【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& y* @8 z0 ?7 Z# E  S# s" |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 J" k1 Y+ ~# k* E4 [/ {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 E4 T: U. V$ M8 o8 u0 _The sky is happy down to its soul
- Z9 a5 t4 b5 M- A/ `, {" ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 P' D% V6 R# ~! REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 X. c8 {( c: c2 INothing can compare to my love
1 V9 i0 o% W" f$ a7 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 K1 |. u* o6 m  ]! jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! P5 I2 z5 O8 ~3 ?& oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 G2 z- L9 U3 {* C' T" l+ ~# F% X* IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 x% }# h; v5 e- XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, [/ X. W& V4 R9 ^2 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 Z7 ]4 `" @) b$ F; |$ ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' z1 ]4 |& J. b" ?- M  Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 I9 U1 y; z2 r. V' ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  ~% {; ?: p% ?* K" E; u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. x8 W2 J7 ~. r, S, V4 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, X7 ]. J1 p- @. i" C0 E% g4 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( b9 F, l2 W$ v) M* ]) y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! I; S' o" V8 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ ~+ A, l9 e* Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' m+ X& m; V8 _- A: y! e+ J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 |4 p- W$ k% c& M8 F+ M, m1 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 t! k* o  d: E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& t: M4 q% t& r+ ?; Q" R3 b: ]8 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) J2 p: o- S+ v- H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ j) f/ o3 k0 v! s, j2 Q# q. f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 x- F$ K8 c9 T! W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 e" ?7 j6 A# ~# p& J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 f2 w' \4 Y3 Z- l8 n& o; f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 D$ u! T; t7 D5 f) W' L! M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) Z  N# T/ \& v4 d+ L7 j& n: ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- }$ C3 c. Z  V: `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  i7 ~) v2 g" p% P* o/ n<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 g  I/ o6 r3 }6 v; [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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7 {- N+ e6 Y4 o! H! Q5 S' h) K8 E4 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! n9 d0 `) M& J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ X; J0 O0 S& W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: t2 r6 P8 z6 f" o6 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 C+ s8 E5 F7 e0 S  @$ j& h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 X. M0 i! ~* o* H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% o. c9 ]: B/ R4 U! [我请你剖开它

  B( e$ P6 V- ?" C% G+ z1 e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>