【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 U4 P4 Z6 `* R3 ?  c5 `: ?  qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 H8 a! h8 j4 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: `" d8 O9 n) @With the moon kissing it every night
8 E* m: [! J1 I5 M: pSeeing the sky content with its love
6 s1 @- @3 N8 k) [- x9 y/ O3 E0 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% M0 Z& j# H$ A' j9 @# rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& ~3 i4 w+ ^, A& YEvery other word you utter is love
  G# j  d. J* L6 [8 q) X+ CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% R. U. v& i' L* TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ]% R! c2 u7 r$ d" iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) T9 q7 o: J3 l; @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ C) D# ?: H( C2 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ J% u8 L! [* l2 L- b1 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 a9 ]  p2 R% v3 @1 j0 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( W$ T8 |; l6 @, ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' f3 ]$ T" ]) I; M6 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ g* n  v+ u4 M! B% `" G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 J2 d" i9 U( A- `4 F$ q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 B1 N3 i/ j6 W3 l" `( e/ J& b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 C8 c( [3 C6 n1 }; G; U) G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 [& I0 x, w3 I, x) }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 r8 s) O$ G  X# `* O8 s3 x2 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) W! R1 |+ {0 E, h) ^9 U. L4 e9 V1 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ Y4 V5 c3 n' p. }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- }1 {7 W' }* x, m$ f2 b' G, i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 d/ Q) G/ V; @* m) R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 E+ X% r1 y8 Z( _  }  N7 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  y# G1 Z5 J+ y/ G0 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 E& y" r# }: F) g. m0 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 P6 m9 C; s/ A$ J* H) t6 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& h4 C: O& x1 F7 S4 p+ U( j% \. x! A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: V. D% C! W' Y$ R, \0 O; d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 k" @4 z7 A  ]4 K" X7 _6 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. z" d* @4 N1 c9 a' R* w  P% u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  i9 E  G, }) R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 r6 t7 l" m6 m  B3 ^% c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 L- Y* K& \, V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ]' Z) {, Y2 I9 W4 y  y, r% F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* a1 W+ e+ y: F, C! {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 B, [- w& u" h+ f" N/ I. R1 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 l) ?, G( F6 A# G/ l. K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 L' O3 g4 H- V3 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 N7 W7 G" Q5 k% D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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