【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 k. z$ {2 b/ ?6 [3 _! H歌词我附在后面。
. L8 t( Q# B1 X1 G7 K' g! BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: g/ [/ {8 T" S4 L& I, \7 a' ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" ]! {0 f% X: ]' }2 R2 E- eThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 z2 F) T0 o1 `& M$ {0 z; i1 Q3 RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 i; k1 e* T3 ^) qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% @. \& {# d- Z. b% F2 xI love you I love you with all my heart
; H. M* O7 ?$ R' }% c0 q- JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ I1 j* k0 `0 A+ k2 `% J/ U* uI want so much to see inside your heart
3 P6 K# J; G" j( e; k4 T% i6 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 f2 G5 H6 m' U0 J: W5 ~# t& iI’m still filled with fear
% f& y& @& ?! t, gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" w1 ~, t& i) N/ V2 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- X! i6 v# S: i( ?6 T; hWith such a tongue as yours,
. A# o! C0 j& p* \& XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 [! u5 U! s9 ^, W* mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 d9 h2 a  [% f# }( P* n) oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; X+ R+ F* _0 G3 a- h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& l/ y- t3 G! M5 K' V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! W6 y! J/ }; F1 `# Q) Y9 A  G$ s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- F( H6 h' M( m* b8 C1 n6 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 E- a( e8 r4 u2 L( U& g) v4 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) b3 u: b) @4 i, V) e  Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% i  r7 E$ {; p5 ^, w4 J: {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 @6 a/ I5 a8 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& K& c- I( a# L5 Q& y. {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# J; ^8 v( a8 @7 q, w% w6 S0 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 P  V8 D  H) _+ `( z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 D% K/ h7 Q5 [0 W- |# O; K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! Z6 q6 Z; w. \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; r) c7 M: u2 @6 H1 t! J+ V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. q9 ~7 i* @( h' @  ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 o2 m. x6 V' H0 T5 O+ }% x# b' D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ q8 s( G3 c9 C. ?0 [3 k8 ^5 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' {6 K: T# M, j& _- l  k* a( b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 s& k, C. q5 k- G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 Z8 u' U& E2 w' ?, V9 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- F2 ]+ N' W4 X+ I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 [- \. Z. L- ]/ G2 M) b/ j9 i# p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  x+ N( x% \: d% Q) `# Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 I" T0 e2 z2 R" g/ |$ |/ W' d. B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- j: Y) j* B' A2 H, M7 z1 d' u我请你剖开它

6 S' j9 c8 V5 G, J' W4 ^/ d! ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, d' q8 y% |; }' p1 p" l9 r) X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>