【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; C. B. ~4 A" g% h. o% l歌词我附在后面。
) B+ x2 Y0 U% q. bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, G6 h$ o# P/ R5 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 Q, n1 J" m  M5 t- O7 v" C2 P8 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# @; Z: W; B( e7 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
/ f& o& H- P* r) V2 d! d$ }# A+ M/ tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* C& g9 o/ w3 o: [+ ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ z2 i; V4 v: T% }- R* m' NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" V! Y( G/ y& f- l. k  ^! m6 g& gNothing can compare to my love
( N+ G2 m5 c7 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ P, F. G/ p, e' B" I+ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ |) \" r: O3 q2 a1 M$ J$ gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) J1 }+ Z* Q* i+ ~! ~3 N! [% s6 |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 K4 W% z& }+ q5 Z+ OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 P- S1 X! {1 O2 W2 Y% PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 [9 I/ [1 _9 B' ^9 Z0 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* u$ B  F: `  M2 ^  L& B2 u0 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; j8 \! e5 L* K% `/ {1 p1 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% `# Q; y# t+ y1 A4 U6 W% g) p6 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. X7 `/ \# L  E8 ^+ I$ E4 L: d2 G' u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 m  p! T0 L9 }0 R* ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 f( Q$ ?' H4 {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! b! I0 \' r. P# ?$ t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ H& H, O" y+ q5 x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; x, h& v. \/ x1 L& z9 h) |& A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 |' M$ S' a/ p& x  d5 O; |' R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) ^8 ~/ y. s/ Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 t5 L% ~# {: E) |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 n. \* q# {: Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( s- C+ p- ~# G9 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ?" T% V9 l9 P* G$ G! J3 z: L9 S- w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 h; E# n/ B. H2 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 T3 U5 `# L+ \7 _7 q$ U. l! C+ B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( D2 v( l$ O$ b. d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, R" e! H' q- B# c$ n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ a! v# a' t4 Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; w' p7 V9 Q: w9 N* M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# z( T7 c+ T! I+ e9 }3 U. Z; E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 E" `$ I% o1 T( l; [3 v! Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 @9 {8 L& {8 P7 p3 U" ^9 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 N8 B& e% U# C: \# P$ t3 ~0 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& @" U8 s2 n* R0 N$ ~! k- B我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>