【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( G$ J9 I& {+ |* Z( \$ Q- P7 A0 UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  T3 O# K! t9 o9 [+ P5 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 V) h! M1 s$ a* HSeeing the sky content with its love
& _! g7 Q3 K9 [2 `) z8 P8 {# v& |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: x$ L0 e( A0 q. O  u' gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( A2 m9 d" x  t" b  D2 b# QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- k! f3 j! N  oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 W3 b+ \: G3 [' E% JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% S8 ]- @4 ?" S5 w- Z/ v7 V: ?; uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; ]3 E5 R3 `' E6 VI’m still filled with fear
' j  Z3 c: _  f+ \4 R# S* K0 t1 OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 ^; ]8 |; z# jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* q% k* O/ p5 l; f$ S! \. @; A- i7 ^With such a tongue as yours,
: ?6 }4 W$ e/ ?6 U* T. TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 r# l" r  Y- ]3 O8 m! g5 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Z6 y! ?% [1 w4 {& V! c; e9 \( z6 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- L( P* g; U# S/ `3 G7 c; p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% C& v$ S7 R! }0 j( I7 A4 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; n" G* @" S$ ?2 ]( @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. @- w+ }" O. L- A# p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# b9 [( a/ u, D  K2 X4 O. x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& f% t; A, }- A: Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. C) T+ D  f$ j" B+ ~- ]; u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Y6 f; k! {. d1 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% P$ l9 S: \4 o4 a4 ?9 ]. e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& z- M/ @  g* I) @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 g9 k1 c+ r: \1 c8 u( a- M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 c  R  ?) V# a) `/ L3 X- y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' ]! m6 ~: e1 T+ ]; v, k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; Z, k$ i9 I* g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. G1 d0 }% z4 b3 T5 ^3 A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 d* @& I& h: k! A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) s3 _; i8 v9 s3 V$ B/ l# S) E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 k7 N* c! y; ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: Z$ Q5 n9 S; L: [: P+ ^. F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 R1 T; d$ q( h  N& w1 ?7 b$ s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; f/ H! E$ n7 U/ `* l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 E7 y& t" R* F/ q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ ]9 }* R; f+ r7 t3 p: z. A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& f' R. ?7 ]: p* n" I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 y; R0 A% d  q. a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# _1 D/ r0 m  Y% C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( @; r! g& _: D5 K% b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, Q, J+ a' I9 z. `# C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 v$ \2 g" n# p. n+ ]. v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, m& A# k1 X6 K2 j- c1 H8 [我请你剖开它

% P# V* `5 g1 Y9 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 k. U) i- l  q1 B* b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>