【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& G, ~" ^8 E  d2 L* l- o% \7 _5 d歌词我附在后面。
0 f, ~( N* o8 s  Y! \8 w; t/ y" @* ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ?  L$ M$ q$ J1 W* r/ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 c/ S1 I" Y* ?3 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: g* n) K" T3 F6 ~! M) S9 IEvery other word you utter is love
+ G6 X. J2 [* l5 i- M  V0 l  kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) W5 o" _" U% D" q1 FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ d. ^: y  n; d, y# f1 H5 _% e% r: E1 ~  KWith such a tongue as yours,
1 L! |# o# z6 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 `- v# g. ]+ v; R+ L/ ]7 c$ bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 M) M& K3 R! P& v' \& w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 Y/ n% d" s5 b" y. L$ P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 N0 D9 t# P" y. v# ?" i9 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 @# \" N. s4 I8 q$ i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! ]& J/ T( `1 b6 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# p. A* |$ T4 s: V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) w" A6 ^4 `* w- O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% d  z5 J( X6 X- i6 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& L" S7 b% F1 r' o) @3 [1 c4 r2 Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 u$ i4 K. l  w, {3 L- l$ W2 Z2 t. G( K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% h5 t# x6 c6 Z' T, I1 A$ `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 j& r4 b. `1 Y8 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 q2 ~$ `) }9 b: m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 d& g& F. l9 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ^7 p) Z' G1 G$ X  K# z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' a3 C2 A" Q+ @6 g5 ^& G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& Q" U; ^2 u. `) P1 D" R* Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- d" M+ i1 w9 W+ @  M1 S# x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 b7 y7 `4 [+ @( ~: @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, i$ u$ ~1 u" x" \/ \" }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! O3 n! p5 c5 r  l6 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 a8 u# G1 V6 p6 R3 ~" B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: F; Q6 C# O5 \" k1 e1 g2 X! e% b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! Y/ m" N- E: S+ U+ p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' o; w9 t! }, c6 b# s6 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 H) v2 M0 k- I2 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ R- k& D  ?% D# ?- Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% b& F4 W6 x2 s( a2 H8 u' `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; t) D  E2 Z/ O7 U$ T, C. y, l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 O+ g" G: J! G' a3 ^  ?  G. L6 F2 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 W; a! q& _( R9 D+ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& S/ H% v( o- E  ]( o/ a6 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' I2 g1 \4 Q9 v  z0 M" f% e我请你剖开它
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2 z+ Z. q! ~" \- t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>