【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 m2 y: t; ^& m# tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 e# a% w* s+ Q) J" {" b2 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 g* ~; P, Y$ o% @- K1 D( Q# T/ DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 b+ l& O# s, X% G8 uYou needn’t fear anything
4 e& @- v7 ~! e5 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 ^9 ]  [& V5 V& U# M* f; wI really want to know just how much you love me
8 v8 t% J$ W& c$ p# o; wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 r1 o4 |. @, c5 n( MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 D& q8 n% X2 c$ H3 v" EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, a# D  _9 a, s3 F% x4 \: AI’m still filled with fear
/ v, g* ^! s: i# j) LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 Z& k% a( y; [& S) u% NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 R& q/ S$ n" ~! ]! VWith such a tongue as yours,
9 B: r, F9 I) m6 Q, i7 Y) i+ QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" i/ N8 M9 Q+ M! V5 c; {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 G( |) s/ C1 Z% F# v; k$ L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" c- p* {3 r% `+ T$ W6 k. F% M$ l! M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! z, {; _9 R: J; c7 B6 X0 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ E" }' \* a; l$ t, g8 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& w7 `, x; {# G; `! J2 }4 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# ?' f5 ^% ?9 T; g$ W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. q7 L, y; N7 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 H- g5 r) R  w2 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- G; J9 A0 ~, T; ]. v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  `( {% H5 z7 l- O" j# C) e* h<P>你无需担心</P>
9 Y/ ]4 I7 Z- r& N! i4 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, D; w* @) K- G8 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 K+ P; t: E% G/ t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 V" \1 s& o  \  K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 P" v" r' [2 ^. i5 Y! {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: Z; N, w* r4 v0 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! T& ^7 Y1 \% }! h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! f8 H+ _4 }' t2 q' ?/ X, \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 B: @6 U0 l0 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! @- Y# v; k9 ^" L' I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: O& `& {# p; U3 O7 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. o1 V/ a7 C- Q4 s7 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) G4 I$ z1 |4 Q( Z! Q& |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ [6 E" z. l& f! K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% Q8 f4 A1 _6 t5 o- ]4 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& G9 [, w" c7 D2 {% B. \- g0 G9 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- ]9 h- @' N" {) }$ ~9 R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* t5 [- G+ c& U; |3 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) O! d4 t7 M) F8 X+ ~  r( B6 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! ^' ^# {0 u9 M7 ?2 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>