【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& p6 e& R" S; V7 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ z- o% x) R8 ^& \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ |) Y- c. ~- S+ sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ]5 y' W+ }2 i) y, G3 h3 O9 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 X+ u: u# |# U- FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% R: _8 \" ~/ _$ dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; A. @/ h2 f( H8 ?6 K5 ]' DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% |& t9 A8 X/ g1 k  Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' b- d* \) ]6 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" n2 d: L. B0 G. O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 e" t  x/ _, Y+ i9 }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* M& p9 B  j  @! T" \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- p/ o7 K$ z! d4 H9 t1 R( Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 o/ M3 C  Z* v: }, d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" H. l  N" m0 C+ F2 m4 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  e' Z2 R5 _: i2 _1 V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 J: h$ X. P1 g<P>你无需担心</P>
6 s" K& N! T+ W4 p1 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 B8 K& V! F# ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" {5 z5 t( Z: Q0 J/ F: r! _+ b7 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 l( T! k, l9 K( F* I& ?9 @0 N6 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; f: a8 \. t+ X/ i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- L9 M3 A$ v2 v6 p8 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 k0 d7 X! R' }, \; F5 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ f" R. v# H" b& S9 j: a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: l: {8 l# U7 K7 i, Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# `. O  b3 R2 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 f* o8 }) H. F6 ^0 H  P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! p6 ?& P" F% u) C. J( l+ M. ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: d0 H; r$ u* M, E) j<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ^' {/ w5 \+ F7 ]3 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ x2 w* E: ~6 |5 U* ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, F) j* Z0 V: Y" G: Q5 S" M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# x/ @4 X; e6 h/ g& F9 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 y8 f7 J3 Z" y2 m7 c: {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( J8 t1 x9 [  B, s; ~  |& U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 _( R+ V# c- r5 u' I7 t2 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>