【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 j7 s+ _# x0 y, R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! f7 J4 [2 H& B% rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" \, b* a! i7 z5 U" oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 ]7 e: U; |+ aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; E# F1 @& G+ \9 ?4 nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 g* Y/ a, b: mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) c! q1 w0 E$ f! @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" F8 S+ ]5 x8 i6 K9 `  |& a. o. SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) l: ~$ }; c  p& ]# u, VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& Q" B" S. ~2 J2 WI regret not dying
; W  T0 \$ n/ l+ s! XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) O2 D6 H, M0 d! A5 q4 N- nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 C) _$ p1 j; G; J8 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ J* T0 [) ?3 a2 d( m4 c' B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 F# g" v3 i1 |* K+ c5 k; B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# n3 p; e- Z( _# Y  f4 R1 j: \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. T4 M' A. _( r5 E* Q; ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ }+ ~  f+ q' F8 c6 i& F$ p1 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 t& j. b  [3 x5 k0 u2 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( @* h9 h6 n+ |* C, [2 T% E" L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# I0 a7 {2 L4 B$ O: H: Y% Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 w* Y6 G5 _, {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# j+ Z" T2 x, S  i9 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: i1 R3 K. p! L2 @4 b1 f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* {: X0 {1 ~( u1 ?, }$ c9 W7 u4 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 K$ @& L9 E8 Z+ z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& Q% `" n" }& m& L) Z& d7 b" P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) u: _2 t# C& V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ x0 G8 f+ S& a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& y, j2 u8 M" F) L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; \: P1 _5 ?; g6 v' D# t+ ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% b/ |+ m1 u& H# w1 S0 U" V( Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>