【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! c3 D6 v8 M1 }5 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
& A; W' x6 c& ~. o7 a- ?/ a+ oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 a" l; I# ?/ {. s) D6 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 f" G* g9 p' R; `) |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ k  c$ t7 R! @4 u1 lSeeing the sky content with its love
8 Y. m7 h- a" ^4 jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" P9 ^6 B- K1 ?) pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* h% {+ C- ~# o0 P! k! j/ ]& HEvery other word you utter is love
( R2 n, u# }/ S7 uI really want to know just how much you love me
8 @* _) ~3 M! ^* s, U' v2 U1 M. _I love you I love you with all my heart
: D, j8 z( j7 \% g, a& l+ ]Nothing can compare to my love
1 o& L/ q8 X/ K) H* C: S* [$ sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# l# S/ j4 L+ E, _1 x3 _% i  JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' O1 U/ Z9 P/ D/ [/ t7 a7 nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 U& @8 N& I5 l6 T; Z; S; M0 {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 {& z& L4 |3 q' IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 u9 w& C* U( v7 T# YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! I5 D+ g- E1 ^" }) B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- J" p$ }# j. ~& I1 C% Y& q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 L, |# ?' ~4 R! r# [, q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% ^# T4 z# Q; }! G4 U  M* ~$ q6 w  I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 M% t! g, x3 q, x! {7 \' K7 Y: ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 S! X3 {. W  S" o! |" {. f) V, N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 g$ W7 s  d5 N+ t- s* b0 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. x3 S( B7 y0 T0 w# n3 P  ]! Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" j8 p& s; M7 D6 v; ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ^9 w9 ?6 R4 c% x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: U# E. ]. c+ `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 m0 r3 [: m7 w6 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- v5 N1 t* y# s7 ~1 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! k, }* |; W3 k1 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 `; P3 u5 X; ^  z2 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  I0 J3 k& l$ E; M- d* L# e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. y; K7 a2 R% f& ~+ R: `7 ^! i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. `+ v/ d1 d) `' f+ b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; @( t1 V" p. I& e<P>I regret not dying</P>
' J0 p+ N# e/ X5 n6 A; t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( M5 m0 o) l" J7 N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" [7 v" K' N, H+ }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) G, b8 R+ k+ m; D4 D& v5 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% G! Z/ e! ]3 l7 C$ W( r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Z8 L9 u: c' L% C0 G6 t  _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ E3 D! P' A3 t: X- b) M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. q5 A3 Q. r* k6 l, a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 X4 G1 S4 P1 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>