【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 J+ t& G# f2 A+ b- M8 Q& X: a! g; H歌词我附在后面。
$ `$ K; G0 o% F) ]# z( aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% w2 ^5 D' k! u; R: _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 [4 F1 `3 P" _0 ]% c  uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! t8 Q6 l4 R8 r+ ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 d+ O" l/ [1 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
4 A; e& }1 |9 t8 l; mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; K/ D! a0 k: b3 Q4 ~- `You needn’t fear anything
. e# y, q* n/ N' K9 ]+ j# u4 y& ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 N5 U( n( s5 O" S* Z4 FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" x. m% `1 @; w4 e+ U( R9 c6 xI want so much to see inside your heart
$ i0 J8 l; }. u/ C3 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) A+ _  {2 ^1 U' w4 M! jI’m still filled with fear
% x0 ~6 T/ k; B3 T. |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ B* d, _/ @7 t8 P* h% t& jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 U, I" u8 L3 m6 {; I9 ]+ Q+ fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 N3 z# t  Y8 q6 X; S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 k2 Y" M: A; |/ C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& k8 F- g; o3 ]. Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' `3 X( @6 q* ?& G8 B/ ~/ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- u% n5 Z/ U# R. O( a6 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 h" V% R$ T% `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 S9 ^) D' L- i& n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 @- l. i" v8 M- Y. @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( J& r3 e' d. f$ j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 m. K4 J5 y8 {& A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ E8 d3 R" K, M/ [/ X2 z& H& T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ M1 E+ p: p/ Q! s6 x3 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ E. e+ J. x- m4 z. J4 L! K4 h6 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" |/ y/ g7 P- g5 }1 s7 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 U7 _$ N$ Q7 I, W+ K$ P; }$ f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% v/ U1 _4 |3 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 Z4 K; M& _1 @7 a( e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ Q- i2 x7 i/ M1 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, A! w3 j$ M3 ?/ P) o+ ~# A# m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* d- F  p, _5 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: X; E- p" L# w- \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 U- ]! v% l8 ?: O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 |; L2 ~: m" r2 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! e9 [5 x1 i6 ^* v  X7 l( I* S/ I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 \) P# @4 u3 b4 V+ W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
% h5 Q$ ?8 d7 k2 }$ w) w# ]$ n6 l
' h3 h) D# [# E9 }) j5 e' t我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 i( ]% b( E( ?$ u/ g7 h6 `: S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>