【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 L5 ]5 W  G& q9 t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, y5 O; k4 e8 V& Z7 g% jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 \- R0 l  ]0 M$ a- P+ u. B: W- ]% x8 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, h! I2 A0 d- ]0 I" iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 x. G0 [/ t" `2 V( i7 Q) Z1 YWith the moon kissing it every night
8 U+ G1 e" J) k+ C2 ?$ A1 H# O0 h3 `2 TSeeing the sky content with its love
( H8 g& ^# G* Y7 S+ {) k' M8 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ G+ L' p0 p( O% X' y4 M) W9 sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 Y' r. K$ j; t  U& ^7 ]  `* hI love you I love you with all my heart
  k; G( w8 }! Y6 T/ wNothing can compare to my love
8 @9 L6 ^6 K( G( a. m0 U( zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 e% _0 R% n' @2 R0 A1 P5 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ V8 o8 ^/ W/ {" j- k0 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 g# g! S  o. ]5 N1 I2 G7 a9 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  G' E0 |+ @+ l& MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; x9 {! y) ^: ~  @' o& ^  G4 W- u7 m9 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! W8 z! {8 R* h6 ], e. F# p# T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 C7 F4 K) S4 j, B' J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 B) r! E3 W) s5 T2 g8 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ~0 R/ u; ~$ y8 X  g" R& _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 H; ~4 C* Y8 x. ?9 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 n9 H3 l" w# R2 H/ z/ U1 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* ~* F. Y) w# L5 L4 [3 J3 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( W5 |) l5 v+ l4 ?" f6 D) |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; c# @0 I  R( x' ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 o; x' E! d, p; U9 o& C. M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' H  F  I$ B- r/ w) Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) }6 ?/ G. V/ T6 ~: q8 f# s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ o9 E. v% W% |1 b7 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 k9 m7 J% A* s* V5 V/ z% @$ T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- R. ^. L$ T/ g* D* ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# s% L" M( G. r2 I' s2 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' y3 ]; S3 ~& P2 R! w' N" F& Y' W7 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 C  T- f4 ^; V<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 F$ `0 \+ f. f8 `6 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 I9 x$ ^! w5 S2 j/ m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ f: k" z7 `/ j9 F7 D3 T. w+ o/ {$ X% h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 b3 V: T! J: P1 f1 B$ w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 A( [+ a2 m4 k+ Y9 ~& ]7 z1 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% N+ E3 H2 c/ o; G6 z- y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# _) m3 v  l$ H" i: r$ ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& q2 m4 S* ?; z% ~5 y! e8 A& z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>