【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* W5 I8 ^1 r& j; h5 l) ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) |/ w" `3 M; e6 T8 X2 Z; z. G4 L" {The sky is happy down to its soul
, m8 m8 v" {, u3 ^- cWith the moon kissing it every night
: Y" B3 V) J2 M3 m6 w/ `# `/ NSeeing the sky content with its love
1 e) S" O: {: mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 T) j. E) T* B6 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. Z6 Q8 {3 m7 e+ m0 tNothing can compare to my love
, J& Q4 D; @/ N. S$ qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 R/ g: H6 m3 ~6 e/ M$ bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ b) N  R, Q8 W5 o2 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 l7 i" I4 m$ K9 Q! eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# p7 ]( ~# ~: w1 N% Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ y. A1 i& \9 L. e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 d# `  w; ?( e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% C1 S+ ]' |8 |( }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: r5 a# u# |5 }9 X& l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* M9 }( I: l. v5 Q0 c. d6 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* {6 h# P, }  I' d) e" N$ R8 [, e" x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) b: u9 t4 J, C* ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ t9 G9 X% x1 E$ G6 a0 F+ k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 x* r! N' M- @+ C0 c( l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- b8 P7 v/ x: y: e8 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! I. O5 B. m+ s! U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 ]' L7 U; j: \7 q7 J6 e0 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& F1 c& W$ e; ]$ z; {5 K0 ^+ b% P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 c. N7 B* [" B' l4 Y& O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( I! s3 J6 k( B1 r8 Y" X  F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 P1 s  Z# _. C7 Z4 V) u/ T& h% A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 r/ M  s3 X3 {; u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ?/ _+ i* v3 e% l( V# J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! j% f8 h3 h- ~; ^8 H, }$ v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, D8 t9 e0 [) u! C' |/ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 g1 S  g$ I' F3 c9 M7 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 h- L  |8 G; U# b- S# I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- ^6 q% O% k$ P+ ~: U' ~8 q0 S. f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: p- m' P# }' a2 c4 t7 ]  v, y# f6 K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 w! c" g# F8 ]. D8 E- T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 E+ x  y9 T- Q8 y- z" ^8 K1 A% k- K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: L4 y5 u/ L( K9 e2 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ y  ]* X/ p( Y( [1 }$ ^) q* D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 t% N0 F8 L: d0 ^$ Y9 h# j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) [3 E$ w% j' t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) f! [6 \/ w$ q0 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
' `& ^% G7 H  x' g
我请你剖开它
2 n* g9 U8 i4 m
; b1 O& N; T- v; C2 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>