【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 e8 y. C+ K9 y0 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 K; x3 ^$ Y) q5 A) {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: ^8 [$ {( d& H2 |& dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ y+ ]( B- O, k2 A8 ~% NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* v) S2 ^0 V& h9 B% ~! eEvery other word you utter is love
* t- u$ }- Y* C( GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# ?' R+ V4 P; m  XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: I0 c! ]9 S/ C  p3 j2 R4 J1 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 }2 R& q4 D/ {5 n6 Y' QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: r& l1 J3 E; e2 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* s4 ~0 V9 j! n( f! T. hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 ?$ L- r" {' |3 D# L% MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; j" h- j) T3 _( H2 z2 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 z. Z4 y: Z% ~0 i! N9 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- T% \0 h3 m3 a; C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ a! P, q5 ]4 ~" F# V, e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: ]% ?- R& _+ b6 D% D( R0 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Y2 g! C* g9 f! d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, _8 S8 @8 x- j  ^: ]" S+ S4 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 n, y. O4 u9 B. Y% ^<P>你无需担心</P>
4 K. ]' h- x  _  u  _  O) q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! b9 u2 }2 [9 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ u" Y; w  ?- G  v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 g3 l1 k3 L& J, v+ ~; M( U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& _7 ?) d5 q/ l9 v* i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- X; ^' {- U/ |" ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 n0 Z2 P  B& E5 H3 _( r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& }: ^  y/ i! }3 i. C+ v+ R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 P2 D) w$ u  N; f6 `) ?0 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' }4 P, z$ T0 q. ~  A) y. ]+ I" W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 w! c# x  ^! S7 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 h4 u3 |, F; i3 n: l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" _. u$ j4 h* L- M! l. a: F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: m" l% s# O! v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 c5 \& ?3 G! o8 F+ s$ h0 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ^. Q/ W' W) F/ V# q% k" x7 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
6 {( S# @# ~" \0 J9 X# k
) G2 k/ _- |' H4 j$ D我请你剖开它
' ^* m/ p4 O  b2 b% ?. U
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. X/ z! v1 O3 k' M( |' y2 d# O9 x3 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>