【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* Y$ B, [. v' h$ ~) cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  Z( R. C; N* k: E" jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 n6 H/ e* F/ ?5 h! }- BEvery other word you utter is love
8 f9 G% R7 }6 R' T* ^I really want to know just how much you love me
# v2 Q4 Y/ N4 Q. i. uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" P* a2 v: f& QI want so much to see inside your heart
# Q) ?1 `6 F5 ~0 R: A3 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; x( v! |+ W& a" xI’m still filled with fear
1 g1 D: u# D* f1 \; zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ?4 \3 ^; j' G. xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ b$ Z2 `) ]: S* q* kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 ~, X" S2 Z% s: }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- l6 D5 J- U/ B% J3 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ I  _- g  b; ?9 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 L7 Q1 \5 d: l0 M8 P/ c& }' z0 u, C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 }1 k+ K* v3 K5 f0 j% ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 l2 g8 I% v8 z* U( F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) Q' I1 l4 ^3 V1 m% |+ t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ ^# o3 i' Z' D# h* R" r. p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. L) i# G8 j: H+ B! `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ ~' B4 `$ S  h$ X; I3 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 ^" }& x0 W* R1 y8 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ Q6 P. i7 l. i0 ^( {<P>你无需担心</P>
# k' Y* L' `0 C& N. J+ c+ V9 g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* P# |: l7 @& H5 H( i5 O5 n+ a  D7 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 T1 _: S2 l+ l* ]& T- S6 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  u" D9 X; D& o9 L4 [. Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ G! A& h$ }. m7 [- M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ R  S% S  g6 R# D" R4 m6 F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 s2 D; Z; h# U9 m' Z7 N& d6 q; S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 W6 l+ ]) y4 P+ [+ Z# {4 w  p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 L8 D, r( Y$ |/ J) G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' l0 h8 j. b3 _  s% Z& r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 e0 m& j( }+ J) U; B7 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 {7 V  X5 K. z& U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& p1 \7 n) D8 H: Z; g, X, f' S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" \, P  q: ^+ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ \2 b8 o: V2 ]& B7 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' H0 V0 V# g+ `( ?+ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 X% w, F" @6 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# \: ]0 O2 g: ?( I; a* j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>