【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ ^) t* p' _. m$ i! [- vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; B% e5 ?  m) K4 t6 `- w/ }9 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) m! e$ Z" K' ?Seeing the sky content with its love
; j! U7 D. G9 M7 Z7 ?: |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 T8 ^6 @$ X. U( I8 L# G; }, @6 ~5 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ b2 X7 |* ^/ r# I* h6 k! B4 fI want so much to see inside your heart
' U- N, c& w) w. z; `1 f" fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 q' N: y7 S9 YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ E1 l0 y& S, t6 i4 d; j/ A# U; tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 h* w. p# t3 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: ^8 U+ `% B  U6 a+ S) ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Q( Z% b( R: T, R$ {. |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! h- `: H# ~4 S( N  }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  q: v- |$ x, A( @. ?, A1 ~  A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 D( p2 ~+ i2 Z  T' O. ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ g0 b  Z; X4 ?% z& M, X3 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. @/ ^. L5 M7 o  g9 x: p# F9 n- r+ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. x/ R6 [2 M8 Q9 Z8 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 h4 i0 V9 y! m- ~  I! p- ^+ p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' J/ Q8 }8 D6 h! r* W/ K3 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 G8 ^& Q7 }2 c& |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' F* i& d. \& ~7 A; d+ O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# H8 E( k3 C1 o) S1 S# X( o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# O+ Y# a9 e  S7 j& k0 m$ N3 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ [4 F9 O: m6 u4 h# B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  @& I: H3 l7 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 r8 F" V5 b2 [! T/ \$ |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. @) U; ^& o* o, Y+ V  F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! \. V* h! f* ?+ b: e/ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 i1 C3 @# I& P3 E) `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 N( H. |) |) ~8 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. O$ R* U4 {, H! s7 l$ m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 B: ]& o- ^$ p* f3 ~" m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ Y+ D. g) \1 {; ~/ k( G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( z6 H7 Q/ s2 R. c! ^* U% ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' D) i8 v' y5 U* a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. c1 d+ F9 J$ W2 E" Z: [, I" G2 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) w# Q. M+ [9 c5 l' E) _, s+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ z1 h' Q8 G/ r$ M6 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>