【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& `4 Z! Z( Q" }; H7 z, lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 a! z5 ]& c: r% _' H7 M5 y9 S$ NWith the moon kissing it every night
, k$ S3 i1 V! K7 @  k* vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 p& s/ }) \) n* V, `4 J; D6 v9 V* T5 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 z& v7 e0 g9 U8 v; N& c5 S/ pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 o6 m1 C( A1 W2 @  }# b, SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 q. ]3 X' Z. K8 R% m# nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, |) c4 X; h9 Y2 s: J/ X( {: O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 J0 w$ M9 u2 l- F  ^" Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' o* w$ I& A7 l5 o) V" Y2 `7 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( X1 |7 L5 n2 n# |) z, Q$ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" W  e0 g6 ?: o- H$ Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* M. u* Q+ G% ?, ?8 b& J+ u' @$ r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ t  S) ]- t( {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% ~$ N; p: ?8 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 K  `7 _6 R0 p4 e) t3 ?+ x3 u6 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) q- [8 A, c  Z% u1 {% c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) M" ]/ H, |& K: {8 h) J4 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 Z4 Z1 \, W1 Y* _2 H- H2 X# H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 o( F% K# {' [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; |1 |) k, m7 M" K8 ^% U  J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ v, @& J& K1 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. o/ X2 U0 Z6 q/ h$ e/ p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 t6 C3 f, a8 s" h0 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 A) e/ \, l9 @9 u$ U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 e( O! {0 M! B) E6 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) `( n, E( ?  [* O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" D; K3 Y0 g5 Y5 C. [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ q: U+ p7 A8 c( n" |" F- ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 [( x  N: i2 ^, w0 r% A" j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) @9 i8 F( s4 F# [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ v  ?' f/ {% H; I- C4 e2 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' M1 m. ~2 B7 Q, V7 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 V' a0 i. X0 x0 l: E" r, e3 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ]' d2 X! D, [$ t# X" X* o6 L4 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 o& r. @/ T9 n9 t: J" s. Y8 B1 l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 Y# J1 @& {7 j+ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# y0 U" f  f+ N: K) x' k. D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 R! G- D! p" L" D% h9 e% T. T$ j+ }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" a3 P3 O7 E. Q/ O% E, Z- o$ B5 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 h& e, v! y! v& g% a) M6 v$ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

8 L% q* K: k, v7 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>