【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: i1 R% m# `0 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! D  r7 q" l5 w5 g. GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 {  Y+ H5 v8 ?5 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 M" b3 }7 }  K- ~7 ^5 l& F- ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& l  _( Q( Q6 [; A  Q( D  V) }You needn’t fear anything
" X% w, @3 V7 N4 M  q# U$ j& ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 \; ?4 z7 `" DNothing can compare to my love
  Q5 a: B5 X* @; t4 {2 T+ u! UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# m3 V7 J7 ?; B' [$ KI want so much to see inside your heart
4 n* Q9 S- q2 y/ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" P+ a7 S+ _( B5 i; ?/ U6 d$ R6 SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# d0 s' ^7 ?, @7 k; {' m* OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) m5 G& E7 H- x: J/ o# hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ i6 |% _/ i+ }3 G" g. g4 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 l! I" C6 e! F6 O6 Z2 Y- @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" L' E) T* Q5 m; N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 F6 b7 U' ~0 w& {6 ]; r0 z! g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 t  j+ M" B2 S) k) W6 I6 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 p. q/ R- l3 S2 A  h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' N* y: p) q0 h: Q# X" e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 U4 h; J7 A, k9 t6 p, F) F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) ?: c4 a! d9 r( e* Y( U* ]( e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ A6 ~7 `8 _  x% B& M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. E+ }( [" ~1 i, ]1 w2 F8 \0 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ?; d. y) ?, ~# g1 _" Z: }3 \: A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* H" C# W$ t+ L( X/ X$ Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ J4 @, S5 Z! b; J/ h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, T, k" o$ L3 Q; b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% `# W0 \. {4 b, B4 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 R! Z% g2 d1 D1 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" p/ h7 ?# h7 Z1 w% Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# {8 P* K9 S0 E- k: I) _+ A0 l$ f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, M! P) W8 t! _4 Z3 L1 V# B. o9 Z' Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! m  K) B3 u4 o2 P! o' D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: M4 S, @4 K9 ~5 j8 ]: _* m/ Z" t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 @  P7 W  d' N9 P7 d) f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ X% \0 }4 m3 W+ Q* ]" N. M- a7 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>