【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 b/ e/ O% @3 F( R( m9 x9 A5 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 ~+ Q6 K) }/ d1 h+ Q, _, A: o8 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- m6 C7 w: y$ d; R$ {  @6 AWith the moon kissing it every night
) ]+ k2 ]2 r$ ^1 g) i4 ?7 K9 KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" E, g, t) ?. fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 a! J, X: {4 ~# ]4 m$ tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 [% m; P3 f) L3 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' m! X& h9 G( `  [9 V7 z+ ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. w/ l1 {8 k/ @1 @! rI’m still filled with fear
& {( h& I" n+ I/ V, _3 d5 [& NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 s! ~/ c) Y  ?  B7 ]$ o, R3 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# q, H& F% Q5 UWith such a tongue as yours,
! B/ _7 w) z0 P2 r4 A% U) l, k1 Z' AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! b& F9 R. _# C& d" C0 ]" ]9 |* KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 s( D; o+ e' lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& b7 j" J4 B* P- x  y! x6 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 _7 W2 c: w- [7 h& S9 W8 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# v2 W/ y( D( g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' ?9 b( x" b# }& Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% C, G3 y( J/ Y9 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 a5 v1 {( E' a2 Q( B7 g  }# [  A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 Z2 `) g+ C8 n' O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. X$ ?5 Z1 }) C: L) @/ ~1 F$ f2 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ m9 w/ \" a4 n8 U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 T% e6 v' d# i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ v) d6 m4 |% _4 ?9 L2 K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 a9 e0 d! S& S- w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: E, k# y2 ?8 N1 s9 H% k& L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( z  }" A8 Q" q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- h& p) ~! a" v# G% T/ @3 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 Z, ]" E% z( [8 z2 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 n+ a# _, M2 n7 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( ^5 j. D, e) \; L) d  x" E8 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& F& N" a8 E; k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& B& F2 L* @3 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 h! J7 [4 ]) M$ `+ l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 X6 ^+ U9 C0 L2 {) W& @$ @( q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) j) a* \# n6 E) E5 h5 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* q. a! |2 k4 H+ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" n  W" \; n: |* @& k6 s* w我请你剖开它

/ |5 x, ?% {. r3 V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% @9 S# i5 f3 L2 M+ y  l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>