【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 y. v3 t* s# n: d歌词我附在后面。
- J1 r7 m0 }0 [3 p& qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 c: `# r1 M2 x8 {1 [( i2 V7 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. q) E) L* l* v: U' L* o" vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& q/ W" U3 U+ iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. f$ I& ]2 C$ K, C0 d/ }9 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 x- E) f- s1 V# p  j4 o( q0 H. mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" G0 W6 k0 P& F, u2 N$ P! YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: m' U7 _: l% ~0 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& N, x2 f2 o4 J' ]- R" FI regret not dying
" C( `2 I8 d. R2 G# @7 l  OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  K* e! B: Q7 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 o, d  b! e/ v& U: x5 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ~& G' p4 _# N4 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; O: A/ }6 w. s7 I/ b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! H% Z7 z+ O# N. @# X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, F; z! v3 s3 ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 u# r4 `- W) a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 i7 B" H/ ^: {! r6 c4 d0 P& j6 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, I- j0 F) G: \' w5 C) X. Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 }0 D- v; |8 V4 z! k( v4 ^4 v<P>你无需担心</P>
" Y2 K  s& M# d% r1 ^& k, J0 @) K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 g( K3 z3 D+ [  r- e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 f$ q: b" ?2 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 v* w. X# ^% R3 X6 s$ J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- w9 b* O: ?) f  j5 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ n( T( A% e2 }, z; a" y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 W, F0 }  F6 i3 J% A* b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 @, ~- _( j2 f/ x; _+ l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! V- X# @/ Z# c( K6 J9 v9 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' c7 c% i8 |" ^+ S+ o7 s7 x8 N. T" }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( m! H, E/ L: q0 G8 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' A0 C' u6 [7 C' |% z, ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 v, e5 e" l, E  k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 c- T! {" c' ~" ~! i2 Q% v<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 h8 L+ g" n7 p: Y9 u: H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ m. ]8 M- \# H( p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ D- B, u' ?! x+ s8 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! f( u* d) R8 r  G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 h; `$ X: j# F9 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# L$ S& }$ p! F7 u# z+ f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- _, O. \: p5 C6 {& Q+ C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 E. N: @( _! R* a) e* j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 M- l( K9 @: b8 M, x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>