【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  @1 T. _# T( S3 S歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% x) ~/ Q& Y1 G; @. G" M: k  R7 s' WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* O9 Z; T' X# _2 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 O8 }$ e; R+ H; a. j) b1 ]With the moon kissing it every night
- e/ \4 [9 e, hSeeing the sky content with its love
9 Z- f8 }8 w3 V. }& `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 |7 i7 t# c+ [1 X; `: UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& R( e. |7 \) X1 rNothing can compare to my love
1 S. \  ?& y0 r) @# |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 ?& t" B" L6 F4 \% e3 t; l) LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 {+ u" s/ E, z1 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 C! {/ _1 ~% y  C+ Y% i3 n5 }$ s* P6 uI’m still filled with fear
; N# i+ t* {6 Q0 r* tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 z+ [" z0 \2 j6 N8 V; PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ `! ~, f8 @9 c  L! uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* @- v4 ]% X! n! kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* \2 p( b( h1 S# p" R! a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 J- V4 R# e; T* j4 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- R7 |" I- {8 Z5 D" Q) }( \# O, E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; ?" {2 Q" E: w4 E' V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, U# n) [* Z: t+ N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 U& {+ V: r% Y+ L" P4 r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: Z: q0 E  B/ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  g& F  f  b8 ]  _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* }: }, \5 X; n; l6 I$ o; R* p' \4 g  F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' E" B) Q# C$ e. \& `9 a& F4 g6 _/ h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ O1 n) f0 W' O& R% ^9 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 u  h( `. H5 x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 Y8 l8 K( q3 j5 j* a5 w& s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; X4 q" G& l- _3 f8 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ q! f* q( x+ [) Q) @: K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' j' b$ v8 Z+ M' Q! Z# W& @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 E0 n# a, G! K/ C: Q3 T3 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ a* x) K, e/ e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# j' ~$ M$ n  y/ \* X+ y1 }+ z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 V! Q8 S& `" m3 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 L  y9 T0 }8 g: B( ^9 g2 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ I: V" `3 h# w) T) L6 W. c- Z- @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) e7 d! P& ?  x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 N/ j+ ?+ H( X3 R; h0 |1 V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  I& A3 y( V9 G/ ^0 _1 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
& q7 A1 |$ D+ M. q$ [/ U) R
* x- R% r/ _3 ?( K3 q9 D我请你剖开它

9 @( R; r/ C6 n, ], ]7 c+ Z3 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>