【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 H  _* v- n, y7 B4 W% ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 Y: ]) W8 `4 P( lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( F* S6 M% O! [! a5 S# qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: d, d7 p' e, G9 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' S) O3 Y  t# L: r; T9 n, {Every other word you utter is love
( A8 t& T) B" R; yI really want to know just how much you love me
$ l/ b  ]6 n1 N6 H; p8 X) |& XI love you I love you with all my heart
/ r$ h  R6 J/ K2 SNothing can compare to my love
/ A# @9 q5 T7 M7 W* x* x- z' ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ @. W$ {! G# ]) T3 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% w1 Z3 \4 i5 uI want so much to see inside your heart
9 Z/ Y. y/ Z0 l  Z& Y3 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 O: n5 M% Q# {1 G$ x0 UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# b/ `* P7 M) o0 E9 a9 _" u' fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. x/ m% K, R+ _7 cWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 L+ X# P% j, @: q4 b1 p2 c5 K6 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( t) Y7 ?+ {% V, i5 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 P8 R8 I7 a% ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 e, u) ?+ @/ Z; A; {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. w! p* O- ?1 o3 ~; p9 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 B2 n+ }9 J6 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 |2 t3 j0 A; H: m$ Q& X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ T3 }1 ?& n1 A* n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& k7 J# T. C3 Q, K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" l6 p* \; I* h6 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  K* O0 z+ [; |9 H3 ?; D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ p/ i7 a) a- S( Z+ G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. g' i. i! }- m! E1 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 m9 P8 e8 ]) l, @  F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Q, j* J. Q9 f6 f& \2 u% ~$ d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ Z; m) u) M* t5 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& s! g( w9 g8 I  c4 W/ b/ o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) c" O) E# E9 q" {0 f: f- D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- \3 v- S9 R& `) k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! E$ Y7 w4 }, K4 Q" z9 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! E9 h4 @; {2 q9 X5 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 l6 O1 @4 t* m/ Z1 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" }; i1 N0 P, |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 M" E) ~% _" s) w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 J+ }" @( L* j6 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 J0 Y2 O1 R" J  n& Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 s* h6 {% b7 Z; A+ z2 x3 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% _' J: j  G' G0 p, A  p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ |. L3 ~; Z( B9 I9 ?; e" G4 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: v0 @5 h- L4 p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. Y( {+ h$ e& N4 m: L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" N. @' f% ?8 G, b% g  R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 @- F% m: s- Y# w! W  C; C: Y# H<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( O/ X* _3 `. R1 I1 K  l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>