【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' B2 n' y3 }) C/ c( L+ N+ w9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
" H4 o; k# e* Q% H3 B! pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 Z" D9 P" y2 b; }/ _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" n% c! Y8 y' c7 P3 h- M/ lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 N/ R! r' O9 }: w: Q7 G  jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' h0 Z8 |! _! ~0 w% J, G4 s) lI want so much to see inside your heart
- V7 E, ^; N# BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 F2 P% E8 a0 j* U8 LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; \/ v, w4 R/ ^7 iWith such a tongue as yours,
5 ?- a; r" c/ f6 e9 g  cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ S/ s' E) \* K4 ]/ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 U- w+ O: r& X6 p9 X& j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( j- s: g1 r) [5 Z4 d" V  Z7 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ E& T  z: g0 s: z* a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 C, v/ V, f- X! V$ j1 w/ P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 H( b* h+ `1 d+ _5 h% L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# [7 K% L+ ?5 }0 B( ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( }1 \" j, L. G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 m* Y- a) v- k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 z( x1 @  A& s6 i2 X9 L4 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: v) d- i( I% c; |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' x* z! |" e( {7 q% L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 J5 O' g1 d0 h, I& V5 Y+ w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 P# h' m: l+ s- R) G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 J4 C/ {  w+ g1 w5 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  h& k* I# l1 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: k( n- n+ ?0 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 A( ]5 ]" O) C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  O- v. P( K1 z$ i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% s; ~, Y$ e5 t- T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- o& J, j, x/ V2 F) y8 G, X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ G" z$ t6 u4 m: g; o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* x0 I9 e; g# M9 z. K( J4 G1 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' x5 w$ j8 J+ j. ?0 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 s4 H% I# a+ l& M) Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& B7 c, z: C" J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* ~2 H, N$ C9 a* b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, K6 A  y. e6 q8 \2 ~! e7 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( `; \" C; l. B% L: o: o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 f. E; X1 T' L: y% j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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! F& e1 l: ~  r7 w* | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 I7 P. h% s$ w5 p9 Q0 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>