【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  u) X9 y0 A5 m/ }/ d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 d5 B; f  W7 y3 Z! |5 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, k" B3 H9 z7 Q" ?# yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# y8 M2 L  ?+ F! pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 E# M) n( N* a1 i" M) ]3 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: t2 V  i- ^  j( X5 v4 B. H& @0 l5 bI love you I love you with all my heart
! Y# D9 D  O) VNothing can compare to my love
4 S# w3 ]  \' h; wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& W# G% U+ c$ k. y3 N9 rI want so much to see inside your heart
2 L, Q; b* Z1 |+ M1 N+ `# NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 [$ e5 D5 Z. B( E+ fI’m still filled with fear
" t8 l# ?- ?) J7 s' ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" A" D) [. @+ q( xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 l) U; }0 U0 }! B7 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 _; r" P  }. D0 h6 B4 K! r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 v' l! A* Q- @, K( C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 y( ?+ T* B$ c9 P8 E. }5 m. G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" f) o9 I- u$ Q2 k8 E  Q( Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 G; i! {* a; i7 y) b% L% `7 Q2 }( z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 H" Y/ P2 t, L" E! U4 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 S+ G' ?; v) R" I$ U/ ?! k7 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 O3 ]  ~* c7 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% v8 X' L2 U8 s& M" y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 w5 c: \: J/ Z4 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( ~% z4 w/ u. j3 n+ ^  u. v$ R( A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# E' }$ ]7 d$ u  e/ r$ B7 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( A8 e( ]5 r0 g; u( |! ]+ D: K1 R8 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% B2 j  {8 {" U0 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ S& E" o" B4 K1 y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 p: f& l- i! ]* W% P1 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( }: }0 {4 [$ b1 ^3 |! ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) R) \5 a- M) s5 e' }4 D, ~( J3 A' ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# |7 {; q% [( s0 S9 v# y: Y6 \3 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  x. e: b: z; }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! @& r) B' l' M& I( l+ e  s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 R3 ^  Z. H5 ~. S" U& o* r" u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' q5 U3 B0 v0 _0 N3 Z* Y5 n6 S9 I$ \1 C我请你剖开它

4 G4 ~# D* K/ g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 P6 u8 V7 d2 o- M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>