【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 L- I& x: a8 I5 z1 X  M8 g5 F6 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 C0 Q- ?$ L) U* A$ p8 G- t4 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 k! k( H) v8 u( I1 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( W* g# M  N2 a8 x6 b- T. n& TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% o  \3 ^8 [0 C- _8 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' J% ^! J4 a% q* aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, E- s. ^4 q5 Q9 o# Y4 O  S2 IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ X$ s. G/ H" q5 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 L" k, x! {3 F, ?I love you I love you with all my heart
- t2 X$ _" \4 k' oNothing can compare to my love
6 \; B. l! {, f3 @3 q; P+ TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# o4 ^! v0 u3 F, ]& }8 D/ n% EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ J: p5 f# W- C2 s2 o1 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 V2 `/ P0 |: s* J) _! X. F6 lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 I9 k0 q5 V3 @9 p0 H9 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 G* d& w7 z- M2 E% b0 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 b& Z# n3 M. S" VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 H9 A2 B' p) ~( z+ {, RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# O+ Z, y; _1 Z/ t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* X9 s$ o* A$ o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 J6 s# }$ A1 ]8 J2 E4 j5 n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 Z) w4 Q2 c$ x: {& F% g% c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& l: b( Z( q: r7 y+ m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 B$ y; U6 O- m* d% ?6 p+ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( P: G  x$ V- Q" X' Z& e: c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ G: T9 \1 l( U7 G$ s4 u1 o& n: R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; u8 ]" E( W& l0 Q; N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 H; B  U" v" [9 o5 f4 U% f) C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 I6 s/ N2 V$ e$ d! `  J1 v+ e9 |( j' {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& g$ N) z: |  x; V! r0 j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# N4 u5 y- }+ m. Z1 ]- O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ?" ?% T9 {2 Q  q! Y  ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! @, q  a4 \- n0 e  I' x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 L# K8 G2 z) o  B" J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ W; t8 Z5 ^/ L# u& U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) T9 Z8 v& m1 M: x2 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. E0 t2 L% y4 ~: U/ S' N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- b  ]: n0 p5 o# h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% ^6 l* B7 g( x% e1 v9 [. Y  g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- S) j( @$ i& W9 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ f" L- e0 A: p  B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 s. }; K. s* O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ t& q( W3 \; \0 a3 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 K& l- I1 J$ J( U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ]3 f) h' f8 ~3 L' ?0 @1 U4 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ s4 A4 v( b2 s& q  {9 G3 o% [我请你剖开它

5 N* Q9 M. m' m1 k  _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>