【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 G; H! f& c. I$ Q1 z$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ s5 c6 v$ o' k3 O- R: y1 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 {  T8 W6 B; I1 m9 t# C4 SI really want to know just how much you love me
& W# w8 O' h* J8 QI love you I love you with all my heart
% K# M' K) ]0 D5 Q4 g" R8 O) rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) Y. z' p6 X3 I+ W$ [' Z7 G8 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; s1 U" o4 O2 j" `* n* }With such a tongue as yours,
  X) h& }( y& j( v: fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& I; c% p4 Y. [% p4 n* cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 T2 h. U0 d& p$ lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' d" y7 t; L7 p! p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ Z" K/ w8 s' A3 @$ s$ N3 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% I, z$ @. `4 H! A4 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ y) G) S; K- O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ s) {$ w) q9 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, q% Y" ]4 D- @6 p8 }9 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 K  t1 E. |. m( K4 u; \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ I& U: J/ G4 ?2 x' I3 K* A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) E& F# M- M( n7 d$ W& h0 t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 j7 y6 E' H2 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 c$ z$ _% s, S: y( h  a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  I, E& t: x! b# }+ A* n" d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, W' {# k/ M: f1 o0 W6 a+ w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, p& B. u1 J4 y, e+ T! W# Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ b8 r. a6 r7 j% e5 ^0 O& r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% w) t/ z) l% q7 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 S; }; O! L) P/ `9 D0 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) c; u2 S9 A4 K9 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 a7 t" }( K, b4 I* p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" U+ z, O0 N4 W, U% O9 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 `' `9 w, z8 C7 L+ c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" F  F; g. d$ e( p. _+ p9 l$ J! z: N7 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 v. Q9 M7 [% @$ w" m; J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( d7 C; x% h+ E$ \& E) g4 P! w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>