【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' ?9 J) G: l4 B; ^2 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 N, C+ d- _; Q  J4 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. [, R  Q! v/ oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  I3 D9 H/ l7 N1 o& XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 g+ u2 |3 E7 m5 ]( v; \* d" Z& i+ ^I really want to know just how much you love me
7 [( W" s. P' J# a  W" SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% Z/ l) f% E1 O5 k0 x( i9 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# R, c+ ?; ]+ U. b8 D( _8 C( JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- K* K. N& c" @' D& D; h1 ~7 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, K. Y5 n2 [3 Y9 l  F: K* ^With such a tongue as yours,
, k! s0 d2 U- z+ jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 S8 t! C* _- pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 J5 o" \3 A5 I; J1 B; b8 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, i9 a8 v9 e! w% a" ]% a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ E9 W" M3 y' X% U& x; X0 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 N& a% ^3 Q# Z- H, Y6 M" ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; t& c" o8 q' e) d% t+ K# b  D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ L6 [, E6 _0 p2 W5 O0 l1 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- z, @+ q: R+ m7 t* M' h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- h, @% {2 e( L4 [& w7 t! h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& S) d, T  @: }4 B; }) l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 s5 Q  m# f# h1 F$ y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) i3 z0 T5 I7 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 M; B9 `5 Y" [1 ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( x" x5 t( d9 A4 c1 X- H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  y, j- ]4 Y& c0 u! l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 A8 h3 v* u8 T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 J9 ]6 j& _; l2 g) }) _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 e. G6 w9 r1 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 l5 i% L. {& I' {3 _0 O3 V0 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( x1 M' m) d: }# e8 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( v6 v1 H1 T3 ]4 V0 H* O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 e, _" M0 Z& R/ G; |  t5 Y! O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 ]/ t3 W5 }* ?3 d( }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: r3 s3 l5 t; f5 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  J" I# Z9 ?  u; i& r# ]4 f# I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 x& _5 c* S6 G: o! O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ k$ h- V3 Y8 `0 s5 z) B4 s& A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) [8 T* G& \. `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. {2 f& G! f; ~/ t8 i3 c  j9 M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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