【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 @8 F9 @' V! i- l# E4 [4 Z# w4 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# M4 Q9 [' P/ c/ O3 X6 f. G1 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ u* [5 j8 q7 w* Q0 J8 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 f( E6 U" |: i5 t4 n% \) zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 ~4 n' F+ {2 n7 E: e0 K8 L4 m( nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 \+ c* L5 i) q5 [4 U6 O! B, ~Seeing the sky content with its love
2 w! I; R) x6 m! v: xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ C; ]4 M8 K* o6 s7 A3 |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ^* e5 J* h; t  tEvery other word you utter is love
  c, x& d' m- kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 P" _" I% Q: T/ Z( e# bNothing can compare to my love
  f8 E8 G  e& i: k- TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) j0 b: g, ^+ AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 D' Y# b5 ?& j# k7 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& t' q6 u6 r$ T2 {' NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 V* t6 h' g; T; W' X. rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* l6 V- ?2 B; x! s" m; g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 A& k3 K+ s+ U7 T; C! H2 \6 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  s: e% E) n; F! O; Q/ ^5 t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 I7 n$ ?: P" J4 v+ g- X3 e- x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; v7 g' C3 \( c# l7 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) F7 u% m4 P# i$ {+ l) V" ?6 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 m0 f) v/ }' K' x0 O  z( y$ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 h$ H1 s# P3 j% B- i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 C, l3 {% l# H7 ]. _# j! U( b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% N4 ^! F5 o3 C. _4 N5 C7 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 O8 B; h8 J' ^7 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 {3 A/ j- m2 Q2 G/ Z) h- p' V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* M) U5 k( r5 G: x7 X7 ?0 G) k# E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. ]7 j: F/ u. H& K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 o" O! Q" K9 Q8 z# J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ G7 D( x" V$ y, t: }2 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ {4 h% a" [% a" O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ?( m  C% m. r) C* E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- z5 H8 [% w; A9 C1 j8 w1 d' Q+ Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( z0 s+ U/ u1 h# _" ]. K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  H, n4 l+ [0 N1 Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 k: C6 n# c$ t- ?  L. W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 p: F# y& x1 i) Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 V/ C) ~% ?2 E/ ~" ?( f我请你剖开它
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' j) v8 Y: J, w) V- b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 e0 n3 C* y+ e9 g8 [9 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>