【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, S7 A2 F# K4 f0 s5 C歌词我附在后面。
) N6 W- l6 ]) j1 e0 G4 T+ `% P  HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. j- a7 i  @2 m2 i6 h6 u; IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% |* u0 z9 t% t' GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 Y/ f' P% X* R* P7 Y9 ASeeing the sky content with its love
. e- B' b9 u( X/ E4 P* ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# y- m. a& k) l5 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, s) Q! Q" l4 J4 M7 J. mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% K. X: N% t& f( l4 d  A) LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, T- g4 X0 J9 B% D( d0 |2 X8 PI want so much to see inside your heart
6 x4 n1 g9 t/ }& Q3 `& y3 `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# u) B8 _2 q4 H, dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. L; D6 l. |2 _4 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. f, [' b/ |. N  fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- V  C8 `. r' z5 O+ `* ]; cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 j3 c$ m' |, c; g0 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 e! r  B9 u4 S# a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 d% y( O6 z! ?5 `! U# ?  E' G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 E- g$ s7 u& c9 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- G! d( i  O8 t! N# [( Q! A  }" t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( w; I+ g' `" ?/ P4 @, k/ N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ V3 C3 G6 K$ D2 V3 r  V) g. d! n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% n! f, _  E; ^5 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 ?' @/ D( O5 u2 \) K% w, S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ O* J9 W0 Z3 m" S3 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ W! Q/ m& b) M6 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% m0 D: _. |2 R* O( v% o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# k: B" ]2 o' L% m1 \) s8 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 @% s* U9 X/ ]; [  e5 T! l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- H" m, z, E( \# k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* {8 [( [) I2 ]! A. F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) g1 P# d" u& E: q- c" d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ h5 H" i1 }# e0 |& X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, K5 o. P2 ]( B7 P( T1 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' z  H/ {8 e8 H2 l# f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" A( T$ U6 f0 V( x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 D; Y+ y1 n5 z1 p' B5 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: P5 u* T. o% U9 X  t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; Q" j4 d2 o! h6 R- z* V5 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 e0 [. y( v, v: ^) g我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>