【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 e0 D% Z9 N6 U) U& {: u7 @# ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' |4 @( X7 j5 a: I2 f$ ]: HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 q9 n  l6 G  y$ \3 h* }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 D4 r* v( s( L- q9 U: SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( I% t" H# c  IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ H5 _. e4 E' }  z6 G; BEvery other word you utter is love
- R5 [# s! G9 d2 @( `- ~2 m% k9 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 I+ [$ N" O: l; c' `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 _, ]0 [8 n* w5 n0 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- O) W1 X# Y3 A$ K5 f5 H1 ]I regret not dying
& l  s" f/ G8 s6 |9 y+ K' \8 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. m- q4 s8 |: w# k9 z7 T  E+ mWith such a tongue as yours,
2 O. Q+ s* r* J6 @) U9 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 {- D+ @# I. k) r5 j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 h. F# b' T7 Z+ M, H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, h8 ?. g4 Y/ S7 G) W( j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 V6 a- F6 @( W: B7 g+ Q' G9 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 `; ^# z+ i. ?: G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 b$ x4 B2 D; ]) M<P>你无需担心</P>
- t: {  C4 t6 ?* Z$ N, s0 R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! u2 S; _0 z: W& d: f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 t0 E9 T! U2 ~. \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 H* p# O! @1 r" Z5 D8 W; Y' E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% h: ^4 U- [% ~  z5 A$ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 j, {  i. W5 W, e" ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  _7 j' d# x# [2 {4 P5 f5 q* \" B# x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, S5 y* d, V( w$ W8 Z+ P3 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  \( O$ x2 i3 F! Q. X* f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 `" F1 j4 r8 {4 r4 H2 k6 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ }: D) w) |. B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  Z( d; V( }1 S5 J& J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( x9 D7 ^- a* d6 r* E% J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ d, e& _' p; I; p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 \2 e" ?2 G3 j$ _& k& ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ B: n# U1 x- S7 [3 w. G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' i1 ?4 n) |4 K8 i9 X) O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 p, J- x, a; {我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>