【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ e8 S  G- n7 r" ?8 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& ^: H  q9 n3 }/ y% g+ fWith the moon kissing it every night
* A0 }& v6 p0 t" u$ y: ^* RSeeing the sky content with its love
% L4 _. J5 B9 w8 b' vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' w8 t& W# f5 L* b! i( n) VYou needn’t fear anything
/ c5 q. F* |3 p. s) H- uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 D7 a& L5 p, O% x: D  nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ s- C6 |8 N* u! t/ ?! }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# f/ @) Y( G" g9 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% ~1 u, D/ O1 }! |/ L) V/ |: LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! ^2 ?5 \- i' _% s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 t! H6 U9 Q9 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ V' [! u, q8 i  ~( ~. z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) w: y3 N5 g& t/ N4 r2 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; |% o3 L! A. d; l! K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- }2 s8 H# Z9 L- D3 w8 v3 P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' M+ C" Q# E4 F0 i) ]& P/ y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( k2 W/ \. Z! t/ T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 x/ J& p+ ?, _7 D3 {# O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: w0 t6 [3 ~# Y' }3 p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% G; ^2 G# R: |* z$ E. Y. u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( r; y) K1 m# m* }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ q* Z9 D. g5 c! {# n: d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ Q% t8 d+ E4 `. B6 H! G( E5 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 m) [+ U! V& ], s7 ?1 p$ s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 W$ y/ F) h4 O9 K! K# ^6 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& C3 M/ y9 f5 z% r8 \( ]6 d; a, W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: X$ u5 \* H; k$ O0 r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) d4 z% Y% q4 c$ P  g" K, \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; i( L. S" a" y* B! J! p4 m4 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ u. u. D$ Q6 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* }0 R& A+ b4 c% y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 F3 V/ T+ i6 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 Y) G8 F1 X9 a2 Z* f' [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ V- q7 c9 \  i- x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 m2 {' m8 }2 e6 a) `5 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! B% G4 G9 W' h  P  h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  x! o1 o7 d+ w/ y7 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 t0 I( K( S* o, N我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% J( D$ a0 {& |. c. L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>