【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 z" n1 h- ]! S) M0 I& M/ tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 p+ o* t6 M; c/ VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- I6 O6 x$ m7 G" ]! j# ^8 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
& e; a" U) U7 i6 k9 nWith the moon kissing it every night
- m! d+ t# Z7 N& U0 |$ N; JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# _2 f6 v+ ^8 O  @# g& |) ^You needn’t fear anything
4 V5 z/ T7 R+ Z) f/ t% `; C3 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  D; }: Q. W) [  N# XI love you I love you with all my heart
( q( U) l, l( I% oNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 P# j6 y+ q* O7 H& b% vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 C, d  t4 O. w3 e! H# j( PI’m still filled with fear
$ _& ^* Z/ C+ C5 G4 aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, q( N: v1 R7 eWith such a tongue as yours,
1 |6 {% C1 d1 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 z$ u; \# f3 _+ k3 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  W, O# g+ d1 b& S5 E3 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ m' h1 n% ^) s( u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- }- q) v# u$ T% v% i" n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) a4 M$ h7 f! d& O3 k, h8 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; U& z( a. Z6 `, a) T* q& K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# h. h" E/ a1 G- W; J* a, ]6 O/ Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ k( O" u4 B" V$ x2 K% ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 l5 C$ V  x  ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 T3 l5 l( {5 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Q7 r( Z4 C% l5 U+ j7 [2 o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 W2 e  ~! L* d+ G" R" D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Y* Z) A3 m. y; ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  r. R" S% Y! a. ^0 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- C' y$ {9 C& N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ ?; |' ~4 ]$ Q! O# V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& {3 |3 t3 U* @6 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: J3 ^/ }1 ~; }5 I3 c" D( U* L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ K+ z1 B. d1 V) N! K) E! B- q, ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) b  v, p2 l" u  C% J6 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; F$ V0 h% P5 x& [. T' X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* ?5 m0 Y. S) Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ [+ N/ D0 A" i6 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 h& v: ]* f% P8 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 M" K# e- v9 P6 c4 \7 g1 w我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 @* q) M$ k& e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>