【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% D# w2 X  J! V# t. a  R+ Q1 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: E/ _( X' @# N5 G( eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) a4 [9 W7 d4 D5 U3 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ ^! ~$ X( Y5 }4 S& `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 J" q# A8 u, x, j' ~, s7 b4 XEvery other word you utter is love
& `3 E2 f, C8 c0 U( mI really want to know just how much you love me
7 Z) F0 o7 i( M8 _) [3 yI love you I love you with all my heart
8 e+ p; @+ c: [! G9 z$ _# Q' `7 V% qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' j$ s2 t6 R0 s2 n: F; pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) o! h3 d0 N5 m' K3 N% G" kI want so much to see inside your heart
' x) R& P2 u+ t  ^0 o/ U( ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, H& t6 y4 ]% V* H1 RI’m still filled with fear
$ o8 w' R8 e; SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. ?& i) w( R7 F  G- }- A# HI regret not dying
0 ]. z; k/ Q$ f  ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! a# P3 D7 ^$ g, P7 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( r. F& H: J- J- i! _9 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. Z9 A4 M0 t3 X6 t, Q% u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- L  z# F& L0 x' D1 r6 m. w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* X7 ?1 k; b9 z) B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 B% b# D% X/ W6 c8 a, y% `; S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 H6 ?+ f$ ]$ y) Z4 r% {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% [$ I% Z  T/ q+ \' J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- r8 W3 C0 D, t2 p: Y4 Z! y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 W$ X5 _; |1 {! ]% ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 q+ B: ?2 P9 @# e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 ?  i- a7 M/ H1 ]! i/ q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 \* f' p) y& h2 K$ K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 S7 E6 j' S, N1 ^- j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  `7 e9 U1 {4 m7 v* [  ?" V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# O# a* g) M, O6 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 c: Y# x  ?. X. z/ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& K7 n0 F2 G3 i1 t) R" E8 u% l+ O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  C' `9 m, b* ~& u4 `% [& r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ^6 d+ s4 m$ o) L* u4 v4 d/ U! K, X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  q) j( p% b0 k& q, c' W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 j$ y  L# I! e, ]. U1 h" |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 ?7 O6 U1 r1 n3 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ x6 c) o# N; c$ }% @& O4 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 Y, T( A" P; m- @) a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* X: d7 \( e- g7 x" m5 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 H; {1 o  j. h. ?$ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>