【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 y1 q! C) H! b, a2 C7 D8 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" E& B) I6 A" t4 C  IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( y( v5 p9 [% n6 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! x9 {) B' B5 f) IThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ _9 T# F$ A1 K  kWith the moon kissing it every night
, }8 u7 ?2 m5 W/ j# `9 KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ M3 i0 z0 v8 [' G& B1 UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 T$ n& _3 d6 y% T$ R) xNothing can compare to my love
! |% n, J* o$ J' W" @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: t) f" O5 W! {5 V0 U4 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 L) e. J0 d) PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ G5 r" P) T! rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 \$ m% |$ {6 U& oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: j+ n/ M) |. dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 H* h3 q3 |: T% A" nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) r" Y3 Z) I7 k- G: CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 k9 f" g, S1 O! F) O& \' o- D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  D5 w+ L; O. |5 p' y, J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 J; x9 X! U& r  I9 N* S+ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- S' t* \2 J0 R# I. {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% U0 r1 Z, J% {! X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 Y/ c( y! C) h# n  m8 I* {  k- a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* R  w7 Q' e1 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" x' C- @8 o7 j5 V$ o. M  e6 k1 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
. ?% w( ?# B* ?7 L' ]$ L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 \  H, `( T, }4 J( f+ f% U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 ^) P; d$ G  g) ]) C6 j7 A& V<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( M7 g' T9 S/ E0 x# q: \$ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ ^: P+ O- m& x" L2 K* p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 M' m$ n5 h: E7 o3 E# l. l5 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* q  U+ W" Y$ F& Z3 b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 f5 ~, |! t8 Y9 l0 P# r2 D5 s9 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: ^. K0 A9 ]0 N& }, I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# d9 `: B; O& b0 {/ M8 i) G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 V) K6 |& o2 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" e7 `% E' r/ Y' N8 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( V0 h2 k; {1 {* k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# t$ m" s) h+ I! W7 f6 B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# \" `1 f! p( q  v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 u0 U% Y8 j  H! ~: A- b1 _' \* i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 M3 {" [) `" d# K& g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 G. a+ z, Z- I  ~2 [+ Y$ N我请你剖开它
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# a+ l  E& l4 J# F0 t8 |% D9 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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