【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ j  |  H0 c1 l; x. sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* _6 v; Y4 |7 t4 j; q( nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, R% m# S: j+ H9 D+ d: w, P! {4 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! o6 n, Z& N, i7 `$ s4 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" g% f9 X1 v0 D' h( \, wYou needn’t fear anything
6 l: H* s& h' }4 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# y2 `6 I1 U0 R! V( u  l  y1 T8 CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ~! T7 b- z- K8 K% x" q% H$ QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& g% s9 U% d! V0 V" HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 i! ^2 |/ S3 oWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 h0 n/ F, K6 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ `' ^) i& a& G- K  O3 H; N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 }! }/ T5 U' p" z2 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  [7 p+ g) ^  W3 s. `1 D  R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! d# a$ `2 X6 Q+ k( c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 ^& L  ~1 P, ?" J/ a+ W9 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( q$ u* d, S# l; y. a9 u* @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 T* f2 T: h' e* F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. B" B: P) Z0 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, l9 S$ |0 C, f' q7 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 T! t% e: ]( [% d% p2 z, d& W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. B8 }9 e7 ~8 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* v8 {  f2 [! H& u- j# Y3 v) _! b<P>你无需担心</P>
4 I- D5 p0 @$ l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: F) H5 F. |6 s8 ]9 A) Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 V9 H) v/ |- J- K- d9 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% o8 {* X& S- r2 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 r$ T! i5 `( x8 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 F* [8 C, f( @* [9 ^1 k% M2 K* {7 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  i; y! k' e  P+ s' p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 i4 V8 X- J( V+ \$ v0 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 a4 E4 f3 o2 r% s  T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% m; }/ m: |  H* Y! m, B# z4 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: j+ F2 x+ {3 K0 T. O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 Y7 }, B% b+ v  K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 K  ^; @( c& f  M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 N7 K* V3 w5 Y0 d$ ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* h: K7 ]1 T/ s0 j# L  q5 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 W6 x5 m& `$ u* p+ A' X$ b! {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 N3 a! ^' |' ^% N' Y- ~' ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 V  M/ C  E- s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% p9 K9 |  o/ ]  X% F& g; i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 u, c/ T2 |6 Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ X) U- h3 H0 Z" J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ~5 H9 e5 @+ V, h% d# @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>