【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" G4 g& P1 a! T" V- B% B歌词我附在后面。
& g# O; T& |- ^0 c! \, \The moonlight is shining brightly,
! |1 \' H5 B3 G5 |& G0 J( ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
" g+ b; [! w7 q* GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! c8 a2 n7 ^% U) D$ T5 o) GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 J0 b2 H  r! a) V! N) \The sky is happy down to its soul
! _4 o' c( Y6 \, p  {With the moon kissing it every night
' {: @5 T1 |* Y+ YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ n& E0 B: F1 n- }7 E5 e2 W1 D: SYou needn’t fear anything
: o0 P! H  A- k( C& F7 r4 o8 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! A; i$ m; F- r  N- jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 p; f* P, y/ iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 @) s+ |/ k; E$ wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 @; V0 A# s8 _" S" wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. e4 a. I3 o8 Y/ ^3 mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 R( K( u  C; u/ w4 s# F5 OI regret not dying
4 W- U/ a+ D$ q) t2 k$ S0 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 v" K# ]* Y' l5 E1 C3 ^: ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, B6 w3 r3 g# t, N+ R& PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, R) K, u$ p- S& _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' C$ p7 D3 y7 {3 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. q$ U) r/ }. @! ~9 N8 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" ]" s5 k, ^' c9 U) J% f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( V$ y9 R8 A# M  G5 M9 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 I* }+ n/ w; E, P! e4 m- d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, v% s9 d) A* Q& ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 P# Y7 [! c) `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 l, p' E: f+ C; g% Q8 I; R/ S) f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! q( u- l3 e* s8 y& r* f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 U: y' R+ i# T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; b5 ?) `9 q$ P2 L  l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ M( V5 Y4 o, ~$ P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" I  _: s" d+ Q' o3 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( T+ U/ t, E: ]0 R/ T: O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& f( S: L3 z. T. V( x. T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# O8 `8 s  D7 Z/ w9 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ |6 ]! F* P  i" H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; F, _5 R4 k3 G- m+ U6 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 g9 E  N; D" ?2 O8 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  o/ B/ E7 Z4 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. A* N: f: R( n& L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* }# D! z9 T. M; N0 |  M+ l  |: F$ u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; }$ ?* c0 T& W( V9 n, o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) `1 H" ]- n# T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; u, c8 V6 m3 |* f; M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 j2 T0 r; W6 z  U  ~, b" j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- z# }% r" ~' ?9 L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 K+ s& ]5 ^6 `4 e  K/ _# i我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Q7 u" \1 t3 ]2 U, c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>