【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, P# ]( i5 h: R  g4 r& p# b; ^" ]( eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* q0 r- O: C5 \# ?/ p7 n3 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( h( R5 g6 W9 c$ ]* l) fSeeing the sky content with its love
* |' ?' B4 P1 r: rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 I/ `' A* a1 hYou needn’t fear anything
+ L$ v' Y2 x- C" t$ ^; V1 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 a5 ~8 Z. R5 e2 M: R/ _& {. wI really want to know just how much you love me
2 W) z! L, Z$ @/ LI love you I love you with all my heart
% e- |. n, |1 k/ u# qNothing can compare to my love
5 ~" k! u- ~  o+ D0 P+ s3 ?Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 \, D9 ?2 e8 L) y# v/ J# OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 H8 q/ S6 K: @& C  |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) S- o' }  F9 L/ qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; v8 O5 w1 x/ d, OWith such a tongue as yours,
* H3 H8 u+ a3 o4 @& p" mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, @5 r+ V6 @" i" ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- D' t* M6 x  G, W6 l- p% ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" ^1 F7 S' K+ }2 V2 @: e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' r+ W' F6 X, t/ h5 s7 _/ D7 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ?% A# T5 Q7 ^3 _% j$ T- W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( K- z# u7 `; U! g/ Y% l+ i! B/ G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! f9 E9 a) R+ h8 M9 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! W0 _( H" G! j; |5 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  {+ B: W% P$ Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 f" X. r: k& G' ~8 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 m" ]- n, Y- }! |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% f2 ]% H$ B& H8 L6 |5 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ?: _7 K* `- n  t5 w, R4 g! I( u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- ?8 L5 E, c- J0 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- G0 o- E# C( ^' g, Q/ O' P. S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' e+ ~6 g1 T" d; e$ ~' G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" h1 x$ p6 O4 ^* V# }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( g; g  a. q. ]; U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 s' T  I7 S/ L6 N  |! X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: }3 c1 {: r: x0 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! e. K) `+ ]6 S2 \8 G/ w/ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ^, t7 }) M9 L. ?  y4 L4 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>