【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: m2 E. Y% g8 V( |/ i% a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# o% s- h3 R2 w- z& l9 wWith the moon kissing it every night
; L$ c+ A' |# L5 T+ M; r* i& V" ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; H: f! K! w) {( }7 nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ P0 L9 g" h1 G; a& \* _) AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ d) Z  n2 T: [: F( {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; N% V! a6 P4 D4 @6 @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ @3 w: G0 B6 L' r7 p; pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' V; l7 |& B: @( `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- h6 `1 a) q  J; `( mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 }4 j3 m0 J1 ]# l7 m$ `/ KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 k! T' a# C7 e! u" pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  t- J& w3 A8 s8 c# \* A) s" x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 @, Y3 ^# B2 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 t* f* w& v$ Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' }3 R6 C# M3 {4 z- W; D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% T( b4 e) u9 W' m+ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  P& E6 @& ^! g0 X& k$ F7 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- P" n- K2 t* w# Z2 y9 n+ b/ H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" G# W3 E  S6 Y' Q/ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& Z! _9 l( w4 R' N5 x) u# c, M3 |8 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 P% w2 _3 L0 O4 s. D/ W4 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 g: Y. c( u: w8 U1 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  \8 b1 R3 ^: t, T1 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) P5 J+ L) H% B  h  e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" I( Z$ V$ k% O6 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" b* B" P% g( P: ~# _! r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 H: ?6 o3 x: T5 `& F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) b# D1 r9 _; G+ ^* t# ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, r2 ?5 U) G0 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 f: }; a$ X; o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ v% J  K' ?" _+ F+ |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ ]2 K/ m6 g: U: f; q3 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- d# f3 V" @3 ^2 r  J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 j: j* r5 B  B<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ }0 T! @. r2 o8 [: f) g. V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 h) r! {5 v" L9 Y( V4 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' m/ K- H8 r3 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- A. ^- T' W  n) b6 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 x7 p2 i* V: }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' i# t# |# V3 Z4 o; V0 |9 N3 z( m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, W" p/ u" M. Q+ e: b. Y/ U8 m! S% v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 q' q/ L* X7 j" M! ~; h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 m( a/ d3 i% l% c' d2 Q& x' \6 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 G( f) K- D' U我请你剖开它
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2 ~4 i6 a. s4 `- c# @6 x; ^) L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>