【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 V* A5 j! r+ Q0 V. |. ^) g) f+ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" G5 f' {) ?* c2 q; K2 H$ E4 ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. |1 W2 t3 z$ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 E' o+ D' P. C! rWith the moon kissing it every night
9 u6 f' {0 [. `; q- G- USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# t; H- s+ z$ \0 [/ w! x' S& c; Q( oYou needn’t fear anything
) s6 @  X% V+ _# R6 r6 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, t( W6 [% i# D; s. ~3 y- kEvery other word you utter is love
' `" W/ a1 @$ i; ]/ j8 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 V  j0 t( _  x: g4 P7 g: zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! }! w( I5 {9 i2 z5 I$ }" L$ j, XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; Z4 M7 U  K% ]3 o8 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, m$ R5 Q* _! F5 g* L+ B" c+ TWith such a tongue as yours,
/ r7 G$ x( @; U. s6 F' \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 m, y+ K" q3 @) y0 c7 s+ UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, F; R' t2 N$ A" L3 L0 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' L0 D# U" _" L4 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& T+ p' E  J  g" H8 b& K" u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* Y- H# I0 q9 n( D, I+ |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& J1 y7 W5 D( q7 H5 p5 T7 Y# O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 \, V' O* ~& _  |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ Z9 F9 p1 M! S: Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, j' s8 i# `! Y( \; F- r, {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% l) W% i1 ~7 x5 A  g+ P( [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 u. B4 L( a4 i* B5 Y( J. D7 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) {7 H. l5 U  ?, m8 P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! F6 ^4 }: v& ~. Y6 h$ W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  m8 V) u7 O9 W" ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ j4 K  n( W; R) n; Y, D" g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: y% v3 I- D/ G. @1 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: F% R5 P6 Q9 O: X" W) N. Q1 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, `6 e  V! X0 o1 `: f7 X7 N+ D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( V$ {  |. r, O4 ]& d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ a$ v3 G$ e9 x" a" G; l# a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 ~' b0 t; B7 `" b, c5 `8 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 l' ~  w1 p- o* @1 y( b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ P1 a6 c/ j& N; o; E$ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 s8 B- V+ g( s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 H9 m; E' l9 I0 P4 z# y8 m! S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 T3 |$ w* X8 G# G8 ^' _7 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Y+ f* K* u/ x  s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* p, q, b% M7 C! m/ s( b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( r( {5 Q: N4 l8 q% L6 t2 y: l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ ?. `; I% G4 F3 A( A* {' B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% r1 q% _7 p' r) S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>