【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' ?5 q( L* |+ X- z: ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 r$ ~- p  o9 G* g! z5 u! q; IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: a4 N/ r- ]7 V* y0 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, u! a; f8 l& y" d6 GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ A2 j9 i. L! U; k8 C1 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, q3 O$ l0 T& _% YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ b& f# n0 @! d( ]- PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 G1 T: T; f/ Q, |- X! [I want so much to see inside your heart
- `# K% Y" x" y0 V* ]  j2 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 T' \1 ~" F& ?) JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( `  [  u9 S- p1 F9 \! ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; f9 w- J' Z+ [) g3 z; y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) J( ^+ s( ^: p) ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: v% S* H! ~* c1 K- ]4 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ T  ?' I  i4 g% v" q& H7 v. R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 @) f. D7 g9 b8 z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ g5 [8 ?: k4 S7 A' b. }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, V7 a4 a  h$ f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 k- G' @$ r5 X) D) i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 N( B0 ]: q! m/ t. u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |- u* Y' J  k  U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 J9 f( g4 x  F- @7 ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& h( t* {( S7 _( p) y1 D( d1 p7 a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& @3 I0 N( _) z, ~2 d& o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: Q+ G* n" F8 o5 d7 r0 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 k5 h$ g) J6 @, z; Y7 z* z9 T3 ?0 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 t4 H& s3 U% A* Y4 ~% A/ b" T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% b( K& D7 G" y: @' Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; u0 I& F5 _& P) n: C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 q  t. ]( f6 ]0 A6 e! G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 M$ ^. w+ F# G$ {) W4 i2 V* L6 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ J* C9 h! _+ f  W" Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ l' P, e' `/ \8 k4 [8 I/ n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  G6 @1 f% e" O0 ^( e9 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 W( {. `4 X: }; W# `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, N5 q2 m0 X$ ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, p: q+ k# z8 p+ H# X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; p7 Y5 ]7 Z4 @2 I8 ^/ `5 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ x+ R  {) A, R# I* J7 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 G& B% x  `8 i, O+ z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>