【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  @4 n% _. k5 _( L8 p% G  ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& M! O% A. i: \; X, Z" JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. ]$ \2 I9 g4 O) ?0 _2 n+ b% x9 ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ `3 b) B- I% [( rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ n; u- w( n5 h/ ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) R- h5 E1 Y4 J/ Q; {5 O' CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 |9 ]% @( |6 @) K0 f, _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- \+ @! {8 l5 x3 d, c- _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Y4 p3 q8 ?8 ^+ H; ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 b+ \; F% g; ]6 E( I# C" `% ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! p9 l+ G4 ~% Y( v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; ?, n$ [% M8 f; ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 K) J/ z/ ?  U1 U7 j  B0 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. X* }/ }( z( K8 o* y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; L4 U0 t! k7 a& ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& X- P0 q8 B; d) U- e! b9 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ f. D: B3 z1 z/ y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: T6 v8 e0 F3 k" a: H" E- F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 k  G8 T, n3 w' e0 L! A3 H$ A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 V$ X. e5 Z" Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 B" y+ ^9 ^5 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 M: G3 L) K; j  A7 j  }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; h0 h' F# O" }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ n1 J3 T% W+ W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! B2 s  `* x$ T+ P5 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" h/ e3 J. l% V1 e- t2 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ h" O4 I( V& L4 b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ p" C' Z2 P6 _7 D8 W5 O) V. [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 F& ~, u; S9 f3 a/ R6 U: z% Y9 j9 `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( B9 i! V* _1 i2 m/ ~  A$ Z6 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& A5 n3 \1 K, n. K9 d- V5 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ f, h( B8 r+ F" V! {6 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" _' t. W* d! x$ Z1 ~. F) Q; H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# c! q) Q& n( m* S& O% W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 M" F+ p6 q1 z6 p. a* Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' D* y; n) j" L* q' W# V/ H) n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 e: N& M5 H5 P8 H' `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 h- t% o, A9 _  [4 ?; w& U$ j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 g$ A- o  J0 M, S# {4 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 _( \# M/ i0 q& b: K/ ?" C我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& N& R1 Q9 u; E4 h  V6 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>