【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& ], r+ Q: ]+ a9 r, u: M歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, n1 |' D: ^7 \2 J' tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 i) f) N) |% b5 R7 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 A3 g4 |# c& C; U' {( K& JSeeing the sky content with its love
4 B& B8 i3 F  m# j9 a0 W+ i# PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ^9 g4 J* _) y" e- S1 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: y1 w. h3 E6 \) q) B4 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) O$ i4 X0 d$ G6 T# B! `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ {" g5 O  Q% C; MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( P" m* x9 u5 m+ Q7 IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ b5 O1 H: F7 C3 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 N( t1 q0 \+ {6 z: Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" m; m- `* g) ^. Q% Q& B: U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 _+ X) ^7 b9 p$ i0 w8 p$ }' U, C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ I7 g# ?. R: J0 r7 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ ~3 [9 i, V2 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& A" a3 t$ i1 H; n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  Z2 _$ y. E5 r* z% X# I/ D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: w- {  |7 G3 g7 Z% a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 l) f5 Y7 |* g4 x; b' o7 i) }. w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; s" _% F" k6 i$ X<P>你无需担心</P>
9 d. H$ N  D5 \* W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 z% ^  ]% F4 V: x' l  n+ C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* Z3 l: J9 c' e7 F& u4 l2 Z2 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. ~7 D% @0 z0 `1 m1 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ H0 |  W1 d# p/ f5 I" Z7 L2 i% D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# k2 g( t; L' C8 V# n' U) b( @# c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ g5 r6 @- E) S* C* j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- Z$ G2 I/ I/ X" t/ U- F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& f0 @: l% Z7 m" Z8 t0 `1 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 B) D- H: }9 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; s* T  M# V+ W$ M; h' l: ~+ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- G; ]6 N$ j- Z& b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- p( X, A2 R, z1 _" x* E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) d# y* q- z' ~! ]5 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* z2 R4 g: V- _; c4 [1 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! v# K5 V; ?* J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

$ m. Z& ]5 ^2 T2 s+ } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! e* O- H5 v( |, g  n) ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>