【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  F* n! {" x8 ]/ q; P3 P! f% L0 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, H. q6 L* N& p0 l" JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! x( h" B" r& a* IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" l. b8 J8 X" V# @* LYou needn’t fear anything
" u  R$ [5 R- Q! i+ zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 A+ B( x; L7 K4 k( W1 e, |5 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  D) r1 J- s  a0 OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ t8 m2 ?; ^9 b$ B! ], `I want so much to see inside your heart
& A( v8 T, b7 {* I  M) DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 l$ A& E5 y' X: j4 J3 o' n1 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& u1 k7 i  {" a  I, m8 CI regret not dying
& h# X$ B1 R* @% x+ wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 l) J7 k' Q; l7 C( W5 sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 x% c4 _& {. P; l8 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, H# `8 k2 J4 i% B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 E" s" W0 U" Y6 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( p, r3 {+ |1 W' Y- J) T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ H8 W( y; i( U# G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# d* y5 [: m. L- P8 c6 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 Z! N  @1 ]2 r3 G& o, L, [6 g( S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, g* }1 h( f% J% b) B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% J+ k- c5 O/ J+ ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 B' R/ K8 e5 H" l3 k4 w6 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' ?- w, N  J2 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. U  y, u% ]% L5 Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 a/ X+ u2 M- G0 q; L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' d, A! o2 Y$ q# w2 ?' A- z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! I% n2 d3 x$ ~4 F  I" ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 |) N5 ?/ G" y, _! i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* y+ x' S& b: {5 Q- V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 O3 a- \& w( M) ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, i, G9 z, R6 a0 u. W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ x; h; @! o5 j9 f1 C- u) m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" w4 n  K9 n. [; N9 D+ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 m* q/ h" [: |2 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) e/ g; H, S* i7 A1 j! n0 ^0 A4 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ K7 i5 x" I- U) M3 k+ V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; O5 v* U2 i6 s  G7 U7 W5 b8 {: |7 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; O. g( O0 u/ x2 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
% Z$ K$ y: q7 |
我请你剖开它
0 t: q* ^( D: H9 X9 U; e
) U. D0 B9 ~- w0 `& g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>