【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 E& P; m" g8 O9 e" g% ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ J4 D. b3 y" X2 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 S6 l& A* w( j7 J# t1 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 j6 o5 \" E4 ^0 n3 BWith the moon kissing it every night
5 B0 T4 A4 @# c2 r/ x6 r+ NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; ]7 N; m' b0 S5 @# v4 V5 _/ oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 R# C+ \5 c  a7 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 j( e5 L+ m: S% \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 k  F7 ?1 ^, U- ^+ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( R. l9 _" |/ R# [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ I2 `3 n7 O+ D% E0 a* G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: z! c" P. ^+ E( b" F! m5 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z4 v7 ~  O) G' _# Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& ^2 A5 d0 @5 R- @9 D$ }' ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ v5 ^+ P: ]5 ^6 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 j" ^8 c4 {7 s7 U6 H' n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* G* R2 l! i+ U& w  n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  {* a6 a4 F9 l& Q" H1 x+ O# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ y$ t6 S" Y- v/ P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 W- Q' K+ R1 S/ U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ K( w3 q! Q) y4 }/ {$ Q3 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 R! @! K+ [( |4 o0 p4 S. h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# B" R, _1 ~- k- ]0 u. {: m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, G% k: Y7 Y+ i6 X8 \1 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' K4 a( \! b- V" \: z6 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. q# H  n' N5 r+ u) R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ X6 _( Q5 J! z- A2 C/ y! M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  N2 l1 ]1 B/ C& n) t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 t0 V8 n$ \" |$ {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' P5 }9 E6 K, h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# v% T& }7 R  q% k5 S$ v  Z9 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 b2 ^+ G( D3 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: _+ c& o2 {8 V5 l' t8 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 \, t; }' C0 u, P1 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% S% _8 R. n) t  a3 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 z" ]# o4 o7 A( R1 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# |$ I8 Y# z# m2 r2 Z8 o, ^4 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 _" ~' J, Q! r" d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- M- p5 [- I4 J" l5 d, p  G我请你剖开它

+ ^5 a4 k  g0 {% i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>