【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. K% M1 r) t- R/ g9 T* {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  c5 q# _; H) h: ?! ^& U( NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# m4 O, H0 r% t0 H4 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 e, F% D/ [0 F/ ?# ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 d1 Y) ?' v  o& ?1 A! \Seeing the sky content with its love
1 {' f! m! D. ?7 k% VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 p% I" S3 f) n) Z: gYou needn’t fear anything
# v5 N$ R. w4 [$ t$ cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 O( t* {  t. D% z8 `. J% QI really want to know just how much you love me
  W1 l% [; J- f7 PI love you I love you with all my heart
' W- Q( d: }: u- [; f6 PNothing can compare to my love
$ j1 f9 J% ]7 t$ kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  S3 [8 ?+ j. a* S/ ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  s" m  |8 n( f! MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 `5 C6 s% m9 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ u0 r5 u& ^" u; O( P% S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 `" q* F! R/ A$ q  |8 n. H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 W! m+ a2 F/ E+ `) V" G! y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 I$ [8 `6 I. B3 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ D# R4 ?: f- a: C/ e1 M9 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# d% u! k, Y3 a0 T4 O9 ?  ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  V9 I, J( p% N# o, j$ A  @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* T2 B% ]# u* S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. e/ b/ A- k1 I, |0 y. N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( E2 c' x& B; a7 I& Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" S! ?9 T$ v+ j: N  J: W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) ^  Z. X1 ~0 E' o& H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ C* [0 b! {; l; s8 K2 _" T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! `4 U: A# A+ K9 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 G+ E3 `/ K/ \9 h9 y( }9 m& Y' A/ v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ t8 N) h/ K# _9 h* g0 D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* q9 e% |; `" |3 j3 R1 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ^; e0 a: F# C. E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 Y- u. F4 W! M) @% A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 ^# J* A9 ?+ F+ a* M, c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- a6 U" i: Y7 q. b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" E5 [8 `; H  W1 e/ B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ I$ u' u, z0 T; K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' R* ]* j3 v/ T' O( [4 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, |; n4 t0 [2 a! P& ^/ n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ @% d. F- J; ^' t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& \" o% @% h1 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ E# f: S. b1 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" K! j0 L, S; w我请你剖开它

5 v* D9 W- ]. o/ |& U6 i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, l6 H& {2 i6 L) G! `2 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>