【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ S: \  i% y# Q6 j' x$ i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& y: @6 c2 s$ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 A! j. V: v6 N$ m9 _# g  \" Y5 n; RThe sky is happy down to its soul
- \3 O8 k9 d( E  S! R: [With the moon kissing it every night
. s; Q/ Y! |' C: r: F* ^8 T4 OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 _1 ]* e. d! QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 a; W( v# s9 E/ t3 NI really want to know just how much you love me
# [  d. y3 K# E4 lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& T. u; |; f* B& \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( k  o, y' W7 o; U" P; N% W* m. s# nI want so much to see inside your heart
# e, x! K- @& @' T$ [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ n: N$ Y. {* X2 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: H/ u% Y% D8 k) e; XI regret not dying
% u5 E* W! y$ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ k  D7 S( M5 n1 M; H7 z) z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ S$ H$ p+ N8 K# h9 M/ @/ T1 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; W7 J' r+ E& x) N% a7 B3 v6 o0 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 A9 ?- ~" i& T- T! J<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' l3 j8 D  J  H# J$ T3 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" l8 L' s$ X4 a9 b% y; a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; e& |! {5 x* K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* ^9 T; T  t9 ?: e5 j: k; W/ `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ c7 C1 g( a9 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 K. m% Q6 R9 q' s# L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* |& C, f: x9 D6 H4 o; w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* l( C& w' h9 D6 C% X7 L9 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  [" L7 F$ O3 Y9 o2 {; d# @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% j/ Q; {) {( g; f8 T. a7 V: a- M8 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ L5 a- C; ?  J' z) c6 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 L1 p* S# I  K9 v2 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) l' i* ?/ ^6 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- I4 l+ k* d2 S$ _5 B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 ~- H" t9 A$ J; s& o* X& Z+ Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 U4 f! k6 W, h' f! O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( i9 [4 k' g. P9 I, o8 g6 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* n0 s8 r, n. @# T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& a) ^: z4 Z' o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! R. G2 P: V, m8 n+ U$ D) f# x% f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; m5 t) j/ u4 [' Y1 g7 m2 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>