【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, f$ {4 x5 l2 _; IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* C$ C8 A+ |) h2 v6 bWith the moon kissing it every night
; a" I) L) q  ?- N, n* _/ G. ^. t, ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' N# n! O! a7 q) q* _# wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" [3 q. H0 [% C# IEvery other word you utter is love
8 Z# A& X4 _1 n* E! UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 M$ V- @/ Y1 Q; U' B" R  M" D' DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 _2 ^- x, I" U3 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 `' `" W  y4 |4 P! w4 ~; d) _/ t' @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ h( M5 C6 ~2 V, n# z, h' Z% RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; L* B2 M/ O8 E6 J! lWith such a tongue as yours,
; N* G/ @3 r' @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 L4 [7 G% @8 H" I; M) y- URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 X1 V" }) U$ g! o! v, U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 \. Y) O& q6 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; e. F- }' B3 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ F7 ^6 h9 c, ^7 E2 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 i! m' x6 ?% b8 t6 A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ Q# f. m( K4 [& T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" A$ C6 O4 b3 ~4 Z. m8 j2 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 f% ^6 U! B6 K& _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- v& _# l0 B% P9 l9 y" \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 |& b3 F4 A$ x, n2 N1 }; k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 I- o4 M3 \: y0 B' Y* F$ j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. i# z! Q) Z9 W4 w' P- O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# e% D: u* C( D$ _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" l1 ~5 r2 Z( X% `1 Y- w, v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 u) r! J  b, x+ X' t# Q4 v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; d# }( o8 n& b+ d& K" n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ e) e6 T6 B! Y5 ?- h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ V8 a$ @8 N2 ]4 ]8 f* U' ~7 N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ K5 u7 S5 D2 w( ^5 p1 f) j& B8 B5 u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. o  q  W6 E5 i2 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
- n: P7 g9 q- s& U2 f, w1 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* e* j, H4 n7 m; v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" B; R+ U) \  o* T6 j; M/ W; O. R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ D% c  K5 d# \* N0 m, I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) s+ t0 t6 @. `+ m( r7 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* [8 O5 \  E9 U/ U. w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

' W) W4 |. M7 F5 c& A4 g& M$ _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 x- L0 z& h8 D* S; [, t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>