【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ y' Z$ \6 z* A9 _9 y- q& \# c# E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( ?+ D% ], h' A  p0 i! eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) {  J0 t( j5 ?1 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# X$ l3 P. A0 q* g% |- d/ P4 LI love you I love you with all my heart
1 K0 E+ a2 d- d. C7 oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' t  f$ s2 G7 Z; x( g6 lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. I" f" y: }( ?" e" @& m, Y; uI’m still filled with fear
/ s0 ]( h! H2 ~8 b: N% WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 F0 R  x% C6 ]+ Y) eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 C( V4 b/ \3 M; q# @8 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: i1 L  ]# S) d" S4 {; ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& }2 P; M( m/ u& J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, G% f/ Y$ u) r0 j& j- Q) ]7 u5 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, s# }8 N/ u+ m: ^3 U' M% p( d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 U  x& G' k4 y/ s  f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! c; A- p% H7 E# |" Z0 f) ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 N( Z- a  M8 o* C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! ^3 G. `* V9 ~6 ^0 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 K8 B! {; A' n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 A0 s7 F; k0 K' y- y' Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( u. s1 F& F1 v: A# x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* w$ L' F) I9 r7 E6 _* F' `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" W, Z: [8 h& _* E; S( P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& L1 {4 [* p3 I. G8 r# [4 b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 z, D5 Z$ g1 C9 x, ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 E6 u/ n; Z- u! s+ F; B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 a/ q0 _% l, j2 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' s( K; B% o2 d7 {& j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ c/ v& E& J* x* s) g5 ~6 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 q$ A% Z# j+ U$ F! f; \: F1 B! }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, `$ E; E# E3 t9 u3 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) |% T4 h8 O$ ^$ A3 h1 i( Z; N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; i. ?" m( P' R+ }4 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% b" V9 U# l9 Q/ C' I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  O( X: n4 N  k8 [% D. C0 T5 i, }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ e6 e1 r: d1 Q* ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: E6 C8 }8 q" ~6 T/ h9 R/ A" O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! v$ }; a! C. V# s) E: l5 Z( U; v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 z4 G9 r. J: ^$ z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* Q& R3 z1 q( H  b1 D& i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 Y$ w5 k7 ~# { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>