【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) l! K: Z, n9 Q+ l: Z; a7 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 B* S+ H8 K/ W9 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 T+ r' T; V; w9 U5 U1 W; r3 RWith the moon kissing it every night
7 l  ?. W; h; ?6 d. j1 I- XSeeing the sky content with its love
, {4 v! ^+ b$ z3 g* A) g0 U0 j# mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, ]  u: B2 B+ Y3 U! S# y' g' y; H0 l: CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  O$ C, |' i  ~9 x4 k7 DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' w+ X# F9 M- D' E$ P3 ]  J2 K6 aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' B% Y2 H2 q+ F8 }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( X) a2 `; u3 ^" VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. f' M: k. R5 WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* C7 u3 n9 |, VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" X/ g" I+ Z) n. @$ [- T3 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 @. a: g6 ^9 X  bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 H  o' T. G8 |4 A) }9 f- F' u5 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" \1 s& I9 P; {" w) p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% u6 x8 V( {' F0 I. @/ V% T% W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! T' I" L( R4 F8 u6 K( [; S  f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 c* Y: {2 c: a2 F& u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% n0 E" X- k8 u; w5 c9 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; n" _5 T2 y4 D- o. c, s$ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  i1 y- q3 W( _( c6 G  S$ ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% ]9 a( @, g1 `% i" E- k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 w' [$ `$ T9 T: I3 a0 H0 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 H  m# i1 N8 a3 `8 A: ]. A7 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, S3 ^  Q, N) b9 o0 z) |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 }8 R" {; I5 r9 j; I  \5 F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; E$ L5 }$ ~/ F1 \& v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% u9 t, Y; T/ o9 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, f# e2 s/ E8 R7 F5 b/ ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  `4 ]% B- P4 U9 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' z0 u& I& l! Q; d- R: M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; }0 i0 d2 Q9 k2 }7 M- U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( ]! k  c- |) A9 }. B, c! ~; u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' W9 x4 {; v" [5 a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 O1 C, P, w! x' j0 y4 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ X4 i; \: P. Y* e* w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 E- D) j2 I& I  [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. \  f% @: J6 k( q& w' {' Q3 X1 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>