【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
: {  c+ C9 U: d% WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. m2 l+ _1 i& M3 g( eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- O3 x- e( E: S. T9 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. _$ E$ W4 c, I  T/ \With the moon kissing it every night
# b1 _. ]4 q' B/ U% C+ u: }/ N1 cSeeing the sky content with its love
. D% b' r+ @3 d1 K! l' S0 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 Y. w$ i9 }2 F. H, M+ ZI love you I love you with all my heart
: g8 {+ f# z- V. i% P/ ^1 u$ ^Nothing can compare to my love
4 M% `$ e0 s: k+ T8 C1 x+ oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ^7 D' [3 v* l- O9 W$ P! xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, E2 Y% @! E9 ?( |2 O' K7 t4 I: ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 K5 B& B% R; T& gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 B  P& f% |" y( M9 e5 ?1 C7 R7 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 t6 E1 b; I" N. R" g' C0 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 s& m# z- k+ |! @: T# e3 B) G+ B9 U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 a) g/ e/ E1 x6 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' g% o9 {' _) R* D% t. v/ W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# U4 b" G0 L# \3 @' y6 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- z2 S& u( e- A+ H9 n, A! m- X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 u8 L3 s, B' p+ D% _( Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) h( I, ]+ w6 z5 x$ i! P" V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ v2 {- t/ ?4 ]& B  H! x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, G" J) m4 ?6 j% `3 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! x$ p1 F6 K* n- w- {3 b/ T5 I8 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ a+ p+ l' H/ R9 N6 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 B0 \$ n; L6 y' f! t" `- |& l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: T+ U& T2 \. L( U1 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% @" d) G# `9 N. _# I8 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* u* n- }" \% k1 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& i/ g! G" O- ^. e. @" H- E, G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 ?3 E% [6 Z+ G# d/ K6 h9 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ _% o9 D/ c9 e9 |2 K/ `; }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' f9 Q" i! e7 E2 z; `7 j8 C% A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& @% z* }2 H8 {, Z! u& t; [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ~$ o, [: v& R8 }1 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% L' `3 W/ X( ~  X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- d. O) B7 B6 S- _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, g% H2 W% b6 z) U- Q2 v! K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( A0 I8 l) I8 T2 O' o, l5 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- ~- }( H3 ]9 x0 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* J& e8 o4 h8 ]( g% I  |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, K, b$ D8 {, f, _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>