【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  u1 I. b1 w4 }$ h( W歌词我附在后面。
: {: o. q, D! t( r( v  ?: SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 B1 G$ Z0 O1 a2 p9 e  x( m' JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: M( f% y: Y% {8 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 j8 J% ?2 K% F3 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
; a5 I" W3 c% n& f0 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( l; J5 J9 z+ G6 n% cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# U) P, q7 V2 b& t5 tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 A. Z4 z5 C, |) R  _0 oEvery other word you utter is love
+ p. Y4 u4 H+ ?6 v; a. m5 ]$ JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 |7 I5 ?; U/ M6 y2 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 \3 {. h, Q" [/ a& PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 z( z. r, J& o1 j0 N4 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( _2 e1 @& @' ^4 I6 a0 ~. II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 X1 t: i) }( UWith such a tongue as yours,
, }4 P; D1 v, [  F: O. q) hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 V! O) P( x% V/ C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 }+ M3 L- O0 g/ o3 O$ G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 G8 y8 c9 J! v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 w5 ~4 o4 ^! Z" v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 A: ]% Q( U' A8 J8 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 M: N# B- b+ L5 f& L4 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 O4 ^# l& U( ]* p: H9 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 Q" W: R6 C# o; n  `% ~5 u7 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; e2 q0 x, o/ {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. L1 Z1 H# H3 W* |' p; L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& l! m/ N$ Y1 z. j8 T* `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  q6 F  z+ T2 E7 r0 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) f, \$ V4 d# f7 B. n/ X$ G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 _3 N6 e& O7 W2 w7 p/ Y  f% t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  U( r# b) l; X% h* W% G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, {( Y6 d7 k( O: X- K6 u3 q' {9 ]) ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. y, L- s4 u. ~  t' ]8 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, I) }) v# c; @; b$ E5 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 h7 Z0 D, X: @$ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Y; |# r, K! ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ ^. c7 s2 ?4 R+ I4 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ d1 A+ K/ f% ^$ k! u) D8 ?/ A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ E8 q. J* p8 f; e! f5 B$ M1 _6 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>