【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& A& N' ]) j, W( C7 a% v% bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ }( H5 ]2 M0 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 W6 S& R/ ^# c% x1 `2 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% m$ Q2 l5 }  l7 y/ A' ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; o  ~3 b* q- c# c' q/ HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 T1 k. i9 P: G0 L1 U4 ^3 \. `6 vYou needn’t fear anything
. Z( z% Z  e" J2 n  |1 q& g) {. Z& x1 ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 o. A' k8 ^6 p' V; {. f6 SEvery other word you utter is love
2 T3 W/ N8 n7 r6 E- bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 `. l1 ~0 W- m8 HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 W3 `6 X+ N! X' P: _( TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 P% Z! K% X  u& O. |I want so much to see inside your heart
- D7 s: }0 y- eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, S4 L/ H* y8 Q( wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ J! u1 J  e5 y3 I2 D# U: BWith such a tongue as yours,
3 g0 y( {* Q4 E& d; `. AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: [) C, D) L# I& h9 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' q0 u7 u, Q& ~* \8 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; R" M3 Y0 c! Q4 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 p+ Z" G8 k: O" w- C# t" H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 c" Q6 T' Z* S3 Q4 \0 o) a9 [% J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. H! h& z- z0 ]- U2 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 ^/ m+ @- c4 _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" w9 M7 x2 C& ~4 s* Z8 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ J1 n: p/ u: w% t! `4 p/ |  U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( x2 ~& N2 t. t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( {! u" O* u9 _: v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 \7 M4 [0 [4 }6 ?+ n/ d& D7 K6 v) F# y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& v' w# f% ]7 u. b) ^* j6 u8 g! \' H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 h  V; X" r7 D. D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 o! l! m" |, }% Z4 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. S6 n! }! `# v  C1 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 G" i) g' `/ u' x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& m2 X5 i; \  L4 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# A( {" l. ?) D+ a, c  `: W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% d& R) s& o) h' d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 K6 G. d" ?9 c6 e6 I  c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- [( P& j! |0 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; c' p. }; o: I" `2 u* \! B; U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 i+ a2 E6 ~* K+ q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# F1 j* x5 t$ ?- Y4 c7 U/ P$ @: H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# U# I6 m; L2 {. p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& R0 Z+ ?/ X5 a9 M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. B( w0 M3 A: e; N, g( |3 ^" t$ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% N/ j7 k* V5 R0 z* t' Q4 L. F9 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 }9 T/ u  c* x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 T0 P5 g; i8 J- p1 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' e/ U- Q! p/ @3 a0 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, Y% D2 c% x3 s. X1 \7 q6 J4 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>