【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# M. p; G' L6 y6 V% [5 l3 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ ^1 v1 _8 I' e; j& ^8 z+ HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 I2 r, U, S9 m- ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 V; S: @) T* s6 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 e/ h- t3 D: h1 m8 h8 ~1 R% V) s0 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) ]5 u3 Z- R3 wI really want to know just how much you love me
$ D$ b/ B: m1 c% c6 P" dI love you I love you with all my heart
3 U: h( {$ {* LNothing can compare to my love
: k* D+ F, J3 Z* T) a% W3 e% H# vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 z! r( D3 ?( Q( EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 [) U; Y# h& G* |2 AI regret not dying
1 X, K+ r# B0 {' {7 H& t- uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 T* T$ S; O0 \( @: x7 h5 YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 e! J( |# n+ z4 ]* R$ xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 G' `% a3 r( O* A# T2 S% wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. A* W/ I- t6 u, r6 j' s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 T- L+ L2 F2 w# H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! c: r9 K$ j  p' ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! J" K( N! A! Z4 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# ]! M7 r5 O6 \. U/ P8 U, e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, Z) G5 ?* }1 I/ ?  E, B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- g9 S. u( s$ V- A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! r2 J6 C3 F6 _1 d$ H; w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- t# A4 I) H. }: u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 i6 u% R9 N$ C0 a) @* u& r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* \& R% U0 p  e! U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- P0 `# I9 }; P. y: N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" I+ |/ v* K3 R$ [8 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: ^. Z4 T& r4 u# U+ F0 R  A( I+ P& I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, d6 {) b# f; y8 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 }7 y& d( [# g9 k+ ?+ S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 Z! ~9 A) U. ^; Z* T4 r( `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( D( k& i2 {9 o# B; O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* g3 L4 A# i: M* Z3 g/ M; T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  x: M, J- h+ y% q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; x# P6 [, L4 A7 j5 o5 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 L+ G# a/ Q6 J8 B, u& U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 c- t4 l) B/ o  @% E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>