【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! }& c6 J6 `# ~- W1 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' @& B! c0 W4 y: e; G+ AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 q" u* w0 o- L, ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" T) |& C8 o; U! IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ h$ }2 W* q3 c0 r* h- }- c- }9 j% cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& r2 Z* h% Y! G0 j1 y, F6 f$ \0 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 X. E- [$ W& O: c3 ^5 t1 }You needn’t fear anything
! U! W8 U1 ]! M3 n5 o) rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) i4 ~$ y5 ^1 J" u) o7 _/ jI really want to know just how much you love me
+ F! [/ f8 }8 i/ rI love you I love you with all my heart
: z; u8 y) [3 x) sNothing can compare to my love
4 Z! |# o5 P$ d9 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* R( W( y' Y5 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 {/ B- ]& T. mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 o. O0 q' e  }9 D8 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( N) `, t. e! v4 k2 q8 bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 _# u8 k3 L  s$ e1 `& d2 v* \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; ?/ ^1 S' e7 j" y- t6 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" R' O% v/ @+ \5 x- q- g. J; W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% ^! Y. K+ ]* X& {7 r9 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- |) x) F  U% t- v. ^+ S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 g3 r# M. s' M/ B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. t2 C) w* A/ s) f* b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 s* v; E. g, U8 b4 _' E8 h, ^! p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! O# O. H1 U% \7 p) X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 ]2 y4 R2 \( d3 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! F' I' K* l( x1 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ V/ f3 `5 J9 m( K; a. |3 ~3 D6 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ s% ?" L* g9 |& _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 p+ F3 Q; [3 u+ ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- _2 u& I; G4 C# S& f1 t; {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" j8 D6 x0 `- M, B6 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 `: C* p, h4 D& D7 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ b+ j4 {# L: h1 W+ l4 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. q3 x1 \" }, s0 w( M; D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 C* I% H5 _: V: c2 |" K. g% ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ u% ~$ n$ I" ]3 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ {0 e4 h+ ]+ S! s' x/ E, ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 b7 a3 b% A/ B' F3 }1 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' x! M) V9 |7 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; H7 Q9 z$ ^+ J- X, a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ K& S2 m9 ~7 p; Q4 n. N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( T; Q. I6 F) v# f" @* v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 r6 F- Q3 ?9 ]$ d2 }. }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. r9 a4 s$ I  k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% L0 j7 c0 Y: F5 k3 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 {" ?9 z; W' L9 p) l2 A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>