【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 d: B+ ?3 N/ f0 W+ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
( i1 c9 U" i/ N7 x, M* u6 M% ]# w8 E) OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; ?$ d" a  i  [; v7 r! m+ BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Z% z; Z5 z6 i7 ^/ A, HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. J, L" u+ c) {( {( MYou needn’t fear anything
6 n7 d% }8 m+ |2 T5 h+ q8 b0 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, v# p9 k) R; c  B: }1 e* Z+ j6 D  {Every other word you utter is love
# @3 `+ u' U7 O) II really want to know just how much you love me
" X- Y8 e8 U0 |1 h* l# e9 T% P, nI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. t9 f9 ~* r6 D1 e9 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ n7 s* X- ^; N2 W) [/ e4 V, N7 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# ?3 H1 G: M* V3 x+ \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  c& Z& P" y; ?With such a tongue as yours,
' m* c- M3 s5 f7 Z' ?" MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' e% G! l& s9 _; wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ~' N' a) ^. l/ t- x0 B. tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 e; Y6 ?4 ^) ]3 O- W, q% z$ x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! Q. O1 q' l8 P& i0 o6 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# U0 J3 s4 Z/ N8 S- z8 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 `" A+ y; x. G9 E' k3 N8 I& {6 M$ O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& G/ c# A6 |; b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! {' E& M% Q" V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 h9 }& [3 |% N6 C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' V$ j9 X% V& ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 J+ M4 J& s: @  N0 ^5 g+ [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 F6 C* y* S8 F) V( u3 m% O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 Y$ l1 a: K$ U6 k$ Y/ g5 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 ^) W4 B  h: B6 e& Q( M; I" V! v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' X; q) h6 }. s* Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 h' l" y( b: `' I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 h6 u; ~3 \4 L, _8 |2 ?4 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: U. m+ ?7 X5 y- e; G8 l0 E$ H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 X: z) ^) D0 U: T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 ~$ S& |* E* l$ d7 G% t% J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- k; \7 p! v" c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 `8 X  x6 q; k# W  D4 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% V. b2 g* z( @) V3 g6 o1 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, k7 a  Y# e, a. ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& W/ F1 y! U1 k4 `* \3 B9 P% n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( V! A: d4 Z8 U! O7 ]" H  {) W3 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  v) w' N1 [/ z0 A5 T1 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 F! U4 f6 g1 F) r! u, ]( N# L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) @8 B7 r0 h1 k/ w; w- Q我请你剖开它

* d+ B6 J1 V+ d+ _; Z  L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' n, m0 |- O* }( O1 m# \9 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>