【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 @! J6 x  J9 p5 d3 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ \7 W4 g) R) V' l3 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* K9 I- n& z. B# K2 f/ g3 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- ~+ j- X* Y" F* NEvery other word you utter is love
+ A& o. `  _: w0 DI really want to know just how much you love me
7 N( \( X6 c# Z. Y+ K$ vI love you I love you with all my heart
1 x7 R. g6 U( W7 q# B7 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& [7 n1 }2 z, Z* {% Y& cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! g7 E' }1 t( A& I3 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  X8 M; F& Y" Q$ i' H& [" q6 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 l& d2 Q/ @0 \' y: }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 N* p# T5 N  G( v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! D( L& E! a, b! w+ e+ p( T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& @+ T5 @3 X3 ?: d+ W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, b# i0 ]4 m; G. @4 U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ c7 t  [) \9 B$ f1 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 X1 n) @5 C$ i  A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 D. T1 R- \3 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 @$ I9 B+ B+ m. x, r9 a3 m# C9 n9 e& v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' p# ~7 [1 L) W, }% O8 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ c6 B) u; G9 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 e- Z9 I; D' d# w) v. V+ \<P>你无需担心</P>
1 g1 p# |7 Y  ?) U* e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 ]3 B6 N2 N0 F7 ]! C. o% ?( Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* J& ^2 g% B6 H4 Y8 h2 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 Y( e% {* W# n) v) W9 Y* \' d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' E) `5 {% l6 c6 D4 i% W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( A1 I9 T- D! D# s# W/ t& h. ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Y6 M3 T0 V8 D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  Z  {5 J& ?  C( w6 [3 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 m  Y2 |, {+ g( p1 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 M# y/ P8 b/ G" P% \% |8 x$ [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ q/ K# R/ @( w* h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; [5 w( T, B6 Z) r. F- `$ R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 B3 V; j8 I. F# |0 e+ C<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 G3 I* U# O  i) Q- i- f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 J( l' s3 C  \- H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 r! E# g8 g: J  a! j* u) x3 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; F5 v. y1 l1 H- m4 W- N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 S2 f- n; b2 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 s7 p9 g9 C1 }% M# [6 F' K( [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' t6 D' |' k* c, g& L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" {4 y3 J1 C3 _: A2 e7 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>