【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 {9 M5 i' {3 ^- l) \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% R* m9 f0 R' h! f7 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 f7 Q0 W) `' y' OWith the moon kissing it every night
* y2 c  c& |$ m  xSeeing the sky content with its love
0 {/ Q3 w7 o; B  c9 a3 `1 I; RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) j7 D6 u8 H" N% N; pEvery other word you utter is love
5 v, s) L" G" e& oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 R, Y4 B, ~/ R/ b7 B* \$ G, cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  J( }: G8 t! t! N1 }I’m still filled with fear
( Y9 h; P2 F6 P; ~& K* BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% p3 N" k& O( K( \, g% {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: r) E& c( Y* fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) @: T* `8 R' Y# h: W* ~# U0 G; ^, c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ b1 o0 J; s9 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ c8 K' [; o3 _" M8 F; ]9 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: z! _4 M  E  Y5 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 h, i7 K, Y& ?# f) |9 N7 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ h' H8 F/ t" N$ z: m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 X6 f, x3 B- U# `7 ]& b  u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& T8 h& V  a: U8 _- Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 R# K% `& I9 _7 f( `# L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. ~. H3 @1 n8 V! x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 ~' [9 @7 B/ s7 L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) b7 }' ]- \/ q6 v5 g8 s& t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 \& W4 X, M( b& @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: b7 u9 ~) P0 D" C2 {4 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ w# Z$ \; C6 k$ l9 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: S) f$ s  h6 b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! P: \  `8 @- B+ [# K* l* A% W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 c3 k3 K) ~# \+ q5 Z2 J) T. ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. s4 Z" s* J3 i  l' G" o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 R) ^3 M/ W8 A: X0 F; T0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 `1 b" `! {; t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" I; D2 w2 ~, N9 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 P% H7 w- h' [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( `$ n- m$ O3 y9 p+ i! T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 [0 p6 j- @2 Y/ f& F: ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 \) M+ c. d8 e# [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 a) |+ i! O9 D! k+ S; G; {) v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& B  d- u1 H1 j/ K2 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ S$ f) X: U3 X* u0 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 r) I' q" c! ]$ d, I% F我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>