【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; I% Q; U# W- u& [# lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! P4 X& r" e3 d9 l4 T) x) {! WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 u: g4 M; l% B. EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% R4 \& D' B. EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) h9 U, I( X) B5 v! U% X, X! S, ^I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 u; L1 ]5 y& f! xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* |7 C$ ~6 ?* Y! H& E! M) kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: F: ~9 Q% Y6 R1 yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# P, |& v/ P5 B) Y; _9 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' \# c0 r: Q  K3 a  h3 S/ UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( c( Q: i; j) u9 k, i+ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% s4 ^. \1 B  B0 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 |5 @, u8 b- w  _4 z1 _2 F6 p1 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( l  m8 }& C$ B1 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! i) W! S4 O0 S, {0 P5 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 p0 {& i) E) v* U, z- v' m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; ]  m+ r& N* O- ?, b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! ]5 l! h4 x' j; g2 v+ [) |7 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' A; u# u/ g* i! [& j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) P" `! t2 U; x5 z9 F" g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! @. `2 u3 K1 c, y" ^' p  G<P>你无需担心</P>
" {7 D! m8 w5 d' A; M' Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 T, l* Y0 W6 I, S, u7 s. v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# W: }0 K$ @8 b6 H- h  k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ V1 W9 C+ k& `# a, E7 \$ d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 \! D7 T( X. T1 n3 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 J. l0 V: P6 q, I; D% d, H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ N$ ]: {  o2 J3 t# \, n  i+ q% a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ E/ F3 s6 C4 G. k. H/ P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ D  M1 b6 E3 L6 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ O" q" F/ S7 H2 j/ s6 s! X3 z- C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ e/ M! l1 Z% m" b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 N4 A, U! j- Q! I& R( t  W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- U2 W3 d' J1 t" Y; p8 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
( V9 x4 [) v, O7 X- ?* ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  J& V8 Q) V, x0 k4 y3 W. {2 o5 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) H1 p+ i2 T1 n- y: d: F: K0 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 Q' H: J7 m5 b" x# q  k* w0 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ J3 x: S/ R/ B" u, u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( V; R0 E  `+ h& Z2 `# S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* b. O/ K+ V& W, S+ a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>