【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 [3 t4 H+ L6 A% QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  J8 G  V- s9 L% D+ O! PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 o6 @% o! G+ j4 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 f* v9 q. i$ T8 dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 f, E, o/ B; G8 XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# {+ j+ C: f. DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& ~) X5 y  f7 w' B% sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. o  ]6 E. R9 m/ iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( O8 n8 U9 q1 F$ h: c. p% mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. a, F( g; _1 B0 J, AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* X+ z3 k% G% v9 OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 l/ [7 D( S" j6 ~2 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 ^4 z( z. J. K& L* E/ [( c" K  k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ]0 ]% C2 _1 ^1 W+ q+ ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 Y" z( q* D& U' Y3 {5 i- b4 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, M$ p: S2 H7 B+ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# o7 ^# |9 }6 u" `  Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 P# S/ i, B% f5 u, Q8 h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 A1 ?/ J3 R* g0 e2 f( u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 x$ z" w8 R4 }& Q- t' t) P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 ^6 N$ G7 o; [) q* ?1 q" U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 s) q+ W$ ?( e6 h4 S  F) W  D; f& N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; e- E9 P; g3 B6 P7 Z9 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* H" r+ {: d. Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% \) \9 L2 E- `$ X6 Y! M! v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: e: R" p2 [- d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 {3 I( o+ F% T! n; O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: z/ T8 C6 R! e* N9 X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, j  A0 B3 K0 k( A" o. @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& K! h- g+ H0 R+ {7 ^, J2 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ c  L6 l0 s" D7 \8 y) q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 M- N! {2 X; R% n' P; j( q- A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 z& J! r  w! G* n2 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 i( q0 F. K* B2 J2 {0 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
) y  u  O3 L( X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ _* W: ?! ]# V& @: |: d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# g3 Z+ |+ \2 c2 z" h' w% [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  g# |. U6 c. G( L  h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ J; }  E0 K" J$ L4 D: u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 Q! e) x1 `3 ~) j& b1 R2 B) @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, T0 M& s# _7 Y( b9 ?' V7 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>