【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ]4 W# _. j" T4 }* r; XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ G2 u7 ]. h2 c" }6 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) K- l9 ?1 d! TWith the moon kissing it every night
- n7 \4 M( F3 Q5 wSeeing the sky content with its love
" e) r. P0 ^  gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: A( h' `3 N! G  z8 _& H8 zEvery other word you utter is love
4 n; ^. w  S- FI really want to know just how much you love me
( t2 |! Z3 C6 B8 H; LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- t5 R7 f4 j$ C0 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! e8 ~' \4 \2 qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# `' r* ]  z. ~0 II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ w( V  J" R  {$ U% `8 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: [4 R0 y( i1 R( v$ ]I regret not dying
5 X6 N6 `; U) x# RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% j% |8 L( R: JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; T3 K( s5 v: A; ]. x9 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 l- Z5 M- r0 R/ |6 n4 m  e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# n2 c6 C6 \: f. ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( H4 D" l# f7 q% \/ d9 x) r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( @. z1 \8 Z# z4 {- z/ o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 t3 v3 o. _0 J. b, ]' K) d) t6 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 `0 _7 u: n; D; d* V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ f& n# _% w3 w* o; @3 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! V! c3 i/ e" d! T7 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 }+ s& w8 m" ?0 I' i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# C1 c! A/ s3 {3 F. e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 u" E% K$ \5 V5 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 N  h" }# Q+ m; h, g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* E5 u4 _# l, y( e* c! [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ s6 q, V9 I( R7 ]5 b1 V- w3 U$ W1 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% O; _  |( {$ C' j% L6 R* x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ q9 z5 @" [# C- d# l+ \8 s4 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: q0 Q) W+ j) Z9 p' S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 ]+ [( x: h6 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 Q3 Z' M  R- P8 [4 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 w$ |' p+ p) b2 B" O% z5 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) R$ i- u) X  b4 K  h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 t* y2 C. Z% w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 `6 W& ]' H! z7 p* I, `2 D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! J, L, X9 h; K) r8 u$ E& J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) O1 s6 G6 \+ @- D; c% I7 i! V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ N* E+ g8 _. `1 O& O5 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( [! _& o+ w$ N& H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. u' x1 y/ s) I* t( R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 t/ U( W" v6 u9 y  |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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