【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ Z) Y8 [5 I5 W" l# u* ?歌词我附在后面。
& T- H# w; a- M5 \( gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ r; y5 B' P7 p6 |4 Y  qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 t  z$ [/ U' U: ]( c) n) _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" r; x8 @) O4 c; ]6 K" d3 R9 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* S  m8 P  y/ p! QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 J- [" F( X. \7 C1 b; Q- O& oEvery other word you utter is love
. d. c  S+ x9 _9 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  O% g7 x7 z; `  @. qI want so much to see inside your heart
. z2 R7 d" q2 K* p7 k6 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 }9 S& [8 ?; P5 L1 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# [1 `3 @9 V; tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 l. Q) F% K( }( h* oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 n) h- A1 S& E" ]- o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. Q3 v% d, E( d9 P# T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' N" l+ k& V8 R& e9 k, e% ~# v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ P7 v+ p( u5 @  O. p8 ^9 [' G8 B4 H' }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 q5 \7 v7 I! |, e4 X" ?* I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 b5 _7 L. K* j+ X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( a2 x0 n5 @2 n8 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) V* g2 o: v- B, @4 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, I. Q7 F& p) Q& W4 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 L; s' Y3 s1 @# v# J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 g' h4 C. A+ B( y# v" ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# D7 K: g& J; B4 g* g. g$ V6 `) b4 L; [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 T" F0 k  P% Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 K7 g. x% A( s7 k. }. c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- c) s: Z8 a5 c+ A0 i3 ~, h" z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& g2 g0 Z+ ^; W1 x& C3 P9 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. N; k! h0 K" D8 t2 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 w; i; H) [( g9 x! a2 _% H) A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; i; s/ [6 F3 S) M9 D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- F8 ]: A$ f/ O2 n9 v2 P+ V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# {8 W  i1 @) z4 `( T7 [8 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ L. m6 D% E, u1 m3 I% M4 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- q2 ~4 v& u. t; E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" a/ p1 h+ Y% d' G2 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  G0 I7 b( r3 g( V% D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>