【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: U/ b! e, _: L! o+ O6 s0 @. PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) _6 G, D# F8 _- Q. Q$ CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; _2 G( T' p. F* O; T) }% K. |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& X' Q+ }! Z  w/ r# |  v& PEvery other word you utter is love
% u" W7 n" i) T( n( PI really want to know just how much you love me
" u) r, V2 {2 Z! DI love you I love you with all my heart
& S: d7 N$ I3 }% fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# \. ^8 y8 L4 F7 ?; j  eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 K4 m$ _, b( K" r$ P: P3 m* w! |- WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# t6 C! V3 c# G" `With such a tongue as yours,
- u1 I( M( B! D0 Y3 @4 A/ uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ O5 ~" y8 |% H4 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 W3 g( R8 k. Z& u% Z, w) k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ @$ p' {* p* m- b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; a2 B1 Y0 z) K" e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. s. n* F) K2 [  M0 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 e: Q1 }5 x* i) O7 R1 u( O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 U) J$ l% ], ~1 |! e* L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& Q1 @" m9 {( j- M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! V$ A. ]7 J* F+ v7 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% v4 K  P, S5 ?# ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 ~, ], J1 \! {% ?9 U5 ]# |/ P  |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 G; [9 ?7 i" Z  ?( j1 N4 P0 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- T& y& A0 ^# r8 g2 D) v' {9 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( k0 T5 `/ K6 B% X( f# u4 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- u5 p5 a/ n, n" a! G0 K' q' s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 i! s$ q2 R4 `- D4 o  f. X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- V  ]* o2 B- S- G& p& t+ }; E" S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" W& o' [  r, a! k8 v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ i, b/ i3 L- N# ~# F9 T/ j$ o- Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ @' ]- l4 V' Z. W/ i/ f8 b9 z2 M* O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( _# Q& z$ Q$ N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' g0 f9 o! U# ^- h; g: @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- U2 H8 g5 Q7 t( c1 Y6 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' Y. a0 l; S+ R3 [; {: r7 B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ E+ R: q7 O, N; V' B7 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! \5 @6 Y; m; P& @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 d. T6 {8 p! C1 D1 i: n$ t, J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; E, d* c/ q' A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) ?* T' G( T+ P, e1 m& k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( a" e2 y2 t: L9 F# j) J9 g3 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>