【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) d& M5 i  ]8 {9 f" A歌词我附在后面。
4 e, c5 y6 z' x% l7 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
' g! R' r" ?; k: X" Y  N) dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) T% S: }) f" P% zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) l; u0 N+ T0 c! r: Y6 u7 M* O$ _With the moon kissing it every night
# s4 z6 T0 D8 SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  f% v' w* c" ~4 ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" I7 Z4 {& Q( p* MI really want to know just how much you love me
1 @0 M: i5 W$ R0 pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 N! I% c( B1 T0 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: E# G  m% ~4 W) e# x1 D0 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ K( G2 n8 I; H7 N$ Q! QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# N. N6 d; m! \2 BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 d0 o  w0 t& v8 N- ?% EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 }$ Q1 Y6 B7 E1 \5 y7 ~  C: YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) w. q- t3 I$ m  j% D/ G) p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: i1 ]  ^- q! Y9 t/ \4 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  Y3 q; K% C, j0 Y' o: x! J2 F% M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 ^# T1 O  B4 X. U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& @- p% |0 k( K( v5 U5 h6 V3 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# e2 g& O% r+ X- k" W1 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% U5 E- [* D8 _" M# A# f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ y3 {; }, t8 k, r5 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 k  E) e) ?5 G4 K; y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! N& Z/ E, B; y- m' q  J- {" n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 e' p1 q8 G1 a3 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 y: m/ r/ |8 ^3 F& W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( Z; J5 }; S8 o' r* G5 z1 _+ H9 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. S; C9 Y& D8 s0 l" G! ~/ B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% r3 v# Q' `% ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 X* M- y9 m+ z) a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 |  M7 `; G2 \- k# y3 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 C' J4 K/ j3 j. F  R+ }% J1 ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 t% j$ [' F( M" X9 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- k9 e! y& A- w3 B8 P& g  E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 w+ b! g, J  m2 m0 o- z) T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 Q) m) }* A7 E% N& {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ^; L" O  b. @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& @1 D' R5 q4 Z$ K9 s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% x5 W5 ]$ g4 ^+ t! E$ O0 I7 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 ]8 l4 @4 Q( d3 R7 U5 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: W+ ~" s6 |: B9 p7 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 u; r8 [: |, ^# A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 ]: S) d5 M4 y9 ]  `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, v4 o% w& N* V8 }* G8 f9 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; Y/ e3 T4 }, F我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 j# _# c; G: N$ @+ W1 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>