【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' s* M* g$ J+ L; Y: q/ ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 M/ U" s+ f. O1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 n' b9 A( I& E, eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 g/ f/ y- [0 VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- O& s; t, n! x* V2 uYou needn’t fear anything
7 X, w7 D0 C  o6 p9 G  M9 ^. {8 l* jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, x0 o2 {; `" v$ Q2 ?* F# _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. f$ R1 ?* A: tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* I6 q5 t: U. g' t8 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& D3 I5 K$ [. |/ M+ P: S8 N2 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) I5 O6 E5 P) a& KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 W1 ?5 x* Z. JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; G0 }" Q! [- y- ]' ~) qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 ^7 E# ^3 h8 B! f* [+ h% NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' ]* r& T9 V1 m- ^* a( Y' M1 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% v1 y9 j& T+ B0 l& @3 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 g. ]4 o! @6 m8 G7 L8 ]$ G/ w5 Q7 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ Q( d+ ?' h8 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 `; x8 c) ]- T  [4 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, b* U5 E, ?! i7 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" z, c$ H3 H9 {+ H6 N; p1 U: g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# f0 T/ n/ S) r0 k2 x# `<P>你无需担心</P>
. B' n: h3 u& Q6 v2 T& C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. s2 C" M8 ?: N( \2 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' o' f  N0 l1 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ T" d1 x: u+ y! p$ S1 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' y* x# a& h1 F" f" A) b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' e6 V5 m1 J0 ]  F- Y' R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ O1 y( [+ J$ ]2 M4 k# Q1 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ Q) K. q! Y6 ~& c+ S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: C+ {! f2 O" ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( Z6 f. W( @) ?+ L- }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- i! V% U! Z7 k. x2 p! p0 H& c3 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ r7 w6 V: i" s" _& h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  a, U$ p- s+ |/ m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* v2 k/ P, _  z# X  C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 r' w! }' ]; t, E! u, Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" i9 ?1 f  j- X" @4 o! u) _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" o2 z- e! P: O* G, ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' }9 ]% j& J! i& b' l* j我请你剖开它

8 S6 h4 o# d' c5 W0 D9 e2 q; ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>