【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" B) c3 g  M( Z- QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, ^( P# y% H/ b# |, o7 \0 O( AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, N1 |4 J4 }* ^; C) P- A+ ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  u0 E1 t/ q. w/ ^* `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) F3 [7 P' P. `1 ~+ II really want to know just how much you love me
) m6 o6 u2 G' X: s) aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 @1 e0 W2 ~; H" s  DI want so much to see inside your heart
! \- K# ^- J; {+ O: }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! E- k+ N% I% D1 g. |& ?% I! VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) g2 G9 C( G  B0 C! U$ e3 @4 FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" C4 v1 B& v5 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 Y( |8 D1 t' v" C# g" Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; _8 t% y1 o, B7 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# q6 \5 S$ ]3 f: {  s- `/ I2 c9 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! ~  c' w6 y$ R, _' P* s( Q) ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 }) C9 @& }4 b; B" l+ R( |: c5 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( F8 s% ]' C# q  t( s+ F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- q4 a, ^) f+ u! F; W( {$ u* Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* h2 d3 R  Q% t! e2 _& G& O  W. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. d0 C9 e7 _* B2 {- t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 @9 N$ P" A. u. g<P>你无需担心</P>
6 B* w: m3 @) B; L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 x" A, N) L' M- \! I3 e0 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ C2 d! x/ x6 X* [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 `2 f. L7 @0 m  @) y- M8 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% L6 S4 Y8 x  G. z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: n9 V5 M/ W% a- `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ^7 M3 x% @0 l! z: Q) i; L0 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 i- @5 Q5 z3 m# l9 a+ F, H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 Z5 Q: k1 g* q2 H4 j6 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! `1 ]) D6 v# ]+ H9 |0 X6 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ E+ |( F3 b; B# z* p) K! E, ~4 M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: c9 D1 k* a- U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 c$ P, s! k5 g$ M2 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 {. X3 p2 u" b4 d! B* k<P>I regret not dying</P>
# r# F8 o  |: W* i8 i( t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( s1 Y; Q/ X' w: g0 e( p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* N6 Y% A# s3 ?& K. _7 A+ t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ I/ N" _  q7 s' @5 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" D1 _: N" ^6 j7 z" u0 x, H2 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, G  M3 m' n) \3 j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 O9 f" @8 t7 T$ z$ \8 \2 q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>