【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
' q) H& d, k& p1 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 X; @3 W- \$ x* u% UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 D. Y1 W: u5 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 [8 f# H; o9 M5 J% bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 g0 `" p" C9 P7 m7 c9 k9 ?$ VEvery other word you utter is love
) S( v& P: J1 g/ @I really want to know just how much you love me
. b3 K4 O- ~1 L+ f. \% f$ DI love you I love you with all my heart
# s( f0 s4 e5 |* }: D; eNothing can compare to my love
# }8 s, ?- j' F% ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 J. y2 }5 U. e- m  [% }, y. aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' V7 k1 Q* E9 Z7 \! t  ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& y, T* B" y7 ?, U+ b) hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ ~# ~# z  R( X& x9 ?9 pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- v: r8 i/ h. _. @  m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" J" W6 a0 i) p1 M$ K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" S7 J. u+ q! E* k3 b- b$ o- {( _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 v& h5 ^* u' o) p8 s1 k* ]/ v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ H1 J* i$ `+ H! ]% r; A  Y3 o# ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" Z1 C5 u8 y8 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ E: h+ X, X1 l1 ^9 |7 @0 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ~0 Y; u( P! [; i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 u4 a/ G; ~7 h5 r% A& q, N1 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ f3 w( c- d& s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! c# u" j$ l3 O! O$ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 C) }& }0 K& S- `* t+ B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  `, b3 S* ]" {. D# }$ M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! [" _6 e2 @( _1 S6 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 @+ m  O9 D- j5 O6 {" M8 H2 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. B% m4 @6 i/ |& Z5 R% `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 }6 V4 Y/ {" v0 E6 J/ Z: D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 s" M0 r4 m! g, z2 e1 \1 w" l5 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, h9 t- I+ X- N4 Z$ W+ A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% h$ w. M. c( P$ _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 A7 S$ s5 L5 G) Y) R3 @5 ]9 o9 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 w& o& y. j# s" p' x. |2 C. }: T" s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>