【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( Y5 S7 n: `/ e3 k7 F歌词我附在后面。
, d8 w( w- k6 e. g7 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 A# @, g" p5 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 o; O+ A% w4 k$ P6 a* jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ A/ s+ P6 P0 S& g% i, sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ z) V  f& O6 G$ N7 W8 s4 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 \% V2 ^4 @7 m+ RYou needn’t fear anything
3 K3 ~7 t$ G+ ]5 `  PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 B1 @) v1 E; V; K9 F8 Y/ uI love you I love you with all my heart
4 S# d  u1 G  f0 L: DNothing can compare to my love
6 @5 ]- d1 T+ @- _7 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ p/ d+ S# R6 W3 u4 |6 @* S2 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' x# A: {2 X) J8 U) e& C8 [7 cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  C: I) F' b0 ?7 ^: F( [) ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: T$ [7 y+ ]5 @; s2 ?. s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; z5 M+ A6 D* u+ c5 e  J/ W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" {' \6 [; u$ ~2 x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 H9 o: O" a: \# A9 v/ D; ~, J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, i: ~. q5 Y7 o$ r0 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ a" y8 y, m5 i) v; e" q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 ?3 r& n% }# q5 A! b) b3 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) L- _' V: N$ I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 m- j; c4 U: n2 z/ x/ n) [. p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' j& ]2 j* }( S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- o, w5 Q3 X' ?1 \2 x2 [: V  W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% w0 H" c$ P$ ~* A; H3 j4 F/ X8 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  c! u7 [, u" J( t<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 \) x$ M' W/ Q- V+ P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 t0 K5 \) V; ^4 l3 U/ a; v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 @9 b3 Z# c, ?% D) [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# h/ Y% \4 G( W) B9 `" M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>