【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 U; K$ X- V; RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 F7 {- a7 F0 u/ ]$ F' x6 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. N. C6 p7 q% o$ t9 H: C# v2 u! aI really want to know just how much you love me
5 E: Y6 e& m* Z+ r  }: p: BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; m8 L  q- p3 ?0 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ U5 L! q( y' yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 g# G1 t: z2 SWith such a tongue as yours,
2 H% e" d* ]! C5 D* X0 ~1 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 |% ?3 r7 Z5 J2 g9 i8 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 q) T5 o! O8 D$ s8 [1 c1 u/ t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ f  B( }0 F1 c  q5 u7 ~/ N/ O1 A0 s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ }0 X( x) u0 k- R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# H; P; D) e3 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Q% z' |$ r$ h0 [: }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" k: D3 \) |9 X' x, N2 d) N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! M/ r* r( n- v8 |, l8 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; `: g! F, J! u4 i( A3 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; R. _% V6 g3 I$ r0 k! Q& B  T2 M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" ~2 B% x9 {. F! z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) P8 f+ i8 q# k; A( [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
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<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 W% [7 M! x( i& q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; s/ x2 m1 d! Q( N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 n/ L" t! o2 {0 r" s6 z) G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# ~6 z, I% g8 L. K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( F. u8 g7 d. m; Y9 Y' ~- H  R6 I0 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; s2 B( T  R( Z, q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ \. T1 g1 f/ }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. e, f8 `8 t  o+ d/ y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 X( e: _- Y. H' ]. X6 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- T( n( E" K$ u: [1 K  f4 N3 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 h5 N0 \% y/ j9 p; I) T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 M$ A' f5 d* s( i" x2 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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# S# ~4 N6 S/ i0 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! _  _6 |  h. }3 F! _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 V/ L1 D- V. J! ~9 S* T( D9 R& S+ X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& y; Q+ ~  u' q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' o. \1 E  `; _7 {+ d; @我请你剖开它

6 p. W. C7 Y+ V; R, N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  Y. h( J/ j% m" L; f% s% E' }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>