【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* i% O# `* e& e0 u6 d) b3 i歌词我附在后面。
0 s4 P0 w) q4 a3 s; mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 s3 V; v9 H' P! e( B8 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 }" h- Y  d( P8 k4 y- A2 }6 B2 C9 r" jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( t  K0 Z, x% \! PWith the moon kissing it every night
/ x! Q8 d& o0 J. n/ w2 USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- t2 w: U5 V7 T+ d" bYou needn’t fear anything
" Q- C3 E; Y* D: N) d; DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ }& X! B/ X, `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. x/ D+ R# c1 o; e/ SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 |5 j) q* A0 I$ L7 @' f- }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 ~+ y# S* c) q" Q& t+ ~0 ~# a: D$ B/ x+ jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  c3 z- c0 V4 l4 m1 ^! Y) dWith such a tongue as yours,
  y7 P# @$ ?6 y7 C) FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% X' L8 y3 ]8 }: V/ b$ [; u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 _& \7 L  Q+ m& i3 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, w* A  g# O* Q; e: g+ v  M8 `7 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( m2 T9 Q+ f% T1 j% K4 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 a( D# e5 d7 z; z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 L5 Y# e3 [6 b, d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 ?; [/ W, h# o5 C8 ^# l& s6 R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 P/ b" V! W* Z5 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ?1 V1 C7 Z9 Q/ K& z" _3 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) F5 K/ e% m7 s' O( s6 y$ x9 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- t, Y: b5 M' j6 b1 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 q  P  O/ q0 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. W+ v9 m# X# Z: }( l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- O$ I" t' b9 x! g. ~0 M. A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, G! O7 h( x4 p  K9 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: l, B. M. s" t! T$ b# ~& P- p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 O) n. p2 l6 I. \1 t4 W4 Q9 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! O4 B& V9 N( x/ P8 s8 p9 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 i' \" r' A) m8 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 [9 w3 I; A$ Q9 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ]! @& A0 t. O) E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ Q3 S1 ^( i# n5 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* i: R& o9 y! M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. v# C: O9 O. c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ J' C" j4 w+ m1 c3 p" R# P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 `4 c$ Y  I5 c6 Q: D: X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: v$ j: d+ U  @9 e8 ~- Z9 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ [' M3 I! I& V# t+ }' I& A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>