【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 Z9 S+ u$ K' J4 ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: F; |9 g9 v( W  A1 n: ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. k8 G1 E' B2 J" {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ L7 r$ E( r8 Y% mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 S  s1 A) B5 a$ i# t$ k! aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 X2 A+ |9 G7 e# h: g( H% H- gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ^5 g5 ^: `0 g. u( xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' x7 G; H7 Y& J5 q3 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 }6 w6 g1 g, l% @  WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& X* r* T7 x. B% i3 u- }# c/ Z: JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 p# D6 s: W  b4 ^$ f) g7 xI regret not dying
/ z, h0 E4 s8 e! {1 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) {' c, ~. z. f; SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 j- w& f/ ~% R1 E9 Q: |% VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# t# k# Y5 [' ?" ~& |* \- l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 Y  p1 I) D* a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ O) f% T) n3 @8 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  Y7 a) [$ J# X+ o5 Z0 F' J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; R7 P! P4 n! P  i+ h6 t! o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 _/ G3 e+ M& k! i  B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 F) \1 L( p1 _6 G: f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 }- j/ G4 R/ ]& H7 ]  C3 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Z/ v+ q* s8 J8 c7 E/ v. P( Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% _0 S6 ~" e2 Y8 F9 K1 z7 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* ~/ W3 l4 J  m1 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 ^7 C% Y" p: j- X/ R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; t0 h* Z6 q. P$ Y) ]) @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, q" W; R; O2 P4 t  J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# R7 u. ^! N5 m8 y3 P0 y6 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( t. l9 a! k' l2 l8 ?" u0 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 c1 u$ y& f% p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 R, v) ?5 u) U& g7 q# {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% Y; V3 g' q! d' K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 O3 q9 o. I9 p2 ^9 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. f  l' o7 ~: f) z1 K0 i2 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ M$ d1 U6 J) t- {+ X) H) S2 Q3 Q# D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# q  m2 }2 T2 w3 O6 w) d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 q  H! ^' k. \( R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 M2 [8 N! o8 O6 j9 {3 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>