【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ B7 Q. C: s  \. ~6 N1 p歌词我附在后面。
, _! F+ D; A8 T+ p+ H$ MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# O$ l- }* |# G  F2 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 {0 W0 E0 Q. ?/ p9 Q; ]6 F* h3 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 q. V8 J6 @; U5 q, Z) U8 g1 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 y( U. `1 A9 o' H3 @8 iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ X4 `. {; w7 h6 j; I  [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% ?7 s% c8 b& Q- yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 I* I  d; {, w1 w- D* L0 ]: |* II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ F& \& s, s! t* GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) G" c0 @( h" Z. f5 h% _I regret not dying
" L: Z! K) g9 {, Y5 Y- TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' n* `6 u2 r: X5 O( l- X% H5 i. h" L# k' HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ ]; y, L: U: m/ t( r/ p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) E6 Q9 `2 t6 y- `; l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 t  W2 G4 P& Y% \3 e5 i) S0 _' q1 ?  Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 s1 W, q3 b9 G2 |' L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- _2 [6 n( s0 {, P* D+ `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! N7 a! J8 b: |: R" h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 F4 o7 W$ K+ X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  O8 Z) K/ j) J: x* f: h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, _8 B# I) V4 i8 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, H' @" E5 H# [) h5 C+ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ K7 ]- @* ]& T7 o( x7 k1 q9 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% }, C5 I/ }+ N9 N  l) d8 i9 v) x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 M+ {0 J4 W: E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 x5 g' [2 L. \, i5 I: r. Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% @  l9 k2 \6 M( Z$ h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! P$ p0 ]! }9 Y& b0 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 e6 \/ u$ Y% d& a# F- j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ s( v1 u, y/ o8 u& J. O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* c' }( _+ n, D$ w0 I8 ]3 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; c8 {0 S5 M' X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 k% A! u+ R# t( ?8 }$ M  n0 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ g# e- F& m0 g4 t- k" w2 l2 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 Y/ O4 M( n9 R* H3 n$ U0 l' [9 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 ~* A0 w8 O6 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& T) o2 U9 v7 Q7 \  V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 e: q/ P5 P' g0 f. i$ z3 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ S1 ~. j. ]* p9 r" h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 C8 ?0 ^- P* d; L; l3 f4 @2 v我请你剖开它

9 h6 C1 u0 @5 {+ Y3 S( f- N* v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& d. f  ]* A& H, i* c" d# R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>