【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! S4 ]( d$ J3 z! T4 C& P' VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- c1 F: D+ [, t. \! vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 e" w" y. p  L1 s9 N7 `) {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 b" q, |* o; t: mThe sky is happy down to its soul
" F9 Y( e" i: }0 l+ TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- z- V; n8 {1 q3 Y6 HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 k5 \# j7 M: M  X8 FYou needn’t fear anything
6 K5 z% T: }& `: V- YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 e. T9 _4 y. _) n) U+ y0 o0 s- bEvery other word you utter is love
0 R2 ?. ?& h9 |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; P$ a; ?: q+ i" o2 Z# ENothing can compare to my love
* R+ ~: x: P! _# y# ?2 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& e; t7 ?# E5 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; e4 {; ^+ i& |2 T' o) u! s- rI want so much to see inside your heart
7 U4 Q6 i6 g8 u7 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" u+ O- z9 \+ _; {* K. S0 L/ e0 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  j$ _' A, _1 E: B+ }" jWith such a tongue as yours,
) {& H; G1 \; UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 S; h8 |: Q- R$ {% G8 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ L  ^: U: V* j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. Z& u) @9 Z- O) i8 S; q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ u/ r1 m0 D3 Z8 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 i. H5 j3 U4 ]2 `" a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 G2 [# C! Y5 H0 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ R1 |* v: p' ^5 a% K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 y, ^, D) V5 D- i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" Z6 J3 J- r- d2 v) I$ l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: A4 Z8 j/ b. Q1 H  S& Q5 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 B& V+ Z, I9 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  H$ L& U: I3 [5 C5 F$ c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ n. o/ J8 z. C! q0 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 ~7 I0 F  ~! h; J( `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# O. G, A! A2 m' H2 ~! P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ A: o* b- D6 H) J* f3 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! b7 V! e$ l: E( C) @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 ~; y# g! N% ^* ?" z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ~; u  h& O  z$ q$ t$ W( o2 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& s. z$ l3 d& J; E0 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ Z7 E1 \$ `5 Y2 M6 _, s& W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 @9 U  G' F2 Q+ o1 m2 _; Z) ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& j2 {0 S+ [# ?# z0 M% @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: l* Y8 T- c1 F: Z* f+ `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 Y  ^8 v! ^7 L9 R% K7 }( h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 l: I: G! `8 c+ k+ C# n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: t/ o, T* a1 }我请你剖开它
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9 ^/ _/ I  f& t& D4 v+ N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>