【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" e) ?- t; S" k" _( R4 B: s歌词我附在后面。
9 k9 B  w+ n( K# ?) i5 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) K4 H  ^3 h) ]& yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 o: D/ y0 _* x0 N" O3 w4 L6 W2 |With the moon kissing it every night
3 w. J1 j) j) r& A- N' X! bSeeing the sky content with its love
+ J" C5 x- A9 c" H. `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% ]* K1 y5 n1 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! T$ u* m% E- p2 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 }/ q  s& V5 pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# k/ x  x9 F6 s4 r) n( \( d2 wI want so much to see inside your heart
2 k4 |7 m9 o+ J' m* c% A5 j6 Z* _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  k% _7 Z' m2 hI’m still filled with fear
4 z+ |  D- w% a) ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 Z! j7 B0 g% |! g$ zI regret not dying
! i1 g- K9 _/ y/ t5 L& M% vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% P; |1 m4 \* p$ P! e2 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! I8 j$ Y9 k) `( s9 q( p3 M% PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: q. ]* h% x; G+ O( MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. V) ^$ w6 \% A# u! Q0 W( g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. }7 N+ S4 D# X5 ~( V2 Q9 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# H7 Z7 x" P$ E. O. `" w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 _- F+ V, P" [- w2 B: h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; @8 [6 [  g1 r1 D! C; w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! e$ q( m7 U  `( N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* p, M" {' z' V) Q3 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 c( S( f9 i* i/ K; E1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. X' Q; o; Z# g* `0 ]# L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& @. U" V! M( Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ W0 H' ^; w) L: h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' K5 {4 a* F$ c' V$ m1 e! X<P>你无需担心</P>
5 u! q; d% S; Z% J1 M# h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 q; y$ o, |7 e6 I. J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 }# [* m% B* m) v2 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 {" q& h% u/ E- P. n! e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  H- N; q" s+ C8 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ `% o3 n4 p& c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 K! v& G) W' J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 m' s, [4 I  g: S: A8 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. e3 m/ w/ Z$ b) G' b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: `- v& m+ @* r5 Q% H2 X9 q1 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# k9 ^6 o& n1 F) u2 k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 w8 N, Y1 v& t. \5 y0 X% c$ T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" ^- E4 X6 _5 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 v3 _4 Z. K$ r2 `9 F. V' r6 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 A8 b& l) ?; \0 m+ _' D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( M- c8 I* L2 d; C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 X9 I8 E! [+ [& X2 g) o6 v1 x8 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 I0 w& h( F' m' P1 y, F, h& `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( I1 E) N/ y; H) j% q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. R, v/ \. u5 @7 M8 O, k2 H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>