【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ t7 Q7 D$ _, e; jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' [' P: i3 f, \; ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 p9 Z; |* q& M' b: fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 o3 q% u' J7 p- ]With the moon kissing it every night
$ g) N/ t: s% J" HSeeing the sky content with its love
3 D5 _8 {  p4 @# I: AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- {- {/ t2 b, b* D5 I% @) e1 x$ @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 p; Z2 w  z6 I+ f& SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- X0 v$ g- U& ?, o% ]& i6 [- j4 INothing can compare to my love
' l3 R. j& y! x: E! aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' U; p4 t, k) k6 J6 n2 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 k0 k! ^1 L& b4 s6 q) H1 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& ]% ^+ H& L# T; @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" j7 R# [2 U1 ^# p4 n% I7 ?- UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# t7 Q% ?) ?0 A  f0 u7 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, z/ B# _. [* l" o3 M. q4 R+ I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ p9 E* @+ K+ O  Q' u$ ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 L& \# x6 L& g' ?) E9 T6 v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 S( P/ _& s2 v( t2 o2 g1 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 }  P3 r$ [& d' X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" a$ m$ f" _# R+ }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ s: ^* }: A$ N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: u2 h6 R- H0 p7 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& j# p1 B% o" b) o9 i. V5 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. L( S* I8 x# l: i9 q5 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ~+ \8 r/ _( y& a# G! P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 m) t5 f% T- b4 [$ D: X, w# g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) x- U5 r4 i& _6 C1 B1 \! Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) O' F5 y5 ?3 H5 U% p+ h2 K8 J$ I4 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 @- ?9 \3 e, x; X8 \6 [( {0 R' A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 N2 @2 _* C" l1 ~/ ^$ l! j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  Y% W1 K$ K9 U3 R1 v3 ]" K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 t7 t$ v) x& w3 h! ~0 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# b' X( s% k3 R3 t, W* s1 P我请你剖开它
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) o! k- }8 V$ y3 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>