【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- `* {1 M1 Z9 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" i9 N) p( g; T4 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ f$ d6 y, S. ]  t2 Z+ nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ^+ u- R8 x% o' t2 D' {5 A) KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! p4 Y$ b; o5 y5 u0 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( S1 c- [- O8 j2 S! GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 ~1 M& ]1 i2 L8 B3 \+ b1 i( FI’m still filled with fear
! p2 F/ i* e; K" I/ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# |6 A% s1 M4 h- E, l. X5 u/ o' {$ uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' t$ f; u, S+ c! p5 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 G0 P! A, J* y& ]2 P. yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 H- e- G; }" p( a* ~- _3 H. K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 `  L# S+ I& P# C- R. \- L+ ?) u1 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z7 p) P" D0 V/ }4 b" t7 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 E/ G" D4 Y& ^. t) L0 _! q8 D/ `0 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 L8 b- @  k, g1 W0 h' k. t" n8 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 _* |* Q# i/ U7 q$ y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. T1 J& a6 G0 v3 G0 X+ _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 B+ ^9 k. ]5 ], f( B6 x1 h3 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 F) a$ i! ~+ S( Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; b! g0 E) j* I$ b. o- c; B, _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# o! V6 _6 ?/ s3 g5 X. |$ u& j: j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  c* o$ @, `2 g: H7 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 z: `( c8 ^+ J# }1 I: k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 A3 J8 C; D! g$ f2 x  A& _; V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ F2 e# I- t9 y; S0 U( z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ E/ ^. v) ?& r, m  v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 O/ S2 l. e  ]0 k  S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ z  q, p* b+ w: c$ K* v4 v5 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ K, f0 W/ r" a: [* n/ D0 ^! M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% q& k* W$ V0 {; d9 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 w- {* F1 s1 L, x6 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 P6 o+ |1 G1 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 Z" `+ Y6 v6 ?% y' x; z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" R' i/ @3 x  R+ a. X5 ~& C: d2 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 I* `. o0 z$ V9 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" @& U$ Q. n/ E2 c- W- [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>