【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ F& I. g2 _' a7 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( d8 K5 `5 |7 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 a0 H! [# v1 A" ~With the moon kissing it every night
$ Z, [, I5 N2 |3 \# D% s' f; zSeeing the sky content with its love
( o2 S7 z8 K9 o0 d3 `- J3 s  }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 m8 u7 B  F) S& VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 V" t) B7 }# JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% v, Y+ \( z5 \$ O; dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" w% p# o! A! B. {1 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# j$ E) Y$ g' B( [3 D0 F% o4 {I’m still filled with fear
, e* L2 P/ @( ]8 z! PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 c4 y7 b; C, D- d; i- D  R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( D1 j- I* l& U) j4 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. {; j, _" b) I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* p" F* Y7 h! R& ]; i8 |& U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! r0 f  p7 T: g) X) d* k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& U5 {8 @! s. @+ }! J  U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! R7 m, e/ ^5 `- f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ S  w/ s. N( ~& x# u4 O1 v, P* o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' X3 V; c# w/ v8 \% h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' o. N: c, I3 z- B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, T- R8 q9 m+ v6 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ J+ R4 U' c: c' q" \- E1 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 R$ L( O6 c6 w9 W/ A& O! m' i# M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 z3 i- F5 E* E. {, ]. O; T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 c7 z. o, H; F4 |0 Y+ B1 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# ?6 v) t* v" W! v2 O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 H) \# `( e  q  k2 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; M0 B$ }$ ~+ T" g6 Z: W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( K2 O. X) l% `$ [" o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 [  y, G9 d; \% Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. O5 [! B1 k7 E  |% D/ R" k<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 l$ w0 g9 t4 G, g6 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Q+ d( O( W4 L4 A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 b) s- P( B2 |7 K# z; G7 K, ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 n& L& R! g7 Y) L0 L* g1 \' M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. k. q" Z  Q7 i* I* c* j; p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: _6 ]' c% N7 q, S7 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>