【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ o) D) n0 {0 ]! g. j歌词我附在后面。
: {; Q4 |$ \0 m; H& R. L% pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* M5 G- z+ S' @  \4 c7 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 k0 Q' I6 E# b, j9 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) ]3 z5 l" M. {8 o% G& |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 C& X* p* U/ a. A! s6 UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# M# }! c6 A  Q" uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 Q9 j9 @$ D& v: F5 K6 OI want so much to see inside your heart
. k5 \$ _: Z* Q0 l. ?" O& hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 ^4 c5 z$ b- @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' v! k8 w2 m+ {/ E0 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 x- l; c8 C7 z+ X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# o( P% j6 N7 _( o8 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" l/ s. k1 s/ T/ u! h0 q2 K. q; F0 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 q7 N0 G1 E% v7 l; e4 q9 |  @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 u& e8 W/ P8 H8 A2 \# t. }4 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 v$ `" L, @- Q0 r' x7 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 ^6 i+ ^8 A2 S" |0 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 t! R# k3 T: M7 U1 X% B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. [5 n1 J! u: J4 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# G2 l$ C3 W/ v  p+ w' a. t7 o; S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ s0 `: `. `; o' q. K- j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ L  R8 z7 n2 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 [* ]5 Y$ [* ^/ D" m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 P% P  G0 `$ X" _3 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% w, k; h4 V2 ~* b, X$ U% W  o& V; N% R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 k- y1 A* f5 ^. T; j$ A- |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 O/ s! X; S7 o9 g+ ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" u' I  n3 J/ i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' B. q% `4 B5 s2 W) k$ m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% g0 D: }* i; G- ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, [0 v' o2 K2 E( l* f/ `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& n$ P; Y# I! Q1 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ F" T5 d$ v6 x# f( [7 j* V( _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>