【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ q5 j+ e  h. ]+ o' N2 g1 q歌词我附在后面。
7 V( a; x# }3 W( G5 O$ u* h. |7 f* e8 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 I9 a6 S7 K! q# Q0 }8 a& M" ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ W  Z" |9 H5 v& N) ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 V; p( G: u, `7 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 z0 i0 [8 o+ _8 S$ ?0 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
" ]( U1 \/ U6 ^  QWith the moon kissing it every night
4 A+ o6 z2 J1 |( J4 ]+ o2 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 S9 D- E. z( j0 R0 R& t- w4 q) _. {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 ^9 p7 G' B! KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# W3 D% j( W2 j5 a4 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& `. ~! x% m6 L$ `' B) d+ pI want so much to see inside your heart
" J, ^$ G+ T. L% {4 W/ NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& M' ]/ {; D+ X8 |# R& PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% G  q; u4 q4 |/ T9 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 }5 j# A  a* dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 Z0 p3 L. r! O# J1 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' M- h0 _, @1 A6 f; H0 s7 b; r7 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 [. I2 i4 A; Z, b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& u7 k( Y$ I5 C+ W0 t  y: A) R7 c) A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 a5 e3 C% v5 @* Q6 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ v" E7 p& M8 z- l) Z$ Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  V+ j) N) M3 i) y$ a" A/ \1 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# z" S. J( ~% T7 o3 l+ G  C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 I+ \. j9 Q. R' h8 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 x: Q& N  H, V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 ~5 h, q  B, u/ z3 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  F7 h  c. n# w- V+ q; w2 B  ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 z4 R4 u& b; ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ Y% l& X6 l$ `1 E$ v5 \6 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 Q1 j& O, O% R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 O4 d  _( |7 o# m( ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 P: K) |1 W! _- `6 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ k9 s; {2 G$ H) ~+ i& P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" `- k/ [7 e( G+ y9 D- o* f9 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ c' h& M$ i. Z' h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# q) V7 a# |7 f4 G: J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 Q0 v4 f- \/ p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 b! c6 W, r- O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 x# B# p7 }& s0 ?  \+ B- N: q$ F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ I+ u" n4 H/ @* o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ [3 P% n5 I+ e1 l( z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* v. m( X) [' o8 l+ E! O4 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 \: d" \3 L3 x; p' C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 \* x; J  [* Z' M. h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 M6 D* T6 v) n! o( t. R9 P% J<P>I regret not dying</P>
* |- E: \4 N/ r  U4 o6 }4 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ~" Y9 M, j! p% c  A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* b  c# o8 Q- `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ E* c. u- q! N; v* J0 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* U- q) q3 U- V8 U, ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 g& f4 P! r5 v: d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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2 t7 V) i, F# \0 f& I1 _4 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& a  T+ {! v% C' e. o1 X% S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>