【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* O  b! `- V# V5 c& g5 u& bThe sky is happy down to its soul
' B9 O+ l- W8 ]; ^! KWith the moon kissing it every night
: Q* |, x. b. o) qSeeing the sky content with its love
- _3 j' u9 q  d; d4 s7 m8 P+ e# }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# J2 a' p) `% i4 K3 k# uI really want to know just how much you love me
7 w$ N5 |4 H1 cI love you I love you with all my heart
9 F7 N* q* P/ Z$ j! ^) ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' j+ [- b: X# k5 e) p7 W; ~- k. bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" ~) D0 W, F' `5 TI’m still filled with fear
! V/ k+ d. n$ D/ c2 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. J, y6 N, P- Q; L# XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% ]' M: x( u% @1 b, l. iWith such a tongue as yours,
- O# f# i9 M( p! B1 ^9 Q- yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; D  i  \8 t$ s' u9 b. Q$ aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( u% B8 |- C' ~) Z2 e( ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 x; B% @: }+ Y5 i/ M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" H. ^' f2 o$ ]8 a5 u1 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% ]. x6 f; j8 B9 N+ b' V' R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ K- E0 u" k# o$ S# i3 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. q& B& j, ^3 j: D( R9 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 R' p+ H2 Y% R" |! w7 K- H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 ~/ o8 o0 i* Q6 G% v  R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( i& |: j/ @! g8 c( g6 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% A9 d3 }  ~! h% N0 Z& H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. H# p, y0 m4 k8 M6 z$ H& y# |% a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. A2 @2 [' y5 N( W9 L/ a! H! a, `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: u( J+ w. T2 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ S8 f/ b% C+ S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! V/ M7 B; \0 d. b$ v) Q& y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 q' t; d( b( N" ^2 P1 K4 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ c  T7 b6 R5 l# n, S% J& ?8 }' G6 P4 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 a* W% o7 b  O3 w; O8 t, R( I; b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 x% Q: c' i7 \' S3 Q* i  N! }' i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 A% r) q2 A1 w; Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- ]5 b" E( Y, Z2 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& V8 b/ }7 |8 P& \. x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 ]& }  H9 S9 N# I% ~, u$ ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( C9 R6 U8 o( b$ R3 ~( E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. a8 Y- E. U! P1 j' Z7 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( [4 l. M  O+ I/ j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" k- a% r" Y7 ^7 B  R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 c2 t. H9 |% a  A6 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% Z% g* F$ E1 q7 j; |我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& y3 P; O8 |. v2 L% `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>