【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ C! }; t1 a' O, H' N; q2 j/ c+ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
' |/ l7 }* |7 e2 }: M$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- |+ a# F& c1 `! x& }& UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ t) _1 O, m9 _$ \+ {6 W& A6 f2 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 a0 R, Q; T# t3 j( }: xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* R' n; d) b9 o' e4 Y$ M! e* NYou needn’t fear anything
1 U$ H6 W0 ?4 G, ^  B; g) k, D' TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 W% Z* P4 v( F; K  LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ J2 S- n. M5 C" k0 R0 N& J7 s" f1 \' NI love you I love you with all my heart
6 D- X/ F" t, K/ rNothing can compare to my love
- t$ O/ v8 }, b6 O2 F  bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) L( g$ C1 n$ VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( ^. c9 T( D; P1 k( CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 D; R; Z7 U  g$ JI’m still filled with fear
* ^9 f* h) Z1 G' n& r+ T8 @$ G" ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 Q6 g7 L$ Y% T' [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ c  z5 X+ Q/ O7 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 ?9 Q8 t5 L6 [; q6 n1 }% o; @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' I6 B' F. ~" S9 t" V, _! j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# x! Y; ^4 E1 O" N1 T2 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 I2 c, g6 u* |4 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 ^1 p- B" F  i) q: g6 f, D% o' L, d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) s& L, o8 h! u9 S! X- l7 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ^" Q8 t+ Z& P3 p8 `6 e& r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* b( Y9 Y, C$ k: l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 t$ r* ^8 x  N  U7 N; v; `+ {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) q( T( r! u  _( `% y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- c. p* u) B' Q5 \5 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 l* D/ v& D+ d) m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 y/ P  q2 U  y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 c0 B6 U' A4 g0 E8 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ l- o, B# G: d6 C$ I9 P3 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) o' D# I: ^: R8 ?0 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 \- K; C7 h* k# T  G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# M2 l# N5 m3 Y$ f7 _1 x9 U: i6 N+ M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- y( d" d3 L4 u+ Y$ q' v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ E: S' i* F- d* h( O' ~+ b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* p0 ?5 |5 t: J& [( \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! x, k; Z' L- i- m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ c# k- w: Q3 ]8 U9 x" z1 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 L6 c. ?8 S4 @# w' z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; j9 Y2 I7 p/ ~9 s1 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 j" i+ |* E3 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 M" f* A" B0 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: f$ e. U& ?1 M3 \- \7 C/ y, @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 F/ k1 [2 x0 k. N1 I( j1 E% d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  N# X, Y5 v& p: {: g! z; j! p3 S: J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 G5 p  R7 [) }" G5 G! s8 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>