【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 b8 \+ p' e* C% z! T+ _, nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' i9 N7 T7 _7 I. [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 w  @3 t7 H& p; Z" X# IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( _. u/ A8 {( r) s- hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- h6 J% u( \; l) n. P/ ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: n& F! D8 w; s0 a8 {6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ i- f* e0 o$ C1 i+ d7 ]! M' Z4 iI want so much to see inside your heart
( e- f2 J$ ^7 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! G% K) }; ~# X2 l$ e6 G1 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: \6 }1 K" A$ g7 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 o0 Y$ ^# T4 P% f/ TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 s: G8 W3 N8 W  T) }- o+ g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 E! A- Q5 P! V/ X! a1 S8 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 n4 N. V" ]- f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. n5 U- |+ k# f1 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 P1 _7 c2 W+ l/ X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, s' p. y3 c4 J0 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. n( R- H$ A' \8 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% K) s5 `5 d3 B) Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ w- U) [9 [- {* l: h1 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, R% ~. w. M. h- u, c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  \" r# Y% x/ I* k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ m2 ]5 \* |8 R! R' I4 [! b$ J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' Z2 [. g8 ^6 W9 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ x3 n- d4 n) b. ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) t, ?4 V! c# Y) ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; x4 ?2 E# [5 O+ R  j: L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* N1 }7 i" X# k* h# G" U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! d1 k& [& G$ t3 {7 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Z& U" @. K* v  G: k5 ~+ N& j) T6 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; n$ {- @8 I+ O  V3 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% W- R0 h6 n1 d/ ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' T- O- A. x# g) j& Z3 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 q+ R5 W, K* G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 K8 h- \4 S5 A# D3 M( h  R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* ~9 _9 X0 U7 s' @; H4 g6 p我请你剖开它

" D! {- k8 |4 }7 a; ~* s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 r7 ?% M6 i% E. d  \+ H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>