【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
! e/ N9 ?  B" H  [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ |0 J6 N0 G0 D$ RThe sky is happy down to its soul
, l8 P8 ^" W' j2 d" t$ m, Z( `2 a: k& EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ k' y  Q* {' E* a" o* SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 V: Z! e0 i! nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 ^7 z! Z  Y2 N1 `Nothing can compare to my love
" W. O6 m$ V$ KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# J; v* S; Y9 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' u5 P3 |6 q8 pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' @/ C  P$ a! q; ~% i1 v0 v- A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# F0 I. S* A/ S6 b/ b3 V6 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- W4 s& R4 e+ t( g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' h1 Z- }$ C+ ?6 v! o/ h% i+ V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 u8 t' C7 ^& X! V% o; r- {5 M) O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 r& f+ ^3 O) R' X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& c  Q$ p' F8 M# W, D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; Y4 i" P7 T: a7 y' Z! p  C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 i$ |  J: w( P, x- u0 o! T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( C5 x0 ^  `2 I5 V% q' l, ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: @" G7 r! s6 g/ k. w  c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- w: L, t* z( P$ T! @$ E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# r7 u. g8 f6 L, i: U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# I- w; k9 K1 t5 I; N% G" n1 R2 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& C* P3 h; E7 u1 h9 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- p# K+ j. r! }4 _" }, b. F) v& v! z7 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: B  w2 j$ [& y, S4 h8 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 N& J2 J  `5 ^( D9 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ L" l& |  q. G0 U0 M& {5 h# y<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 z' T2 ]' v% n' L( |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: n. h2 Z) I5 [, `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- {7 ^5 L7 ?+ R3 b5 z4 K9 Z2 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 c& y# @5 p( [4 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% C6 R* I$ e, F4 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 _$ J$ Q% z+ ^4 Z" g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* H. \" W$ {" U" G1 E2 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! L% e; }' }2 j7 m, L! o% h: @: G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 P/ z( D& I7 b' q9 D  A我请你剖开它
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1 q6 p$ N8 v# J9 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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