【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% j  X4 Y$ D, s# n% v8 A! H- g# u; fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 G" `% j/ q2 @2 _* v5 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' B7 \! w7 I# L2 t7 `& w2 s6 tSeeing the sky content with its love
# b' y$ }; O' M- pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 v7 b7 O3 Z7 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  K- @" R5 G, b+ U' s% KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  M' n/ B" e' q/ uI love you I love you with all my heart
5 f( Z6 U1 e( b5 \. {" t6 o3 t) p5 ?Nothing can compare to my love
& J6 e0 `0 u) rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) @6 w+ ^6 D& A5 \' ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: {% z6 v7 S. rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 v& ?& L, y/ J3 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 S9 n; v. ~) h/ ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' K# P7 [2 H& g, n, I2 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% m' b/ d; |5 W7 l4 N- g( n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 O4 W( O$ h5 G; ^% ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 C  j4 b- |( V$ o; A# i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, X8 i  _  ~# G! C: C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  u3 R5 [% o% H& ?! ~1 L1 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# r( ?" Q& o7 e7 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 U( E, V* l4 T  m* g! g0 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ I$ Y. Q5 @" W  e; ?- F7 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; ~8 c& J" v% E<P>你无需担心</P>
" U/ B* Z# ~. b( I7 o; q# e+ o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& m9 t5 T  P  y% p: _; x$ a. M! c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 d& A! N$ i3 A3 \* X  ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, b% w! A# V; k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" x; `3 X! D9 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" t  m( t4 Y* n7 c. E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 a$ C1 y! T7 _$ @- V7 E6 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 I3 `+ K3 m+ m' u" m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) v- v( y. f5 a5 K$ r+ v' h" o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: u2 g/ f3 B( J  }0 q0 l2 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 D8 `+ D$ f1 _, X<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 y3 L/ B; z9 i& R+ V& S. D2 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 f" L2 X* ^. p& f) v1 K; I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) K. G" g2 M5 W, e# \/ d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- ~; N% X! ~( f6 x# Y: G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 w5 N- g2 f4 j; L" M8 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 h0 i  p$ \& F& @% |: |+ a; N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' v" M8 l  E0 @% N1 _) ^0 }# L* ~: ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 \9 q8 M3 t5 y- {3 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. `2 H0 X& X3 a' p5 ]' S1 O* u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 ~2 o1 ]) W0 B  j6 H* U* D3 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ G6 _% r: _( {! n; W0 n* c& e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" Y6 a* k0 t' A( s2 Y8 a& o& y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: x" S; q2 Y" i/ ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 ]3 b, D" ?- u) ^# r: k) J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 E1 T3 W9 l# Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>