【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ B5 R& T$ K, J2 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 i8 Q+ P6 i  U  R+ h4 C6 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 r7 ~9 V4 b# @" r+ e: DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. i+ g" c4 ~! q4 ?3 H# R, f0 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  T) U5 N2 F: c/ S: a7 K7 J' [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 R+ v  \5 w& H+ f- E3 @- A, ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( p9 S" i: |, A* ?3 XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 R6 `6 o0 ]) ^8 NI’m still filled with fear
; P5 }: B+ l& W* [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 ~  ~% @+ l! ?4 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 x7 {& S$ v9 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 s0 c8 O: Z4 N* c# d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: o4 g# p9 L! C6 ^) B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 a1 X; i. _* [% {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 Q3 T: j; I6 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 p  n# p0 u+ o& ~% H2 D: o) V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& [$ D, r2 o8 B1 _/ k! k. u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 i5 g7 A9 Z- V9 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  p: L) e" t5 M2 \& m  m9 [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 i. Y) J- w% J# d7 _; J2 z& `9 R7 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
) r' D' M8 J- y" W0 g# `" h% ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 B& f" k* ~0 B% k. j, q  C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 n" q; ]9 g, M$ b: k! e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* \# Y) Y7 G% m7 {! T# V- |5 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, S) q/ T- f3 r4 ~2 A1 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 U; v5 G# G  O3 |# ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% E7 ^6 f( J$ o% v  K: X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 j' M8 x1 n! k, I. R; B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 i- {* x; j: P1 y: j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  t- U* I4 l) Z) G( Z# A' A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 Z! A# d5 p1 T2 |% A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ~/ \. _! r' b4 p) h* Z& @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 S1 p2 p6 s$ r+ h4 J: n+ _. M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 N( H( V/ H' d5 P! a, c7 V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 e+ V9 _# Z+ H6 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 O: a9 j% p! f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" e" R2 q& i  m- R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 \2 }# S9 s, u* G3 a5 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 M2 y  Y0 A: |$ u5 e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 G/ f* i9 g% K2 V- @+ ?0 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) d$ P- O  |5 n- U3 P- c" k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 z3 o' E. D6 O2 p" s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. A% E8 R4 q' _: A4 T7 T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" |9 R9 u; {" l3 x, g( I我请你剖开它

0 V6 d, X& P$ Y' W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# H. X* @3 c( J( `& G( A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>