【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! x& o; U; p# K+ T$ J+ Z  n歌词我附在后面。
+ T8 Q% t( H# [5 n' f6 e9 j5 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# v& r# N+ o0 M% nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 b. `' [! R% z3 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ N. l- m) ~& {  @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 o( J8 {; a! }) bWith the moon kissing it every night
# m7 U& b; E. gSeeing the sky content with its love
0 z# {4 o) t$ I) t. hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& X! I$ R/ m2 J3 u9 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ M9 e- e9 j8 M6 o" B, {Every other word you utter is love
8 B" H1 w7 Z: r3 pI really want to know just how much you love me
: F6 e: ^, s! Y8 j+ a' r( YI love you I love you with all my heart
+ [) ~: Y  A: z$ L, jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 c+ c% K, J9 W& R* LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% G6 c; N" |9 B7 U( dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 _/ Y0 y5 R, Q( I# r/ @& iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. m$ ?; t: T; _4 P: mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ]  V% m1 J' M* g' yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) ^6 U) ?. k. H8 O! f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: W0 G# M8 _; a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 Y) J$ a; H/ b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" P+ E; q+ U6 l6 R9 b. Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 R" `# M7 Z9 e( M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& j8 T& m# `( P6 t/ |8 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: a5 K, A2 H! B: R1 r% d5 \! R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 v0 X, r2 J  E. [7 Y* W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" n# X/ `* `5 N* u1 p# m5 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! b8 ?; q& ~) K. U! K8 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, f- I+ m5 r) L' j8 r1 g3 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) L& }; z; r* L- B3 v- _( N* u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. L! k# l) B8 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 h" O/ W/ v3 G4 \+ p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 _, `  Q: A/ p( e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 @; ?" ~! A! O% W- e2 F4 T- j1 P& W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& R! N$ y$ b1 ^/ P( b7 e! F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 J. v+ w" h. a5 O$ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ~# H3 H* D% i3 [3 T9 R/ B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  P/ u3 L$ r. \$ f" D7 P0 Q: i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: y) f: F' b! U# l9 J/ w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. D# |* e" ?$ D7 t! u+ }9 @我请你剖开它

; ~% s  A7 Y( _+ _& x: T6 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 {- v7 {9 Z  W6 u, {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>