$ y6 _Nothing can compare to my love
* J8 {  B1 Q4 T( [! Y' YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; _( k, |! C: U5 r7 {! N; vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, T5 Z; C8 d& H4 uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ x3 }1 q' g& pI regret not dying
, z8 n! c, l0 V- L3 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# n& Z; T- `0 C* l( c- N$ ]) U6 X$ ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: x* }1 S8 @" [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 P" C$ X6 T9 u. e7 ]5 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; p6 r9 v0 r  \  Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& A4 Z5 H  F0 {) e; m, o0 ~5 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# g/ r6 Y8 z0 B' J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. v- p! _0 X1 K5 t1 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. u; r. I0 K7 e- S. A/ a: e+ G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 w5 b+ L$ I# m* o2 o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ S" U+ d  _" T<P>你无需担心</P>
  n! e0 P* O7 ~7 i" f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( Q) ~2 ^: h% M, V/ {4 \3 E9 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* ?, \7 ~" _* e9 V9 v2 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) W+ P' b7 [/ D. ]- Z* w( K" L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ^/ ]; y/ w" y3 L$ F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' x" n! O- z8 `4 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 w. t( z/ |# Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; R, K! n3 u0 N6 |5 L) k# c; e3 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, k8 R2 Q, s5 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( M/ s7 F) O6 s# @" Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; M2 }' ?# |: |1 k8 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, S, f6 V9 g# c# B; O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* i. V: G" t5 U9 K) B% a& I# T2 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' O1 K, o% y* L, b<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 J0 @* D- q1 W. u' C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ R/ F4 D: E9 G% V. [9 ^, Z* ^% N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ g8 Y9 v- Q" s7 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ U* r* ^% A% \& J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: d8 T# i! H" k+ a7 R+ [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" @& K$ w8 Z9 g3 D/ | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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