【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 _6 P0 ?+ t8 g( L. a2 u- FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ^$ d7 J- \0 z" y: [The sky is happy down to its soul
* J  {" W/ m, R2 z7 L( |" TWith the moon kissing it every night
& W! U( F6 j) E6 @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 r9 P# ~2 E* V& uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ }5 a. }0 j$ S4 [6 l5 F& zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 r& v6 H! C" T* ?. O' DNothing can compare to my love
0 R7 ?$ O3 ]1 I" WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, e2 I  N# ?% |9 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 \3 o$ M0 m" s! k; O7 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ P! E; l8 `2 [I’m still filled with fear
8 {$ B( \/ v9 n- b3 s% fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* s4 V2 z1 }% G7 O; a, i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D5 g* x/ y% N8 A( }+ n- L' u<P>你无需担心</P>
& u( j  ]2 x* l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ m- k6 k8 o  s+ B2 R6 ?3 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( T! `: ]# \9 @9 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) @, B! E+ J! A5 s% F% S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. `3 L* i5 p2 P) Z% E) ^+ Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! V5 o+ i) C2 X) l: i5 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) V+ h! y' h  r6 W( C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" l7 o8 r! r' k9 I1 \+ V' `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Z- C- |% U  b- i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# y, u1 e+ p2 F3 a+ L& T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 R2 O2 N" R# q, N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, M# n2 m8 ]4 }' j! @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& U/ e, N' j9 y  s; V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) N% z1 d, v  W8 q# h) m; v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 v% t2 C: z3 m/ ?3 {我请你剖开它
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$ w8 T% D! T8 T; t( W! j, a3 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>