【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 W' O. |& p6 C/ @- q! r* j$ NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* i' K0 ~; L( O7 ]( LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 h0 w# o6 J/ a  `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' K, p( b+ t$ ?; s5 P* _Seeing the sky content with its love
" i9 H; @& }! \9 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 u' J% L  I& k& S5 GEvery other word you utter is love
# X7 |$ `# Y( R( tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 F  X, H3 a! r  f2 F7 C, FNothing can compare to my love
4 o5 S! a- L; d0 t& K& ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 b/ R6 g8 g$ D4 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 {9 w( w. l# Q, g3 B$ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 x! J# o8 y" q( C" CI’m still filled with fear
& P- `0 ?$ s! VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) l0 ~& k6 b" P& v0 |; S! f: \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* e) v' k2 G. h# tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 V: U0 p- _) u1 w9 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 @6 B6 Q. {' y1 X8 b! B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, H, H- I& C# z; e/ P) R6 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- G: B0 y; w+ }  @' U4 X% B0 @+ O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ h& K: l9 G2 t+ j5 \9 k3 ?0 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 y5 X. w) p' @. B4 x% P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# l" P+ c0 ^3 T9 ?0 S9 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" f0 I. _( |( U2 r4 T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; _4 c1 U: Z# ?7 Q+ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" l) T) \1 d8 h1 @/ x4 H& S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" a: A8 T0 _9 R' y0 B6 a" Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 d7 F5 q8 d1 _, X$ X- o& _<P>你无需担心</P>
* i: k: Y9 a2 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# v  S. X7 y: C- p7 n4 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ d/ B9 A& a0 B! W$ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 W6 J- `) x+ X0 G) I. D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ^" W. e2 L9 C4 p1 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 x/ n1 I9 _% W6 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 i& z! r2 ]; r7 ~" I! C3 N6 E# D7 D( n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ H1 G$ l4 \( m3 u/ I9 X6 I/ b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% r4 j( a$ V. I) ?- f3 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 |! Z1 P2 ^5 e! ~/ t. b- r3 N/ |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 z. w, ~1 Q& r9 r0 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# G) g2 w6 D. C" H. G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; I4 ~7 p. X; m+ F/ i( C' L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( \. Q- {5 j+ [, s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 T3 u  B* Q2 L" @$ H3 X2 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 Q( p+ F; \: M+ R6 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! O" ]: X* _! z( c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% q& ^, q, }' x9 Y2 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, \0 g/ i& w; d: @" Z% R3 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 o0 ^, Z7 m, K% W( E. M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; ?# s9 r6 X, I6 C8 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 X3 G" {8 B, [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

7 X( D: O0 W$ ^& ?1 D8 _' Q9 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>