【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  L% ?0 Y0 s& ]+ y" u, x4 d% {歌词我附在后面。
' P$ b2 ^; W4 L5 xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 }9 n4 h; _8 C* `) d, a; A5 E/ y4 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 N# W- ?# V. N5 E2 ]+ PThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 c8 e/ |& ?- `- @  pWith the moon kissing it every night
% F5 I) V9 h$ ]- {0 hSeeing the sky content with its love
0 q8 G; r! c3 n: aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' `8 c& T! L$ j" T" lYou needn’t fear anything
4 h* {6 ?9 w8 g$ e) f' hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  D/ T4 \2 W) m. {5 H, Z, W5 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 T& G2 T2 M4 Z3 ~8 i' {7 m+ DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 [* ~( w, M: X! \9 OI want so much to see inside your heart
% X" \2 n' W* b: _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 W( l! q2 P1 Q; V+ y" _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 d  N1 w! L- P3 z) }# W  Y2 wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 V& I" ^( {8 n' h  YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- w% E( g( E1 L6 n% A2 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 K- }- O- F6 k$ R0 E5 O" g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* X  M5 b4 Q( k9 g4 T/ m* }1 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, X; e+ g; y2 H- {( }% B  J7 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. {& t1 d7 H5 j! _! z# Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. M6 N1 I6 f& y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 l" }8 K  h5 b! f* d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- r% @9 l+ V- w' b) w8 J4 t<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 B/ @/ p/ Y% E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; n  s; w1 Y+ j% F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( w2 y/ h8 r% Y/ Y5 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ ^  G6 a3 w4 H( Q$ _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 s- l/ R9 h. f# {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ \; M0 {' T2 w- u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 h0 r/ H% j! M% X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ k% {' o4 L0 @/ b9 @) M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 u+ \4 V' p$ H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& D0 g; l# ?7 {9 i5 i! [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& v% d% v, P! e2 Y. h1 u7 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 F# ^! ?) ~. F! [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" F4 W; r% r& ]! T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 `8 S! f# W: p' J: V  g  d& `9 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' v! }1 _3 w, A9 _( a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 P0 [' [! E: N) K  z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, T; E+ B/ W3 s8 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ]6 Z% F7 x7 {* u5 D$ r5 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>