【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ L9 W) @' G0 |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; y! O: `9 s4 \, oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 \3 i7 X" k1 h  B. tThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ T0 ?& `  m( Y7 q  W! }" aWith the moon kissing it every night
/ ~6 f9 z/ I; F  Z* WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 `, l, Q9 }# x% G  t1 O, o) l& s  a/ jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" F# S/ m2 u3 V  REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 D* B8 I& C4 M4 |# W8 I, gI regret not dying
" X- ?9 {9 P1 n* `3 E3 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ z7 W6 O9 X8 u6 }, t/ NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( o, O9 f' i$ ?3 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" g' p) W, W3 G7 ]3 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  q6 m) ~" {6 f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 K8 K6 s2 {' V9 C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) S5 B! [% B% n' e7 {9 y3 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 t; d9 v; x  N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 J$ G  @4 q" t8 d# i& H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) l% f0 \4 |1 _  R<P>你无需担心</P>
+ i" L3 \% z' l) d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. p  L2 |) ~; C$ d+ J( i( w; f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 n0 {5 Y$ {- W9 Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 A: z( F: L6 b- N1 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 |1 M0 ]- C) Z1 f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; H( H9 K( ]5 E" v& S7 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! O1 d; B% ~5 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 D: N) l0 H! s! p* ^! ^4 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 B9 ^- O/ T0 z3 W6 n; ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! G5 E- Y$ @/ X1 Q' U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ i: t( `+ _; i* T( j1 t) Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ e# V5 E8 H5 y# D9 K$ W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 p  L$ v7 H8 _( U4 h; t- N$ @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ ~9 m' A4 h  G; H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  H; r- ]; |5 F) q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# z3 Y  H) L- W' f! I* W( T9 m1 d我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 o" Q2 n$ c' k. S6 z6 s9 L$ D2 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>