【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& a$ x, I& z7 x- g3 b. B7 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ?2 m1 {2 C* N- g: yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- r( S* E( f6 d2 b* _8 _5 w% u7 _0 X- rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 H2 t; s  D5 m/ S$ sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% T% m1 ^1 w. F- e" b* AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# G$ k5 b6 k8 ~/ T4 [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 p/ J: M( f3 R% O$ J+ U. CI love you I love you with all my heart
$ w6 Z4 f$ o6 n7 HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( Q- l0 L- n7 C* BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 |* P  u% G0 H! |% G# s% ]' G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) _: s' E4 Q1 J  I: S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: Y/ u) U! C# I% C9 O: x" j& ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 a+ G7 s3 o. g+ H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 [7 X7 Z) v* Y) J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ O9 ~& z: f9 X" u2 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 t. ^& R$ q" `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. k7 W3 z9 W  t1 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) f8 C, j% |4 m% \& Y* r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- s) m7 X  Q1 O: |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 w9 P7 l- _# S& h" k7 D" h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 a, x: c% S8 q+ H8 u7 i, x1 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 B9 G; h# M9 \4 a( R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 ^- w" I! w6 H, K; ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 f% I! |- e( w5 Z% \9 k) D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& U$ v$ k$ H% D; n( y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- a3 `/ `2 p( S& w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  k- L7 E. v8 }! {- j5 \  }) b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  G9 `, X4 ^: g, a' A, V9 l. h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 Y7 J: m2 t8 I+ B* L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 {0 f. M2 I7 i0 z# a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ I* F& p1 V. O) f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, q& T" n" y& N# }: E9 f. G+ S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 p5 y5 y8 j* [7 u7 G( B& R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. F! {3 x8 G8 M' j8 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ z# Z) S, S' s- W- A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  y; Q& a2 z/ T9 q, {& ?! y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>