【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ L6 H' y* h2 E; m* d6 N( z0 l歌词我附在后面。
7 v/ f$ W! K) r- T* AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; ?) e0 Q! [* \+ x. cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* ?1 m0 b- R; t; A% A1 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: }, n& `% [: ?7 k% y$ BWith the moon kissing it every night
) r5 C8 l+ j! w' E& a7 zSeeing the sky content with its love
5 Q4 t& G$ e2 h$ MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( ^4 Q( Q9 D! _8 F8 xYou needn’t fear anything
4 z) ~, I3 p' x7 G, W( hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: W& m6 g; J; F7 H: S# eEvery other word you utter is love
% x1 L: j% r% K; q  e" lI really want to know just how much you love me
* I  s3 @, a2 }  }' qI love you I love you with all my heart
" }9 `% m9 R# ^! S; T4 {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 V. S/ S& C: {0 c0 c' ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ w* F. X# t: w2 k, A" n* u! sI’m still filled with fear
9 \+ X, r) [; p( i0 w) F4 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 m) \/ ^; \7 b; u# ]0 s( LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: z" s# ]8 k6 [$ E$ x( f/ ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 b9 v" ?4 c& r6 A6 e2 R$ XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. n$ a; ~. o+ F9 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 t6 x0 l: R# p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 ~8 n6 |4 o% X. g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 w* y! z4 s- B1 z) H1 p) U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ t0 y$ b* R+ i$ g9 g* a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 Z- Y- c8 H( ?7 k4 c" \' N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 x, B9 G% q7 {$ N- I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" l  c7 K; j# \9 {$ ?) e% r7 j& m4 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% h6 Y( X9 c' N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 m0 v8 s3 h0 p  N+ n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; u# P4 o" a" ~% w8 e: f+ H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 c- B5 p% e8 |2 ?% n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 ?5 t4 Z) g1 w7 E/ {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, F" G( s- D& z9 A/ q% P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* Y3 D& e9 c3 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 q% j+ o( Y* M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  D2 t  M- ?+ F! w2 @5 [& u" g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, O) Q* `7 t9 w/ J) P" q  D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% h0 \% t* b5 ]+ C" p9 x' u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. b9 l# K; U! w, r+ @+ W3 l% _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 w* }( }. e8 Q& e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- l5 k5 N7 T2 c0 h. n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) i" h+ r: E* \* V- o- U" _' ~/ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% D* G9 X- v* R* E- a/ Q6 ^! T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>