【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 q: @. C; x: F! G. f  s5 e  h3 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% ?- d. ]9 Q, k7 h% N  rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  @: F* T% S, GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 W$ l6 w8 V- R  D# C' Z# IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ }; ~8 L, Q! A, b6 m3 T$ N3 USeeing the sky content with its love
4 d$ [" Q* i: J8 g! ?, a7 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 k7 d# p- y/ a1 a" l7 R/ yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 E0 A- C- z* Y# w3 A% G. XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ `5 P9 u6 p, H# g7 I! D. v6 DI love you I love you with all my heart
* L; |+ B7 _% _Nothing can compare to my love
) y  ~& u0 ~7 X+ i9 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& I$ R2 Y3 M3 e% v- d% nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 u( U1 I8 |9 G- F) N9 ^) |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 J1 y9 X, i1 uI’m still filled with fear
" q  Q5 r6 B$ e4 E# T8 L2 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 `7 }5 Y9 W' R% Q1 {& l" S& }+ B1 TI regret not dying
5 J$ n% n& Y# U3 ?, p6 L! TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: _. }$ t/ |2 @2 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' k6 ^3 I2 r, d' k9 \! }0 D" k3 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  W5 J+ x6 x( q8 }$ V/ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 j( D% I- K" N3 G* d7 P/ t3 M* q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' C& Z; ]4 I3 e2 O8 `2 }0 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& q1 E1 v% F  ?4 u8 |( W5 }6 [* I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* G9 t* e5 u, U) ]/ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 Q  N, K- Y3 Z7 X+ t! m: U2 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ f" p( y( X: K8 Q6 c3 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ B& j  ~% x4 i5 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* z1 S; \6 C2 H9 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# X$ |: F2 w& `: o9 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, H9 e  D+ h# T: W, P) c% L( S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. Z  V) R  m7 u5 I) u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, i- q# ~. U2 A+ C' C* ^5 S* i9 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  B, O) d5 `* b; o% N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# p7 O! g+ t+ J1 l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& J- y9 S' _2 `1 M; w1 V2 W( c8 A# d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 l2 W: O5 T5 D3 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% T8 p) I9 x) I: i( T/ l0 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( g2 V' W  V5 |; `4 k8 ?! V9 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( ?( O7 c0 e# @! K, E; q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, _, p3 ?+ L2 w8 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 ?( g7 ]# ^0 {( `: e; g<P>I regret not dying</P>
! [+ O8 n1 `) Y+ ^0 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 [; D  @& [9 o9 _$ a) ?6 R" Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" L) H7 B- ?2 h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 \3 t3 |, l4 ~* q: k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, |$ b5 p; w% p6 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! @# K- j1 p7 w0 `& ?. l4 w$ L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>