【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 z, o! v" E; a. K, L8 ~1 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 ~9 {: R. v) o5 ~' |+ OWith the moon kissing it every night
  m; B. r7 o" F2 B* p4 hSeeing the sky content with its love
- D: i# v5 x! q2 q4 E3 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& @9 l4 d$ V2 W0 s6 l9 A: \I really want to know just how much you love me
' |  e* S/ t2 k  M8 B6 b: e" ^& ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 z& G: Y' v$ G7 X. O* @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* e9 Q8 U5 ?% U& g8 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ I, R  ]6 e7 n7 d5 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ x9 d% t8 c9 I6 `, Q9 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' u8 A3 {5 E  h7 y  |$ M( v( DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) D( `/ o, O( m0 ~9 P7 m1 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ J5 X" b( {+ P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  l) C1 [7 g# N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 f  q# _3 t  O/ D! t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 r  n  \2 d% u3 ~# f7 [* i9 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 u" m6 R3 w; b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ C! j: Q% U0 L7 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 T. r7 T0 A) S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ q1 B# i' y9 V/ y' e2 m5 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 K  l: U( X$ |4 T- s1 C4 k  _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 l- I: C* l. M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 F, f# f' Y2 g* y9 N6 d. h4 l$ r1 X. Y) t* I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Q6 D6 F) y; G% Y" e% g0 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  C' l& m" D- w( H' g% j4 g) @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 z4 ]# M0 T8 _, Q8 P' y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- Z* ^! c: T1 \( K( D6 N& T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: t9 P5 {2 T9 }. i8 F9 y) S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 t6 o9 g3 W6 [% R3 H0 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. ]3 Y1 {/ X: z8 b: p$ j; u2 C$ D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& q; r, j4 h0 t: p! {$ Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 }8 b" \6 J) M+ V. A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 n2 J% p9 L4 V* f* K2 M我请你剖开它

2 o. f+ R- s4 X2 R- H  v. o( X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 B% ?+ A9 Q' O2 ~7 @, N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>