【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 ]) J) E7 ^1 b7 u$ gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?; ]0 ~: b# CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# o0 @( E) `: Z) WSeeing the sky content with its love
; b2 L9 T9 J& X, pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( C- E& k+ w6 VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 E4 R, @" w8 U$ [$ d- ]I really want to know just how much you love me
2 ]( W% K7 |' A3 V6 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% r8 C( u3 x$ UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 J8 }% ?) L( M3 |# {2 k2 [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# n% L: a* ]8 ^( M1 L' L% SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 q& m4 R1 C9 ~# ^/ n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 f, x5 y/ m- A) i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* S: d3 }8 Z4 ^  ~% @. `1 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% g3 s7 n# o- R' \; }# X6 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 X" V' Y9 w! j5 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* z' g- N6 t2 i5 G/ t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, Y9 p) a- [' @3 R) K/ o* ~& ~! u  z# s# \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' l+ B% g+ O) q$ B' V- G/ i% |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- i) S; B$ a+ q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 P* W8 L7 F0 Q: ^$ p3 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 j) a* Y. b- q' i5 ~7 b2 W" N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# G3 U6 Q1 }! Y" [( k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 H4 s* C2 f7 ^6 W0 T  c1 X5 T5 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% C- S3 D! |4 H- i7 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 J" X& s$ {$ L3 `8 f! @1 l1 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# a2 V7 G% [0 V: d8 c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! u0 @0 g3 z# e3 q9 T; w! b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 F2 @- _! }* _( ?9 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% X2 o# {7 s* N' ~1 Y* f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 H/ r- `/ Q' o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ ^2 z, K- N3 A  t9 ^1 }' `5 Z$ z" q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ \, d# F  _2 U- B( _: ]; b8 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- x/ _# P7 r) v3 m7 H; I$ Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" y0 C4 I  q/ d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# D- [- h- ~( t; f0 Q% a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>