【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ X+ t/ m" {; v0 R! v' P歌词我附在后面。
; ]; Q2 S3 W! v+ LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; m0 g& ^; v8 s7 W, L3 y( m2 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  O& i9 G. {9 r2 V- N7 m4 z6 L& r& DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 N; U9 o# D8 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 U+ a- z$ \$ p2 |; v7 c1 b( f# cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 ^: L0 c1 y+ |. u/ \1 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: v  G9 l2 T! ^) U( R0 J1 n- hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 W" W3 M& n* t. e, }) aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 c: z+ i/ N! Z0 u* {: W; sI want so much to see inside your heart
# F/ `) Z4 R- f8 q2 f5 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. k$ ^* R) Y9 iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: U6 ~- g1 ~2 fI regret not dying
# l8 H% `8 E* r0 {5 U' T. m9 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- V( E7 }7 I! l  \With such a tongue as yours,
6 O( u- T' _& z0 |( r- I7 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( J* s7 l! u& A" p7 @; y0 G6 u3 X4 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ }) U4 W7 x$ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ F( x$ _( B( Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- C. G6 L7 h# h9 ]- x  M- ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ j1 z* C. ]* |, ^" R2 S8 k4 \% i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, W- n% N; p# [8 j) J6 i7 n5 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 N0 r5 I6 }2 `8 ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- e+ K5 h( [' s# W6 I, L9 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  q* R& G& _7 p5 C! Z6 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' G# w7 `% g. X! o' ]) O- {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Y8 Q4 m8 V! O- y4 H$ g. @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- c* g# ]8 _; z4 O) o6 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 o0 @* m3 j$ p! b+ d6 ^; {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  d5 u1 Y; o4 |1 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! z- Q/ @: A' B" ^% ~# }1 o) R* k1 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' C' ?) E: e; E9 a5 l3 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' X$ H* _. y# R2 c/ s( w7 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ^2 x: r( J% g* A/ P+ s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; H: d1 }* O5 [( O" P, h  H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ O0 u# v4 r) ?( U7 Z# N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& V" J' k  F* Y+ m2 X5 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# ~8 W. m& V, P2 p3 k  P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' l; [' k' c& V7 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( P' `' I0 Z, M: G5 Z3 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- I, D6 E2 u/ |* w/ a5 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# S9 [, o! H4 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) P6 ?; _  v: M3 U& n" r4 V8 l* N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' `' I$ S( Y% O1 M+ [/ I% q2 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& G+ Z1 o$ {& k- e: R( H+ f: S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& I5 z5 I" r5 G# z0 v) s. [# r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- G, m9 B+ t- W% y7 l( U% @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>