【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 D( S) N1 o/ ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 M- A: O$ k' fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ]& s6 ]' e3 }2 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 \1 `" ^2 U/ g. D8 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 O2 o, i! `* F/ v# N5 I) O( e# [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% E7 M# s/ X! f0 ^1 E# rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 V2 E5 f9 B5 |9 Z! QYou needn’t fear anything
: w8 v2 y! o; w: d9 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, }9 F7 p3 i4 D, u8 L# hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- G. Q5 @- K% p, eI love you I love you with all my heart
9 ?! Y4 {1 D! q/ a! tNothing can compare to my love
* G. {9 N0 @. n7 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: q- w6 ]# z( MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 Q) F$ [6 Y$ t2 Z0 k$ |/ bI want so much to see inside your heart
: W/ x# {% M( j: oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ?* B$ C# L. HI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 d2 Y2 F3 ?# `8 c; wI regret not dying
4 d9 b( T9 d- r6 ]. Y( [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 m/ L+ _+ N1 I  W6 m5 E0 N# YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% c" [3 h" l6 ]2 l0 _, Z: r6 t# t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 `$ A3 O1 q+ Y0 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 s+ j& v  _5 a! U! k: a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ g0 U4 g( c+ [; n# M4 Q! |: N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  ?0 _/ w& t  h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ Q# O+ X/ |5 x2 }: {" l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" X& d3 V! S  ]' ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% D, ^  ]( j$ y; G8 O& f4 @/ G, ~6 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 [" C! u* P+ h) k3 i7 u- C/ {8 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 C* M" W4 ]  J% y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 c% D7 E5 A! g$ f2 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ ]$ h6 K7 W+ R, y: G/ ?+ E9 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# K# m9 w- \. ^+ |. \3 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 c: [3 |' j; m/ A, e8 C9 x: Z- Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) w9 H0 n- W# n4 R- \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# _: U1 z9 n! Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" v! u! k7 e$ ?, ]3 W# Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& a& l( `) X% \; C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, a. n& {) I" R& G2 r/ f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: r  t( F2 p$ P4 Y2 @, ]6 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 a1 {; p, u6 f/ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  }( {- L  _2 f8 M! V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ W- Y! k" d9 J4 \' P- N8 A$ A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 G7 S, `2 g4 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; C: N5 N3 z: A: e; a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  v1 e( s2 o& e8 n7 ^4 Z# h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" y6 C5 a" j  K! E/ j" z4 u" C& v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 d5 S1 [$ n9 t  k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 }4 c( R$ p" u( m# @% N) T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: i* B& }) x" f+ g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>