【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ n5 |, V( J" I) @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 i, N. @7 e0 Q  OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 m& q1 ?3 ?4 i8 z- DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 d& j) ~& w( n, W6 a; |( g) u/ D% rSeeing the sky content with its love
1 {. i. x: e6 r6 W- M; p9 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 [6 y* X4 p! X8 V# wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: V: R5 i2 H7 p3 s2 j( pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; Z% ~% Q3 W7 ?, BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ F* E4 D1 J  l, uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! _( Y  r2 W7 I/ V: B2 w; U* GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 g5 M3 i0 N/ g/ G+ ^( V+ e7 zI’m still filled with fear
- K& j6 X1 s5 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; G' f' T! ~* E% v- `I regret not dying
6 D5 p3 U& U' g3 t7 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; t; K% t; n) E% u# XWith such a tongue as yours,
) ^4 Z# K$ V% X" D) e9 h* PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 v0 E2 `* B2 e: M1 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 s0 ~3 p0 v5 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; b: Q7 P% a8 x6 i1 k" C+ W. `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) E9 B0 t+ H5 J2 l4 Y: l8 O/ A( r/ d2 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 d+ p  c7 {6 L2 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 x5 B0 |" ^2 z* n( h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! p: c& k  `9 N: N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 ]1 D$ v, H- m' q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% m9 T7 E+ u8 Q: Y' C# m6 M9 q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  ^* |# u2 H" [3 K; ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 f8 }3 y5 b9 Z' Q( ^2 y6 f9 E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) T6 D9 a+ J& }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, W* P$ D1 q/ x  h0 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 F4 M1 F- D; k; D! [: |; }6 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 u% ?) ]8 m6 h0 m1 b9 X  }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: E! w0 \* ]% i3 G0 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% q' y! v/ L0 ^9 y3 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, Z) f! u! l8 A& y' z8 j; g7 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; a3 i  f3 C. u" Y5 a% `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 V6 [; \% H. g2 a. h( [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) d# q/ a- p' `+ b; D( r3 p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 q; E1 @+ P  T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 v7 m! G$ S( @9 E* g* z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 k' v6 z9 r0 G7 W9 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 s; o$ I+ Z2 g, Z- J% K# Y9 T0 P" ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 {9 D6 U& R. y" z1 t4 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 Y' B, o9 f" l% v3 ?; m  F; P$ @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ N: U) }! a2 s6 _! b8 P  y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) F2 l. l/ w. \4 H' H+ j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>