【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ a3 m6 s: ^- `( E( V& P& I6 A( k# S6 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- M; `5 z9 z4 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 g5 Z3 f4 R) VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% K1 ^) W9 o1 IWith the moon kissing it every night
" x  `4 V9 f$ p$ w. E: wSeeing the sky content with its love
2 \- P. {" w& H" `! J, G/ hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- B- ]5 w  X! j& S2 v; ~5 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# [4 O, y: }" H  ^Every other word you utter is love
0 s8 p' W1 D1 }- ZI really want to know just how much you love me
# c; @# |) W) T9 T  A1 R  T' dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ c- C( N/ ^8 v# f1 g# ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# i# z$ m; g! S/ G, u6 o: hI want so much to see inside your heart
* C+ N7 J5 e+ v; AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 v" g/ z5 R; E) E* JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# g0 R- h& t& r$ d1 }: a2 t) P+ Q, ?$ D  hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  v& x& l6 g1 @7 i# rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; T6 u. e: n3 g& D- `# A3 D. i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ K/ S8 }0 B& C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 q4 D# n5 A/ N+ B% z( x7 k, H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. u' i2 Z6 d6 [2 q* t, p4 T" t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" V' j! E) j/ H  Q- N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 D4 E, X6 q" Y6 n9 X% \$ w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 Q  d& `& E  \  a" p7 Q+ d6 S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; ^  ~6 O' ~7 M/ {- h# W/ L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! ^! j1 {- d& H) L  o, U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! E2 b0 a6 [/ Q1 e# X/ H; a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 R6 O! n  I/ E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; q  Y5 c: x1 e* s% N  {/ Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 D# `1 E% J6 C1 `( w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) q. r" q$ B6 O' `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Z# B2 C! b" j3 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 L0 P* v2 {1 a, z+ n& j( y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ J0 }. c$ o# P$ S% j" }% P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ Y6 k( k& g* o2 V2 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ Z" L" C$ }  m" x1 J% O+ ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; C$ @0 e( a% Y( h# X  z9 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" V& h! x1 _  {# J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 X) z: `# v! h* x1 ^. N. {  [1 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) G7 \5 z2 F6 V; z1 {& Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ^; p0 @: P; t6 }, x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- N! [* m" ^" t2 c( E  I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 M, e5 M* `8 z9 e* U: r9 c: H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( [2 n& g* a( H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 K1 h% _6 l# X2 i; o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 r% A: F0 U. ^8 Y9 ]( w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>