【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 R9 ~/ O# a4 O( K+ q9 M7 ?歌词我附在后面。
2 D8 b- H( m6 Q8 J+ Z0 d1 c6 B) m. aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; \  R  B9 ]# `3 [1 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* y( |2 }4 f! }6 ~' [1 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, u& u% |) ~9 E2 G: sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* M: D; P6 d0 F; u1 }* IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! g3 q7 h' g: R8 e3 t  sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 Q# l$ c+ w4 w, RYou needn’t fear anything
2 s) B2 ~$ S) m) F8 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# |+ s* z. p/ rEvery other word you utter is love
0 n- ^- A9 d5 K+ ?9 w& OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 q/ E  Y' k+ bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, h+ j, C6 d( q7 c7 d4 nI’m still filled with fear
, Z$ I0 @) l4 q, w1 ?, [( M. dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 D! O" t: ], g( T" \1 wWith such a tongue as yours,
2 B# ?' x( m* O+ X2 ~* _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 w5 g% j' [: U4 V5 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- w; D( \* o4 _9 H% a: j! w$ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) M) V* w+ L$ a4 s* W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 L" H8 h! u- T2 y+ w$ t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; t+ |3 Z# b, f% p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; v  b" {0 i; _9 h, U" m  S% w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! |) v) D; \+ I2 t/ D; E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% a: r; ~! y' t4 _$ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 M4 p) w  F* Q) }  O0 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ o+ @( x4 ~3 g" o/ T# s$ c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) X" n- V; |! h+ ?* y& W- M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( R& @7 f: X* n. t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& w) O. O- E8 H. ^! f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ T" {, c4 c) A, v6 G3 f$ I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' f8 v; W2 {" z) T9 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 S# ?* z6 u  ~: D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ Z: p/ v- D: m+ a' w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* j1 {. K2 O% M. s5 ?, b. _  @2 x( a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 t: G# N4 r9 D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( d) ]0 R6 Y" R+ V9 v/ |6 T8 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; U9 w) A  i& W8 T% I7 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ `6 i; G/ L7 b& ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 s$ \  \9 {' G$ \% A* m7 {; W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) I$ D6 v# Y% K6 Q  `# `; d/ n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: Z$ W3 }" k' x' |- L; C* |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( t$ p3 t: l2 {9 b; z3 ]2 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 {- \- x7 Y7 r$ P4 D( P5 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; T# i; M# i; y9 o$ V6 v9 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ n& \! m; d- F+ N) ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. f0 F. c0 K5 h7 L0 o% s" Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 [  n8 m6 D7 i5 j' i( y4 O9 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>