【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" y$ [: r1 Y4 j* ]6 P8 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 o4 e# A) t+ X/ \2 W" r8 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! N- v! \7 _' Z! D. xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ u) o. f1 O3 y0 o' k$ I/ V% MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 L( ^" m; m" t+ t! XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, t$ s; O/ h( ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" @. P& _- _( e& D' F9 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  m. y; w5 ?+ x6 fI regret not dying
" C7 o/ [% ~6 ^( d2 B% b+ iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! {8 @% K6 H2 g/ X3 r0 J9 |2 L- CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ o/ J# ~1 h, gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 C" ~7 y, a8 [2 W- t+ O4 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 }' y( x4 t5 a; F- U" i1 S2 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 z6 t) t/ N+ T6 G- @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  g, ^& F8 l' \" s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* O4 J0 z* a& g2 s! b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  M' Q8 J9 U; Q+ ^5 d' U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 n' C  j/ c) s# ^6 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* u, s1 A$ c# Z) d; Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ H  i5 {, G0 x" S" q( A8 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* S; J4 y8 o4 ?/ |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) i# g/ w' A) K/ C, h$ P( B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ S+ M" `5 u8 u$ Q* t  S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& I$ B! p* T$ J/ v* T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 C/ F1 M' ]+ R/ ^- M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% A% X. n5 J- O  T$ @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; T9 z+ L6 i+ X$ v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  d& w) i9 o2 A4 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 [7 ~+ `: S0 K: E9 }- h- h4 A6 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 |) R( g+ z4 j9 S3 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 r" e+ _# b# p7 v1 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  t2 E6 u4 z; B, ]: h# a7 J1 Y3 s8 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' ], M1 s, s" }( v- I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- z' S3 ]8 T; T; M3 G8 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: p) L* ~) C; o3 T$ E3 c& A& z* _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* l* \. O+ y5 R2 q$ o9 \1 {我请你剖开它

6 Z' R& U; o# ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>