【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: W' }/ o2 ?4 K5 Z+ C# W6 V歌词我附在后面。
; K  b; S$ s" f  w! w% WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 D( p- Q8 ?  J& Q* Z( M& n# v. tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 B; }2 Y2 Z& Z9 x5 Z$ hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ G# [+ x$ @# rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( U. w8 I/ g7 K0 w( u1 L& {5 ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% h' ], c; @2 q/ W9 L( |) z: cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; K) Y9 Y1 U7 T5 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 I: r( U8 Z* |) o1 O% TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% e; g3 [! g2 X- L# RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% ~, b! T4 G) D$ \) v6 m, {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& _% @. V' A& C$ _5 ]5 }  J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* k. i0 n) t( X* O& C6 L! z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 S( C" W( B) A" O* H7 a5 ]# P, N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 G, Q* Q( W# D) g2 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. f9 L7 v5 d4 r/ w: z. G2 T6 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  N- E% N% p7 p; q: t" h, x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' w: X; K3 r! J# E! I, [3 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 d3 U& x( s6 w' p7 H* C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- N" ^- W: I) V) ~% D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) F4 m4 t5 p- ?0 J1 z0 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& c- m! @: }0 g% h2 D5 s<P>你无需担心</P>
5 x" k8 b1 J" p: ]+ J9 E. }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# X  C7 }9 ~4 r. k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' B2 z( N- U2 o) m! {0 S  w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; U+ u' S0 o+ e9 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 m% d9 ~( L+ p4 ^/ [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' P2 U- N. P2 @& A) k2 p8 q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' o7 g9 |2 l" j! S5 H4 B& Z: d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& n9 f* K2 ]' [' b7 A3 \1 v( I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- T3 g; t* R( q+ [8 I: _/ B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# A' l! s. D9 @/ Z9 O- e% [! ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* w+ U3 X1 \7 r; X7 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  i! T3 o8 g+ ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% t( y6 z' y" b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 L; X. f% ^/ s. ~1 I% O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' N1 r& j* Z& {# `% E+ d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" I- a; ~& }! ~! u6 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ Y" r9 _8 c6 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 P1 I! G, T% |; [! ?" G! `* c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& d' M' U$ u* {! o# S) F0 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) k( Y& {( o+ Z3 d& v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>