【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& N" O# S8 d9 Q- mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( u; t! N" M2 c2 b4 u, ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' p; e$ m0 l# n0 ^3 l9 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 g# u; g8 v/ `! t' Y- {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 @0 m& ]" S4 S" N+ p0 sYou needn’t fear anything
2 S) a3 k. R7 z) @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( _6 H$ `. k3 z% O8 R6 G6 {Every other word you utter is love
  J: ]2 x' I7 y! ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, n" \4 M7 k0 A4 p0 v& H3 LNothing can compare to my love
- J8 G% H4 y9 k4 p- DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 }( ]' m8 G8 p  aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- M+ s' s! t2 O4 RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 B- @* n9 m* G  W8 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: B, l1 z& f- O7 @% W  ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 z( Q; C" L* v9 v% E6 ~7 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ O9 u- c9 Z; F4 b( `- g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' T+ i; \9 a% [1 V/ A- E# _& s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ M$ e3 O$ N9 N, ~8 k$ y: L0 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  _) l0 u/ U9 F+ n- N- a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! k1 `: {" J. e5 g: s, z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ ~, t  |; M. Q! v3 }- D  c: n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; u7 }4 p3 D6 g# f0 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" t: C, q0 r* ~& q1 o! q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& J4 i, r* r" F4 E* j- T: I3 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  K2 n: _4 Q0 X/ X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 @% A, L6 G, d3 V( k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 a8 h. S/ f# G' x3 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 N) z& g3 ~6 D3 i6 E/ x2 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, W6 L9 A5 B  h2 e- o6 c# ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" n  c# y0 g% _5 w, h, x# e+ X2 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ w9 R* [$ I3 g$ S% V! ?$ C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! G' Q  ]4 M0 n) @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* e; U& L) o/ a3 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, q% Y4 j: P. J4 S4 D, r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ D, m6 Y: ^) L! ^7 d+ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. x7 x+ x4 W) ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ N( z, U: S' a0 M) C( y5 O0 E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- T8 V3 ?% F* `1 B3 Z! t  N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 j; O% M9 A, G4 A* r4 g  N+ m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 b% q; |0 ?! h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* _' _- o! q# y( @& h( l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>