【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) U$ z, G# Z- ?9 L; e' jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ ?" j4 \; ]! W) a9 U9 G# `/ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! V# h. o( Z0 I- b" S5 F. FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* {# k% t3 j- l( d/ p& @6 W" M) NYou needn’t fear anything
7 J+ g9 S0 M& O1 D. C1 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, L+ n$ D  Y1 BI really want to know just how much you love me
1 f0 h9 z3 A7 Z3 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
: T. S2 x0 U9 I( ]Nothing can compare to my love
( O  t- H! m! v2 T, S7 ?$ wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& r% w- |7 M5 m& Z* u' wI want so much to see inside your heart
) E% ^3 @# @3 U' G' i: {. j' g0 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ [  S9 y- O  G/ @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) M4 M" Z( L  Z' tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  d) J4 w0 b( e1 J/ p( R3 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" r6 q$ f2 @7 a& z/ mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 w) c- J6 ]. x+ H) d  C0 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 t! ^! X7 t# q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* u2 y4 P3 }: g+ }' F$ X; d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ P4 o+ j5 o% W3 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ b0 E  A- Y; b1 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# A- }4 ^- W) f! ^0 {% s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  d; Q. X  P! j# E6 m" L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- X' Y9 {$ q0 q6 {! i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( |/ I6 c% P6 X6 W- B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* |, n" v. M  t( C; v4 I# I* |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) A; b' M( o% j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% Z% Q  y3 d$ ]9 |+ g) w, U: H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 I; B( e( G& G4 a8 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 K8 I) m8 @9 B1 Z9 Q& R4 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" X' y* J% [$ E3 a' [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 I8 f) k8 E1 J8 L! y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 H( C9 j! M& p( R+ i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 i* J' r  f( P. x7 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  |& O3 _' x( L6 R5 @. h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 `) s( P% R# K* B6 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 w$ p& P( V3 F- \% E6 O$ R0 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) o5 y; j* |+ p7 Z) p3 K2 c: e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 m% ?# o, k) v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 h+ k( m$ `& d$ j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 G& A# a) a9 K, I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( D4 j" f. M7 M4 Y$ a( r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% J0 |# O8 D" t- ^; L我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# b& y) {- ?" `; `; ]7 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>