【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ e3 L0 ~" z/ c& P$ d  ~* ?3 l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! A3 C2 N) d, ]% b4 K8 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
# o1 u' d* T) v* i! c' m5 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 }3 W/ V, G" y5 Z7 J  x+ b) kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 N' P/ L: l0 i7 E* [The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  U% P$ k  K1 |4 j9 PSeeing the sky content with its love
6 J3 i2 A+ S: T; y2 ^2 Q" G9 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 q- k' n0 G# |" J4 m+ qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- P  Y; }+ C9 u. g% T: g  J$ ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) f* p3 L' y$ {' M, n" m& ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ o5 S( k: V; F' bI want so much to see inside your heart
9 g* d6 J& p5 x8 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ~3 L9 W- }- w, e6 B0 M$ {I’m still filled with fear
" J% U' S& G0 u5 d5 X, |* R3 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ P0 N7 p5 c" U9 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. i) l1 ~, D. w, V5 s2 z; HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 m7 c* y7 }/ e0 S' [# d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* o1 q% i: c6 ?" K( n) H+ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: E% x0 B- M& V' x( b' o* r# c! z) }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( N2 T: i$ z5 a& i& m  \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& M) R! J! `4 s: I, b2 V1 ~4 u% t) c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ W) O+ u: o: r8 A; C7 d/ ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# j! f+ [3 m9 V! X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 w% J5 I: O3 p- |; D! }& Q0 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& [- u7 y+ y3 D; e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' F: E; ]# x8 H' u+ [: J, I<P>你无需担心</P>
% S! F: G! s7 `5 k0 i/ G) ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 }/ @" R* h3 u+ a* h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 I; P# k( r; E) n3 J. o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  O1 N# n! s6 d1 j2 M4 t5 ^4 Z0 E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ \8 y: z: K' t- F1 v1 M9 i! k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 r* t$ [: c$ s/ Z6 h; S7 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 P, x0 [* j! x" l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 b( f& ?6 [8 h2 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ s: b1 g, W! u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. F9 W! S% a# m' V& m6 i8 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* [& W& g3 Z* Q' m# n9 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 w) D* X! W, u" B) d- L' S<P>I regret not dying</P>
; z: _) ^& n5 d9 T: r9 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ m) \4 q7 M, N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* s+ Z7 S7 S# V. L, I5 j5 h* s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 l5 {1 P1 F$ t; Q9 ]) a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 |$ N* }! Z( s* r* Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 x. o7 x: D# {: Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 Q8 k: R. N5 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 v9 m1 I4 x# I% Y" X. z- A' }; N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 I" f2 C3 D& K9 ?; g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# }0 R+ e! L3 `! x+ G4 R) f我请你剖开它
) k( ]2 j; X3 r& B7 @. q4 k& W- i
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 j) Y: r; F8 k  ^6 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>