【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 _' ^) z! O7 V% g8 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& l  q, B# x0 ?2 ~# V7 Q+ fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* _% [3 f/ {' Q8 a$ s' {With the moon kissing it every night
3 l. e% D1 Z& N6 O# F- mSeeing the sky content with its love
! a5 l) T. N( z( I1 S- V& b8 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; Z8 t/ K! g( p* N& MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: K. f# w7 v  A7 k7 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( i# x2 O, w; X' {$ G7 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 M9 o3 Q9 d4 v2 g6 IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 r. N4 S+ I; e  z6 [I want so much to see inside your heart
' V8 `+ D5 l3 X9 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& j$ ^: t% W6 O( ]4 t' A! r* P" y( SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# h6 E) o; J; z+ t. l2 u/ I( ^6 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; |" {: C. R& ?2 r# h. ^3 r5 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% t% L7 e- P4 H$ |9 |0 b" Q( u/ U8 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 M  [1 x  t! e+ D1 E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  e# G; I8 C& X$ ~  T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 z4 j7 \# v, X* H. L( K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 h* U% G8 X1 N( F, O5 |; |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ @6 w( D0 K) E% ^' |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# U% ?+ g0 {% Y/ e& u) Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, p- N9 J" g/ L: Q8 P% L! U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& N) j& S" z- m6 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 a  o) M& X, D: q- f/ t9 u  M$ ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! i9 H! ~) B' J7 e# m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( N8 D: e( N4 L* v" e5 ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; `& P% e/ V! ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( @7 H# Z8 F; T' F& z$ b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- ~, l% c% I* c" a4 q1 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, w) A) s1 S3 ~+ J# D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 ~- e% R. Y& A9 A* |* b/ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  K" K; _, K0 _9 V2 ^! k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# ?9 D- T! h8 s% s; Q$ V; E- k2 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 ~" |9 Y+ Q2 ]2 M9 Y$ W, J& I6 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 g% V$ e( }7 }0 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( }% k# E& U5 U5 w0 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) [: x: v2 L  t<P>I regret not dying</P>
& A5 k1 C; R" }( f* j) W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ h. e' @( m- G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 @: k5 \, c# S, ?! b) v) V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 T) D& a& P. S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  g0 h( B! Y$ [6 A! W5 O8 i2 H) u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' y$ J2 e3 ?6 g8 C! E+ U* m+ k0 M) d8 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 @5 l0 x" Y, G: l我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>