【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, v3 Y+ a8 j. C  I! @1 D歌词我附在后面。
% z5 p  G+ c# v9 `  X# H1 f+ X8 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ Q' B) f/ E5 e" I' \. VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ x& U0 A$ b- g; U; @0 _  ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ A0 s0 x& O$ {$ n/ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( ^- C' N5 A) D$ p6 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
% J5 d! r; t( z( [' U/ JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" ~# _5 q5 G) a1 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 t7 `  ~) y6 e3 d5 V* @. w  K8 @You needn’t fear anything
5 s0 |. I2 z' n' q+ i; i( }5 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# b5 O5 y( ?5 ^- X! II love you I love you with all my heart
( f4 l1 B3 ?8 Y3 D# tNothing can compare to my love
' ^4 y) d7 R% \8 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 {2 H; b$ R. I2 }. DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ ~. ~0 K6 `! JI’m still filled with fear
  M' O- d5 E3 ^% V" ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ z9 J% ]) q/ `1 e& OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. ]: N6 I0 v, |; }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ F7 t. H4 ~0 q' V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 `) @# b* E; |/ x9 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( A% \" F; |' s' P: ^* x+ ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 [5 F) m' r' `! ?/ @% h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ T# k5 j, n7 G- ]" V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Y# K5 |" p* t8 z3 T7 c5 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# c% p+ f3 i: X! t6 ~' @, ]7 v* i( ?; v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: V. t: ^, }& Q# h+ c0 I; o9 z5 j7 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( R8 p  q0 c2 v1 X; z7 j9 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 g) h3 h) T0 {' I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 q) ^- C4 q5 }$ {' n( C  P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ f7 H  T# K! ]0 C+ n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 y+ E+ I  L' \& c* }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ W# k! C* G0 ]) h0 i5 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ w, V, t& X. x' {# h' h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 E* j4 d/ {: O4 n/ c& Q. n# Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ [3 _8 |: s+ B* R. w- y0 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 m, X* O3 W3 D$ x$ w# S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 Z% V: ~" s; }  A6 ]  L# g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ }4 m  l  r# P+ o* P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( }! `9 ^. D# d# z2 f- y5 |, F  t- d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) ^. p4 Z& ]0 C) b- y( Z3 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, B  R4 B4 Z4 s! y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# c& q- u5 L, @& b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ^! U8 |6 e( W9 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ Z' _" `. H( C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, R: t) p5 Y# c8 z( I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 [* Z6 `1 k6 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 ^$ T3 @/ R2 `) r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' `' I/ ~, K+ P- j# e  S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" c8 ]6 d- E( _0 v& \# v) l( e( `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 y- W. n; K( c' O/ B+ i; ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ @, }# L  O0 b$ F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. E2 T% W8 j2 s9 V6 l0 }+ u% x- {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' p( G2 }+ l" l8 N) j4 [/ A! _  O4 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>