【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 I$ a/ h4 J) Y+ K6 j. P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& }) n1 Z' n% W5 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ~6 Z9 R( F9 N' r7 U. j+ ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 \# P5 l( q* O3 ^) g* Z6 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) C+ R9 X# N0 S) g5 X7 }, {8 r3 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: A. m6 U3 ^  Y8 L/ LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% v- `" X7 U  V- i- `+ D* DI love you I love you with all my heart
: |! H( n2 ^& B0 H- y0 JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 x4 h) o2 n1 O) W  wI regret not dying
3 E# ~% ^' z6 B9 F, E5 z& S0 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ q- }8 \0 R! L2 w1 |  Y7 S. T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" B  ^) w9 h$ r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# I* k2 L& H0 E8 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* f/ P% ^+ u1 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# L1 s6 k& Z- b" W3 `' T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 E2 T+ b9 J% L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 F$ X9 @; `5 Z. _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, h- ^7 H4 ]' n6 v, \7 G+ H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( \3 p! u2 T( J; k* p<P>你无需担心</P>
5 u# Z% s0 J1 ~& S# P1 }0 \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ J+ f& U; c* h1 m; M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# H- y4 g/ x: n# e. F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) ?0 D+ w! L) r( F5 z8 M4 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& y" c$ P6 b+ J" G5 q, B1 |% S2 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, q+ j$ q6 K* N0 d% ?! U* q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" Y, C0 t  ?4 o" T3 _7 ?9 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' K7 H' b! m  o/ F+ M# h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) i& k, |: `# z9 f1 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! o4 }- ~" z8 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& G1 |$ L, e( E  c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" z0 ~) J; c, k/ p7 k$ M2 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 D' g5 T  a- i5 W  e& ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ^& G; R- ]. k' m; }6 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" t9 b) C& }1 E! R. f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: M6 a5 K0 }  A7 }, W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' h" U, j- u6 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- K4 C! N3 I+ ~& D6 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 G4 d$ \# x, t5 d$ n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- q" k* c6 G. T0 @8 H" |+ h3 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" ]& L' w& Y9 P+ {3 P: d# f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>