【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- w4 ]1 h7 `: B- \4 a. f* sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% W1 a: y$ L+ N5 L  CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( l+ l; a0 B/ C1 ^/ B" C2 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ }$ R# }* S+ |2 Q4 E$ gSeeing the sky content with its love
9 l9 [9 ~/ r  ^  ?! KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- @) `1 |/ h: xYou needn’t fear anything
  ~1 T* q3 q8 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& b8 q) R: S4 kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) [4 a8 l" z7 \. O9 W. a. IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% P, A3 \" u' X6 T: }# K# X, Z0 n7 O  SI want so much to see inside your heart
$ P; v7 }5 @4 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. h$ F' p: {8 q' VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 {; r& t6 R6 C0 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, A0 U" r  ]& {" }+ aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 Z0 Y( {  o5 D2 y6 \6 {5 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 I' a' ]8 Q) k7 F. @, L$ A+ ^8 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! V2 [8 [9 C( }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# `/ s% z! V$ `; ^# W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* Z, h9 C% `7 X1 `! C- P( I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 n' V1 K- a3 B7 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& s% z, D; O; V  Z# `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 x/ r; B& k+ R2 Z2 q/ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 _$ M2 G# @2 Z; U1 t5 F  F  U7 m" O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  ]. f, k4 U. R* g3 N; q& e- t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# `" d6 W$ q; Z( n1 r4 ?! [$ m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 ]+ u0 s: a) o) j( f/ }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 q3 W4 C& p) }" H/ a; O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 i3 ?, J8 I; Q# d2 {8 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 u/ G: H7 o, ~7 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 f3 r, u1 r0 M( e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. K3 J) z' v  _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. J1 [" l% E' U6 d* a! B# k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ o: l! Q& |" f3 _* d! _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 `) ^- B: [6 i- ~) ~$ K1 w1 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 B3 I$ q7 \6 m3 W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# I; }4 j3 r2 f. W( n) X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, {& J4 t: |0 a- ?6 M/ a3 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ q7 l/ j% U7 N3 H7 u. Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 |$ S" N# ?4 Q) u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, A/ M, z, ^, |% o, M7 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 [+ K3 q( B/ y9 B" ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 G7 g% m# }5 w/ R9 ^* _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 `( i+ O9 `/ L) b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: Z" Z/ Y* h) O2 f我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>