【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) F- S7 H# V6 O+ t" [$ zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 l: k3 M' \* ]0 q* P0 `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 X, u- ?5 a( QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" n" S3 k8 m) o* [6 l3 s8 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 d- \6 e, p7 Y* N1 L4 cNothing can compare to my love
, o! \! z. M7 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% h4 C/ V* v8 e# L' [( KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: n3 o6 k8 ~8 h3 Z& E( ~1 h' l  LI’m still filled with fear
: y0 E! V5 P: o2 N. Q. ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; [2 [, C$ n. ~4 c: z: m2 G+ AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: q# Y$ j* J( G( R/ G9 M9 _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ x$ Q1 k* ?5 b( |! B) vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! t+ b: R7 \1 e) E/ ?& c# KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 J% @. d& r7 J3 x9 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* J2 m/ Y4 i. s$ q- V# L1 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 P  s& p! B; L( t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( {' T/ Q; }" M" p6 @8 ?6 \$ l$ M3 x4 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 t) |: ]- N: X- c4 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 w6 q' v' J% _. t6 K- r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ a. D9 D6 V0 r" u6 P4 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 I) k6 P+ u6 ?2 }9 d* a. V, Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ P' S7 u# f$ i/ U! g( [: y2 |: ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% {7 S2 G, Z3 |; x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. Q. J; o# L1 m<P>你无需担心</P>
0 p+ @( t( A$ d8 Z( z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& f3 X5 b7 m& @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* n1 f' a  m) p/ V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" U* u& X5 Y% y/ P1 s; ?/ p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 V  f. H( B* V2 z7 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ]0 J# Q$ l% M* a* ~( u/ Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# L/ U( N/ V0 l: l! P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ n" {( Z) D/ o7 n3 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 |# H, w. o( `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 O0 j( e6 n) ^8 w3 a% @% X! Q+ `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% i# ]$ F' b2 W3 p5 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* |6 G1 Y" ^2 }1 p1 N0 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ x, ^* T; e4 }. E1 P% A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 R5 |6 y/ L) d, d& x- ]7 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 w0 {3 Z0 H% V, }) I0 R5 N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- `) ^" j1 f$ e- V. u( ^- r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 }4 @6 Q  k( ?. {5 w7 @* [) y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ]6 h0 n3 @- N3 \7 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 U) R; i: k" w我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>