【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 o! O3 f" O5 r  V8 G歌词我附在后面。
1 V) L+ d) D& X: ~, C+ z" a3 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 T% D7 T: n# p* ?" zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( e! ^1 ]4 `4 n1 G' L, o2 F/ sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 u$ e/ C4 @4 yThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ o, W1 E) q. B: d; k6 k& zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, H  y) M4 X8 H/ c, OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  `2 r- P5 z! b- t4 AYou needn’t fear anything
) H9 {; o' b% K( l$ B: MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 }# z( X) ]) H+ {I really want to know just how much you love me
9 u* X4 Z3 _2 x! F% D  M' ]; SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 ^; g8 L+ f1 Z7 N# H( F4 yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: @; I0 ~( s) T: q# K/ P- FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 m2 \2 M- [  j# q5 I! eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 O  Q& h+ D( R# I6 u1 J& l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 Q& U( i9 B. C+ a8 c* y* m7 v! _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! M# G0 ^+ B0 {& R$ Y. s% A1 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! h5 V4 S1 z: _' w. j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! P) D& E/ m% e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 h% j9 i5 T# M2 z* v+ P% S# Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ y0 l4 o5 m- b+ A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( \) d  U) d' S2 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: P+ j$ N7 t; n3 K0 K/ G6 T& r/ D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) b* m" z) q) `7 _# `2 g9 N<P>你无需担心</P>
1 x, v' [  R1 d2 n5 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% k" Q! ~% }/ ~3 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# P( l0 Y/ S- _' q2 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- I# T9 A6 R: P2 W3 r0 D8 K$ X& n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, I' u& H4 z/ c* V0 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 G2 L7 y4 C( }' M/ b. i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  i  O% [6 A+ @. O, k1 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. T- ]# Y$ A8 s6 z. k% t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# z3 R9 o$ S; B1 C6 d- [( [' v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: G( r( q: o8 p7 E: g. R) Z4 J6 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- T  b( L$ D+ e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% Y0 X2 r5 B7 }' V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 |) }  o0 x$ e3 O, t  V6 z6 R我请你剖开它
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  ?* l& t- W7 d; Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>