【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

+ K4 m& f# x% G& t9 f<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>

3 R  T$ V4 }9 q4 u
歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) M* @" q* A2 k6 o  QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% P" V; Q9 x% W( W1 H( f0 Q; NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 d/ [* g. j, _$ qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 [1 `2 r# Y7 C: l, WYou needn’t fear anything
0 x6 z, y: e( |( G" S7 v  W6 v% ~7 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  E! l) v& J7 K* O1 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 V! n; h( l( H0 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ d0 a6 e+ N. H7 _" }" q, p* G/ UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% p, o+ t0 K$ g$ u- nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- U% s' @' U6 w7 s% uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 m7 U7 B  X7 E7 l7 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! J/ g/ a+ L+ ]" G% r! s7 I
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 l* ~. l, C1 T) b, }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 G! F0 H& m) c0 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  K% G" |+ T+ a- e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 q' g% J' R6 B1 c& n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& i( a% F2 G: ~& S) J  l, F* C: J$ J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# X; c: u) N/ x! G8 [% p$ z<P>你无需担心</P>
8 _( @! }+ m, A6 b* n, d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 b' Z* \) e9 ?+ a/ Q# ~! k4 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ l3 p( b/ i# Y# Z- B" ?- t$ U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; e; T, y3 m6 [' \, |* X4 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ e: c" e8 K  F- `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 S* s: n$ \1 t6 X1 `# `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ }4 Z: O+ P0 L' {& f, {% s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 A1 Q7 t/ k4 ?6 W4 I1 C/ o& @1 ?# i6 I' N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  y& O( W' V0 v; n: l* ?  R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 f- ?1 f0 }6 \( w. r! M+ i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 |( P/ S" s& t. Y, o4 h, @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; r) @9 O5 G; f3 t8 l3 ^4 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; U1 n( D6 A5 Y5 I, I9 _( g1 m  K! o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" O6 w9 @' [8 ]! X7 ~7 W  t+ S6 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
' z2 _$ \- F0 g8 _  o; \( X9 _4 i# J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 p. Z/ T4 m3 |! Y4 m1 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& O* q. X+ f, ?1 ]4 X/ P9 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! n! j3 J" s4 }& H% z9 t# m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( C2 ]( I- m$ H2 O$ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 G$ ?. K! L% e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 g+ Z. S* u& z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 P; B" q* u3 R, I" Y9 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 w* r7 Y- N+ L0 ^' A1 y% p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
* s# J* @. u$ D# j9 U9 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>