【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; |; X( [( U) E- Q" m) cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& `% z- {3 L7 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 M6 W9 q6 q6 j) ]The sky is happy down to its soul
4 o! F1 ]$ z, i- M( C6 w1 XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 N9 b. C8 z& C5 L. |4 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* Q4 z0 m; ~2 w  TI love you I love you with all my heart
8 V" O# S5 r0 P& q' U* E1 _* iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% I2 P! F  ~2 X6 K- AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ j) C- R2 n/ x- W' Y' LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( z3 L' u, f7 {  b# wWith such a tongue as yours,
; ~4 W0 _% u: W/ KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- L# N. m& I# m6 C1 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# C+ ~( z! l( R( a& ^" `& H# vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 K4 P+ [: j$ R5 H3 ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ N5 ~0 b0 W( f  V& ?; U1 R& V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 T' I* S' Y3 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" F5 c1 {3 j* y  Z2 ]) P; K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& O4 r$ y/ W/ l3 L+ d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 j( |1 h2 @3 M* j3 ]( D, v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* n9 O5 ?( z) T1 H, A5 ]6 a+ i1 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  {* J( B* ~: F% P1 ~6 {/ Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  B. x  D" U8 k- l  ?* o! }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) o, P5 C# P! T1 ?7 B; E% y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ m. j- w" N* w7 C  Y8 x, e) ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. g- ~% h: e6 L& \& F5 N0 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* v; U2 @1 Z: k, I- O6 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, i, Q, w5 s. g  A- O8 C2 b4 ?! `+ H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 b: m# |' ~& x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) H# m# Z1 W6 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( e' r9 J  M3 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ @) |* S/ U9 ^8 v5 j8 |5 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& r0 g; {' T3 C3 D; G$ r' v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# \* k$ |5 S9 Q9 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! M5 Y7 }; N8 k5 a! i2 _+ L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 z+ l# R; I! A$ B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 B& |+ A- q' s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" Z8 r3 V" `" f, ^5 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 D2 H" ]$ z0 M0 {9 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 l7 _6 [) y& m) T; r3 [/ G4 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" p, u9 F% N. A( X& X" \( C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" M# @5 H6 ~$ A4 w- l7 A. B" ?' G$ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 U9 k: E* z  X+ J7 c2 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 n! p3 u4 k3 p4 _. F9 J$ n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% C6 a8 Q( A) m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, v$ ~3 h, t9 k" ]* G( J/ |9 T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>