【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) c& v& b- T3 [3 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 [$ M% s& ]! Q9 y+ V! XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! [1 Y# d% ^) J' Y. dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 w7 M* l; J& h7 b- c* I5 I2 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 _. w% @* k- e; T% t9 S( }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 `+ r- e6 @( }6 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 J; N( r5 }3 AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ N* F/ [$ {* h! d' rWith such a tongue as yours,
4 ~$ ~/ L& w# M4 y6 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! L' v9 S5 t- N3 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 p- O8 N& T$ b; N, g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% e, `$ p( b$ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: \. Q! I( }7 g& P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& p2 |2 C+ y6 ~' Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# C$ G$ ^" R. i# K( q: O9 z% @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 y- V. A/ N7 Z. F8 D' c7 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! b6 |" r6 r3 w4 c) b2 T' t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ H4 e+ s, g! Q, F5 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# P+ a9 ]3 ?( g, A2 Z7 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& F% f' n* o( B  h8 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" U' y" F7 R) u4 Y, m9 m7 M. j" M5 R: }) J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 L" |+ T5 c2 a3 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( y8 H, f5 m, b- g) n- Q* \, }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 ], H4 o- x+ o5 k# B7 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# P" |: \! l3 E, l+ _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  x( _, y4 V0 N, w: P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 r( {4 k0 X# u- @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ @  @+ t7 X+ g+ ~" J; s$ ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ ^* ^! a; h1 I+ m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 F; I3 `7 \# M( L/ O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ r/ @: c* h4 w+ ]) `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>