【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ^0 p! \  l! ^- d  qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ ^1 Q9 g$ k" K% @9 Y/ QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# f( x# ]0 g! @8 R, l$ eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# }- q; D! X# O/ S6 C/ eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. Y$ C/ y( F5 ~$ TYou needn’t fear anything
& F8 R* }! H6 _6 e3 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% m/ |. ]- v8 }5 M* L" Y% O  {Every other word you utter is love
- F0 t/ l: N$ I' s9 B: Y  CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 }- f3 N$ U. ?3 c# xNothing can compare to my love
) k' p/ O' D1 QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% p$ o. T. Q$ _7 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 T5 |% D" b6 S0 BI’m still filled with fear
' \' B" n+ M6 m. A3 A" xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! z# n& z% p" E  p# K$ C- ^I regret not dying
' i0 E# c- G0 v" d. ~/ MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& k* k! P* b& vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 G2 h3 j* @5 O0 RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" y1 o4 `8 m1 c) i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 Q. K/ \+ _/ c* p0 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 x+ ~% F8 \& ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! n& s! Y# v# G( h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ h  A1 ~0 g1 ~- B! g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) o+ o# U7 i3 c8 _. C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! h+ L5 |: G1 a7 Y+ j$ f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. D; E  u% r9 n, q- E1 Z4 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" F5 u0 d+ ^% [/ d  }/ {8 w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% E; X/ Z9 m3 A5 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ ]9 e/ e4 {9 z. A6 L1 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, T7 W9 F- l7 A! f" d! ^' H( M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 h! ~' ]/ u2 j  |/ y4 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% y4 t" z$ E% ^  ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; i; G" U: ~. N: y( C# N( I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 j' X" T6 p3 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 W& H+ q! i2 p7 @, B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ w( l' G9 {* j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# r- Y! T! R" V: v/ z3 E9 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ^  y( ^7 d2 m8 \& k/ `7 T' d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! m- \, y0 i9 W- g3 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 }- _: @7 a% B1 Y" U$ Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ]4 J( Z, }  T' ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ d1 J7 _- y" S# N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 }7 m/ s4 G- i3 j! J* d我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 k( I" l; G+ U, Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>