【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) n0 ]' m" e$ E2 e, d4 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 j8 t0 c3 ~( A- R( w2 I; RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 @9 i. Q$ V  |( `. {! TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 e  W7 `1 z+ H' l& L+ O; NThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 C; M& m$ d/ O; L* b# bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 z2 m! U2 E. C" T& B5 qYou needn’t fear anything
& @7 ?1 r6 H3 @0 G) d$ zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" ?* B. B. n9 c$ R  g. }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# i) k* R* J' M2 J+ n9 _: [/ O" EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ r& U' m3 X2 |$ i( TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- M8 X( N/ i7 N6 S" ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  B5 q  a0 ^- e" \3 e7 UWith such a tongue as yours,
) M* \; o( M8 O' J: TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! a' _! l5 I) ]2 }3 QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. ^. x' I3 Q& H4 s7 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  V, K# O) C- f5 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ z- X/ D2 Z% {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ P' F  c1 |" o$ a( k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 h: j. ~2 x4 g+ Q" b( B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# p) u7 `# ^+ z' m3 L; `# n, I* Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 X* E6 I5 F+ f& N. j: U! I& ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* V6 y4 H. s2 k( l- e2 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% e4 u8 e+ Q7 H2 p; Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 Y, V  Q* V- b$ e3 [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ P/ K4 u; P9 k+ S, \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  c2 K6 t, e- V3 v' Z) A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 U6 n1 O2 O6 g2 y% q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- h* C+ t# E/ h- V6 Z. x/ Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 }* w6 @) l& ?$ ]  ~! c1 I' K/ z( G" T/ {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 v+ n; U9 u2 E, I8 K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; w( K/ a7 M% g; M  d0 g: D" n: C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- d; ]# D& n2 l6 _! Y1 V& _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) `# M# r# |3 p/ [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& N. u- w5 A& o; m* }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ b$ V0 k: L1 J; o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ Q! C3 U2 ?5 i  w$ p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; P* g- A" _+ d! R) J) E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; h5 p8 R3 d1 F. w0 S" n+ q  I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% h5 M' g  E! Y5 D1 B2 k6 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  n: W6 a; m. v/ v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 ]8 [+ G0 Q8 V6 b) [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. |( {$ f& d0 k% Q$ {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! m  n/ A9 d, `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% X- a# \) s6 w- D. J0 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# e6 K$ g; o% W8 m, n( F- y: |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 I- T: D, }- Z* V3 S& E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* o7 w, U2 J3 @+ |; B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>