【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ v1 R0 x8 o; @5 OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- U% a2 j0 a7 \# o' _- _! N; E, DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ h, u, S; \/ h  [( K2 c2 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 n/ g) b# E% f) C& w" ]/ Y6 f& jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( X! {) Q+ q/ c* N: g  oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 I& ?. g2 x# p+ m4 P6 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 h) a" ]' {! _/ E" D, MI want so much to see inside your heart
& a2 t3 J) p! p2 k3 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 @* V  i/ P+ D# `) |' A7 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. v% O( t9 y4 [- Y) [+ [% O# p9 jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ n4 c3 R: R) r8 n5 ]' Q- ?5 C5 eWith such a tongue as yours,
5 b/ _% w5 v& y7 v8 z5 ?* M, B& EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& a& k, O% x1 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 d9 |% [0 `! g7 v# |, F$ v% M% g9 E& dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ H1 q6 J) z/ \2 Z+ P0 b8 G! f. W) J1 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 i0 S, q) X) f3 Q' ]( J/ \  Y7 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" P% y& ~) t( n2 k% T& I! Q- ^; @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* J1 v- C0 x, }- E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 A- |6 ^8 B" v6 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 Y) M  Y7 h2 {5 W5 N: \) X6 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" K5 z3 h% d; q$ Z' E( y, h. C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 r) l4 g" F8 ^- U, E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; {& Z) U& Y- [1 x& G8 D$ l8 q$ ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 u4 i% q) s/ L: u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( Q" C% K; C) R/ m/ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! ?0 r9 O4 T1 _8 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% W( J5 @/ L+ C9 a. C, x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' t! P, z# {' d5 Q: y# u' |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 }* {* @0 T0 j6 o: ]; J3 V2 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  }7 O  [$ k0 k. b7 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( _! O! B- \4 z3 W" Z- W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- F7 G, h5 O& P+ N+ @+ [0 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* r8 y! w8 z$ o* t2 O  Y! \2 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( H9 K9 h; P0 ?+ b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 x& W3 l$ D% v, u, e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& ~& J8 U# a+ x# I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 D! X7 x, T% p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 u- A' w+ Y. U6 B4 A' l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  g7 c  T, b: b8 d* f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 n+ Z+ v, j6 [4 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- q3 w! J3 P' P+ ]+ l' W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# B3 p. e+ [9 }; U4 E6 R/ n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ t( P, P' n" A2 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ C4 F8 ^( G) D* z; e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 f( e  O( O/ Y* ~& ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% T* H/ J2 P" g! x' E& l: P  w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' U) P4 N! y8 h7 C3 T1 ]我请你剖开它

1 D& F3 ?* g: p4 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>