【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% A+ n% M( r: W. q9 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: p8 {! k; i2 b" a8 Z( vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 @; P8 ^# C1 K5 ?4 nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 a# Z0 D: f2 B) v" u! GI really want to know just how much you love me
, N4 c! |, }& ^0 V2 T% |& MI love you I love you with all my heart
3 k4 y$ W5 a2 [- R) T' e% nNothing can compare to my love
9 Z7 R7 J4 V' ^& p% l  k9 O" w& GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  `! a6 A$ [: ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  c" v; o5 \& Z6 G2 l4 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ k! f. t& ?4 \2 v: xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 d9 U: J$ O% [, w# l3 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 R: H! ^- j& [& Z1 }2 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* j; Q( Y! V- e+ r1 t; E) D7 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ ?: x& K5 d5 y) z/ p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 {( N6 X8 {1 E6 S7 A' p5 `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 b, R9 P1 S+ z! w9 a+ y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. n+ g) i( r6 Y, E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" S" |: t" E0 @! W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 F% d4 h& v9 V  \2 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 q- }5 J# g* x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- Y5 |# l( d  g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; I# G( P) I0 q# f( N" K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ j6 K3 X3 B% ^9 p# t& k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, w. a: @/ a% z* j4 M; m( ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 E7 k- Q1 b0 S" D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: W# S$ N/ u2 Z- k4 D, B  L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 T* x; y! T* I0 [& M- _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! H3 ~, {4 S' I: M' E6 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# e1 u( M6 g; S  R' J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' R. [0 y3 Q$ u8 B- V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& a6 [" d- P4 H0 j# a$ c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! M; I) G. N5 R* X, i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 }& q# O' t# {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 X0 A$ v6 E" R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Z0 j! Q% u& u: K5 g9 a! `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 u- f' o' d4 U8 F: J: _4 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 x' p' P! s: V+ S( L3 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>