【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% f5 A1 U) G8 j歌词我附在后面。
& p$ g0 W, `. K6 X: nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 z- i5 Q! b4 n7 {, j, yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( T- i1 k3 ]3 T, YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 r; g9 F/ t2 J  v- pThe sky is happy down to its soul
- O7 f6 V7 Z9 T1 y; E& R/ J( _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ i2 |/ p4 t6 j" v5 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 H) ^- S  e0 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 v4 T5 Y# Q/ LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 J, W8 F( a! R: M& f$ ?9 PNothing can compare to my love
& N! R0 ]6 u7 s) u* j# wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 q: D2 M8 \/ J0 ^% d! n. |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  o6 t: V+ P4 WI want so much to see inside your heart
/ Y# p2 A! K$ G+ G0 X# a( UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" n+ F3 M: ]+ i# \$ W+ W/ M$ wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ m1 S, A5 h1 m4 nI regret not dying
; u2 B- W* M! C, DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 y# b* z. w6 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ A$ I0 P4 n7 `( U; ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( L, \& {) T9 P- d  C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) D2 b5 o5 R( G+ T5 z/ z4 w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- {+ }0 l# r9 R1 ~0 v# k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" Y; k7 j! V2 ]1 U) x) q" @4 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 P7 D; J+ b/ D" N; z/ m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) B  q, u  q: f  g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" h. @5 m/ ~' @  N  ^2 Y; p& v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! n% \5 U4 W0 D4 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 O% G% Z8 A4 b" Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' F- g+ H7 y. K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 @5 f4 s  h! [; z6 L( y! y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& K5 G) ]: K' X9 U7 }9 g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% U6 T+ m! ?+ P! A% J8 \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: z$ Z9 p+ B0 B! y; f* J. X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, t1 T* V3 t9 {: |2 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 O% {$ X  x( z6 `4 ^. }: k! ?  s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 N) i% F) h, F: S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 X" y7 m$ W) F4 e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ f% }6 f7 k2 v$ O' `) U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" c* N; [" j3 ]9 I5 ~5 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* Y0 c0 F1 e9 d7 u2 W8 t9 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! `1 X* v7 `6 m! C; c. y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 U0 Q5 X7 X% b9 A( k) Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. K) a% L9 x/ T, {2 `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ ^& t% W' _. A6 @. x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- p* f3 M% V7 L& ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 b/ ^7 x/ h! [# ^' ]6 }* b4 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  \& Z3 F) R$ f/ l; \, r5 ?- p6 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. M7 R( X, x" |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: d. Q' {1 v0 W# L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ v2 y: C7 m  j$ {$ H- S' l' J4 o" d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 E% ?7 h7 X7 [  t2 a* H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 [8 g/ z9 A* u5 q# n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 l# j" t0 z8 z, ^. o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>