【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 r( t4 \9 F0 e9 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' S+ E& j5 V- F* D" G3 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 H$ F6 P( ]6 F4 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 x( E& q! B& c1 zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" g( B+ w( |1 q: DNothing can compare to my love
/ b5 d, m" A& Q* I+ [& FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# o' C: m' W  J9 s$ g' yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# L8 `! i) _5 SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' [8 `. u. b5 P9 s$ X9 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" m% G9 t2 }% t3 D/ JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' t$ [/ H5 a( n. k8 R7 o+ NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! b" q4 [5 c2 \- f5 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 i. D! b9 h# V" Z  E5 {& g' |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% N# Q4 U6 E. {5 c5 v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& U, q/ {6 Q$ y4 r9 _, V: g# W$ ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  V4 z' _4 ~& ~4 b3 v$ S/ I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 Z5 |. a+ @3 b% c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 y& T# W; i- t5 ]: Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 L5 u/ a1 j" ~0 s9 G4 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 A& t2 g% |5 G6 f7 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 U* l3 w3 [3 r5 G) r  T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) f/ {: k% Y+ e4 c* k* |4 p2 v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: K5 g# G# q+ Y' x* P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) p; }/ q: O# [; H$ Y; O3 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 m1 {; e4 B7 A6 Z: t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ]7 ?0 B$ g6 H3 O! l( c; I4 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 j( h: Q( x2 D4 s  ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) P! {2 z3 E9 Q& I, t$ V8 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 G! c) }' x0 Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- e4 \5 d1 A2 M  v9 m: H+ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( i* x! _6 b: e6 _* e# t<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 J. N. n( D; {7 J+ R9 r  t! i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 d( ~: [2 {: N; U1 |: Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! C" Z: b8 w/ w' c+ ~$ y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- v, F2 {( v8 M7 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ~2 u, ?4 ]* j' V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 q* ~4 Z5 x  s4 W3 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' j8 Z8 h9 \. g# R9 @  C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 R& P5 S4 S% D: h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>