【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 H5 }2 G) A# q! C& x& y7 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 K9 G* m9 I, s6 ?" yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 e+ u5 S& q$ r2 M# e' ]7 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 y$ R$ a6 q) V. fEvery other word you utter is love
9 ]9 I9 n. X, w- q) zI really want to know just how much you love me
" x! V1 b3 e* R9 d# `3 E  cI love you I love you with all my heart
  n  j; S. L1 {/ I" b3 fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# l8 w7 \' G. W$ ?' XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& H6 M9 _" ^& Z0 N+ p' M6 fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' x2 }  m5 ^4 N( {& G/ }2 x$ FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' ?9 X2 S& O. f; g) R+ UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: f, h2 l5 ^; I0 l6 `$ ]" b: FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 O2 l) T7 f" W2 I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 L, z) b# [1 K3 K* _4 R) |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* y  l! w% i5 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% F$ p/ g1 t* x  {8 a! s  w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 t1 ]  }5 N! ?+ l) ]: j: z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  d( U9 E4 X/ w: h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ T) q. B1 y# a7 D! w0 e! G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) [& A( I5 a& d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, @) e, k/ b7 i# B! d9 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 M: N1 S: w& V2 {* L5 W  W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# a4 y& W+ D- g& f% e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! u+ y5 r6 N# u* |9 [# n0 P% x0 w: u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 a' ]0 `0 b# n, ]# H7 q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 p3 X& z, w4 V: q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 s! \4 t' |" R$ S- u1 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( l2 f& C% p# Q0 v/ q6 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 [' Q6 ~3 i+ {. ?8 @( y5 m+ t1 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: Y# D3 b5 n8 E0 l7 L5 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ K! {* c! M( I0 c/ Y! R% h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ U  Q9 V! k- a1 e' H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- Y$ ]3 M. }+ K! g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" m$ ~0 t: r& z; P) `1 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* Z! X/ Q4 z# m: I4 ^) w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 u( x5 w: V9 ~6 @4 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>