【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% h* t: _4 i& m" s4 u! FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' R) o% U9 r. |* h) t5 M+ @3 f2 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; P4 M/ ]; s3 Z( q" Y& p# V# IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' j- Z. P, n. z# lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% S" D3 I9 r( i( O# H! LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 M! d: V* V; Q  F1 E3 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) R. b8 T7 Y# pI regret not dying
7 a& ]) q, W  G9 H: r) v3 Z9 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( s3 Z) p" Z: }With such a tongue as yours,
5 o* B. ?! K$ V* jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& a5 N  @- G4 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ g& I; z( V: k% Q1 d! R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; b! H1 e+ Q8 v/ u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 O1 l- z0 V4 A2 O% B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) x) @0 u  e/ u0 L  u5 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 `) [* B9 Q: ]( q6 {0 R9 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ t: D- k1 X( N5 p( l: r# T0 c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: Q/ r( n% w! g& R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( d) O" A2 l) A. ^* D; n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& v% n0 D% j* c0 j* E- e6 v5 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! G/ L7 f, e7 B& Q; \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! \$ z" W+ Z7 C/ F& q" p" A* e<P>你无需担心</P>
& \' |2 m7 x. `- x  a- p9 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 `+ A4 i4 B0 Q1 |4 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* c" G' S# S5 Q( i% s% \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( w* M! b8 ?$ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( W: I+ _" {5 z2 X0 h1 I3 k- ^: O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, f( q4 c6 _3 k( n% L' h" ^! g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 n4 z( u6 o, O$ a1 O' F8 K1 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* ~- f" X, P9 ?- m& d0 b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 ?8 s" f* O% {: Q5 N0 c2 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: U  ]4 `: \! g* ~1 J1 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ a  n6 L) v. g2 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" w- S3 Z6 h# A8 D3 y* x+ D9 i: ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, p: p1 v& s$ @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! x2 Q# l$ C) q, z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- R. ~8 \4 F5 s1 \! q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 s- D1 `& ~7 @8 D) O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 G% [( u7 \! Y' [' c& s3 r+ a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 J, L; M+ m" B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>