【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- q% Z7 R. w+ XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: \7 N: C7 Z5 D2 B' @! sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& E- N" F" f8 y& O# L& `6 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  I% E4 x3 i) j8 w( MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; i, G( i) M# ]9 y$ N* f: J2 A* ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 u% l; b" ?* j: `You needn’t fear anything
3 o8 B  ^# v% e. L  P" zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! Z1 \2 j# H) N' T( V) lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, b8 g$ i, \0 V; VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 d' u0 j" e% YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 o# i3 V3 @/ Q$ d# w7 Y; l# YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 `5 S' ?+ C. f$ ~% E! E1 C  wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 I& H& }4 U/ g0 d) ^. h/ n" EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! W6 L2 `6 O0 C, l; FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* @* k7 E2 P5 G: _5 B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( {+ X2 v! W4 {8 T' G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 R2 H7 ~5 b! L- {' s3 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* J! }5 r9 h: `- r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 w7 y2 s0 m# |; j3 O: T8 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' n0 A9 \3 z" h6 s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, k* L/ G/ {/ Y8 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( t2 _: X( V  P7 p' R6 p" U+ H4 F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% W/ [! F! w. @. L8 p6 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; l* l! z2 n5 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ ^0 ~8 l' x- ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: M4 t9 o7 J, S, X7 c- j& W5 Y3 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, C: B4 {5 t* n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  x- t, |- K2 d) X6 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 m% ]% j" G. O( ^/ k, |: Z; k) r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% d, D2 P3 _3 A  M8 P) C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 Z8 O' ], S0 g1 B/ g3 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 N% a4 h7 l/ I! \5 A* M& H! h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 ^! P& ?: a$ e% ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  w9 S$ k9 w5 G7 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 S8 t+ t" x" y( V! D- Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) V1 S! N2 z+ g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 j- _- T; U# t7 Q& p, j3 J# X3 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ l. h/ \6 j- D3 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ u* X/ G5 h; p4 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>