【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 w  c$ K( u- qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, }( j& L0 @/ N/ n4 H: zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% A) i! ?& g" p$ wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: [# ^6 B6 r( |% F- NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- `7 p  e+ m& V5 k5 WI really want to know just how much you love me
6 N8 [$ |( A/ O, v& @# xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! n0 ^* k) r" V% h: NI’m still filled with fear
" X) N" v& r  E4 \/ EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 r1 V5 l, y2 a) c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" H; O8 h' s4 Z% J. r- I: Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- y$ x0 x: z6 i, w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# \/ B; Q8 [8 v4 X0 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ w& K$ O9 s: D% W; T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, b0 I, G4 Q8 E. b; V4 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 l9 e4 J! X# U$ z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 O( x2 \- G' v$ g, |" k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ~& t& v+ ^' W- U$ P( r; G0 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) w9 W* z, g, B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 X7 O3 l6 @7 c# n  j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" c. z% Y: v1 B7 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 w* ?# B) a! L% `7 D8 S4 U' V7 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) V5 o) o8 `4 L8 L6 k" Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 G3 D" c% K' x" H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) }( Y* d9 d2 j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; @* _6 M( g3 d/ c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ V5 y4 a$ ]0 T9 L; ?$ Z, C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 z6 Q. L2 R2 u" l' z* Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 `2 i" h' n; [( e) p2 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: {: M, V; ^+ r0 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- X2 _" Z4 Z! p$ I9 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& l  R- |8 K$ L# A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' e, G5 J" [' q- ~9 J  M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ U+ X) i9 K( t' N( |2 I. W& A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 e  ^9 P7 M6 h( [* C" Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>