【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, f4 x( Q: u7 J: V& sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ u4 j; Z" |. d, V+ OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ j: @& h1 H$ x- t8 h1 d4 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, k, V. E1 O' o) [+ g2 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- ]& t) f/ M0 v" \7 C/ FYou needn’t fear anything
8 B' j$ s" x3 M  p* j& tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 ]& k5 m. V+ q) K1 z6 O" zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 s+ z+ C$ q( M. T; Q  PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% [$ j8 Z! a, r" i6 q! x9 }I want so much to see inside your heart
% M+ Y+ L# D% K' g( \3 \4 hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, i0 S( Y5 [  s8 u. m# [) CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" ~* l+ j% X/ B& A8 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& Q4 I% L1 ?( Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 _2 o4 d2 z0 W7 w+ u0 `4 F/ i  i1 P3 d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 n$ `% j& l) l2 v. a+ m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 _0 B+ F$ h0 t- V" ]1 g$ c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ s; _" x$ w0 x0 @) {8 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 c# G: b. n6 O+ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' @1 E9 I8 n) P4 }  T& G( Z3 k# ^, c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, g9 L, _: }5 P. h2 |; r% Z' n8 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# z9 v& m/ D" y% h7 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; Q( B! k$ Q) Q+ [" P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% _* s# B- d( ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 n$ a1 M+ Q6 b% ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 ~. l/ e) ~" r; V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 L2 B$ u$ K# `, ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) i# Q- M# W# t0 t) I! [! H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ T: J/ r+ O3 k/ R+ Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' _+ E1 V: O9 O0 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. X; q' V/ V5 G3 }$ _) g+ a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 E6 ]. H* M- q0 D) D% Z/ W2 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  U) {8 f9 C$ m0 j7 W3 p! L5 e9 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ]4 X# U  t' I- U- ^, d; {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; F( _( _5 S4 b7 C1 |9 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% Z. c- S4 g, W6 }. Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  u! E: m' a4 ~; T1 d- f5 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( F5 ^6 p8 S% K" s2 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; c9 n, R9 \; R- K9 v. ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. V  F! X5 f; L3 I% W  M9 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" w9 g, X+ A6 P+ k$ \5 D0 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 B- w6 h) \$ q9 g) u. K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( {3 t* X+ A- }1 S. B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 y( a9 Q, [0 |1 p$ y$ D1 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>