【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& h& l8 I! C0 z1 K/ i歌词我附在后面。
4 n9 y$ s# V) ?* p9 ^* a0 x5 Y& f% rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ r9 J0 W& [1 y" `* D2 YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 u9 ^9 p7 T9 D; d# W9 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& o9 r; |! Z, O' K; ^/ o0 M2 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% k+ u0 z( \) o& \6 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ V9 Q) n# u6 c0 [8 tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 |, D9 }; X/ ]9 ^, u$ @- HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" c8 j0 b- y" A: J9 }- t; FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 w  x) P: w% a( J$ f" o! F& dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 o7 d* m4 N0 R" RI’m still filled with fear
1 P/ w- j+ {- \: i; q: S; a; K; QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  t/ S; o1 s( B, dI regret not dying
* t; R/ V1 H; z3 ?0 |, ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* B" y- W% y! V3 P9 R- X& b) \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- d, p+ u. D1 C3 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ n6 A/ D5 u9 ?0 M2 X) J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: B, u2 ~7 u4 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 t; e, l$ C0 V. s7 p/ N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 k9 Y3 I' q8 I+ c8 z0 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; N% N1 |2 c4 v% ]0 S  }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 ?8 L& b" [- R) y/ B1 I, j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& k5 `' X. h1 b# U7 g0 b/ \6 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 S2 G$ M- f5 L; \5 U! S2 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* |% e4 V4 Q, a, |! @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 _, ?# A- P9 _8 x) p5 K% Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: O1 V% a+ _: I" D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 R+ v! l+ F" y0 U( I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 c0 R4 @0 Y' y; X% f8 j* `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 {5 @. U' F! F/ [. E- y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( I' P" ~5 O5 r5 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 S$ P6 O* s  h" U, v& e# _! U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 l# }) d, y) a4 X, u' c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 }! K4 e& j8 R$ x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* ~$ I" |. z) M5 q8 M. _3 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- l( B1 ]2 A. ~5 Y1 M% B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( a. l, M' N' Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 j! B7 n+ S! z" W2 O* N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& ^, `/ N% q1 z& ~: r! Z1 C* c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 }9 x5 ~" k0 C5 U% }8 b, M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) l- b2 g( w& `9 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 c  |. B3 Q7 k% p; ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ I5 `2 S/ c( @. k; `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' V" f( q) `% k  f! R0 C5 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" V- |5 m. h0 }' o) h+ u' _, j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 z! u8 U' h" G, j1 ?, C* J4 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' ~+ O1 c6 O* p7 G3 n6 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* ^3 g) _% T& f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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  ]8 R, ~& ?, Z6 }0 M' {1 ]/ g! \2 x3 N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ O7 _" d6 m3 I/ o/ x" h8 R/ f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>