【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# w& f' x; J+ ^* D9 s( ]$ U( Z# ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ X5 a6 u! @5 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. i8 N5 K1 @; ^& M! n0 O  kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) k1 e7 A, G; C& |6 j5 B' y0 ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Z7 x5 Q  I% Q+ a# ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) l  I1 J( Q. v) {$ YI love you I love you with all my heart
! g/ p# a" r! o! r+ v3 X! Y6 B7 c7 kNothing can compare to my love
+ r' s7 |7 `! F8 g- zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 q3 D1 e" o# m% {7 B0 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 C9 c8 v5 n6 T/ F* |. ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ?' q. }7 w. E( C/ ?0 sI’m still filled with fear
, N4 B+ n* l5 q( D7 m6 ?: eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! E2 U. A' w/ m$ i1 @5 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! x0 \- U" r( l) hWith such a tongue as yours,
2 F( |- y" V+ ^# U! CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 o5 j; T* c8 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: `/ d! V5 \" s. N& W' N4 a- N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 {3 p% R7 y1 H% P6 m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  j. Y* i: Z& q0 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 p) ^, [# l0 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, l" W5 D3 m+ }- v* v* J* }5 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 @0 X! V" `/ K- b# [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 M+ A* U) g& S* g$ K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 d4 }, l' E8 J9 e" D% S5 h( h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 o* g6 U) j$ s# t! v+ \4 b) D$ p<P>你无需担心</P>
: Y) V6 s4 `/ y! D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& p' ^/ x2 b- E& D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: @. E- Z0 R' r; y9 \+ N  {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: j7 Z9 b5 V4 c8 |9 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 L, f6 M+ Z: f+ m* u9 B1 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! _" C$ W4 n3 p' I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  f5 N' a0 Q$ j0 J( K; n) e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. W/ C+ M2 H+ H  ~1 c/ _/ s2 u6 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. V/ n2 a: ~- [0 N( O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 k* {- i. \- C+ V( x( Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, d) z3 A! P, l- j) }; d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
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<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ _0 X- I% [$ R* n! {1 i% k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 f, E! w$ Y( V. j- |0 \6 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- F, S% }9 N' Q6 R. h1 H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 D' f" _) E, Z$ o( g8 F) p6 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 H3 B6 C0 L, Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 U" B7 _7 }2 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>