【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" y, {$ Z5 H0 D) ~% K! R3 T' I歌词我附在后面。
4 ?( K( R$ }5 ^$ r' i3 U4 U, tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ c$ |, ?: h; D+ c5 @7 ]" OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 h# g+ Z0 G, V) `1 U# s+ Z! ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" h) e8 t3 B* x7 ^" EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ d% Q4 ]2 V) V- f9 ]$ _! ?8 Y0 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* I2 j2 P5 M8 Y" ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 a5 @- ^" M1 a, a2 _% @+ [: QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: y/ }: H% f/ F3 N, g+ C! }I want so much to see inside your heart
8 z) ?# H: A' O# k2 wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) m, c( u4 D1 k, ^I’m still filled with fear
6 [6 t( L1 U6 ?- U# uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' |* H, J' D+ e5 q5 T2 CI regret not dying
5 x5 H: F4 o2 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- }. w  l- O, K+ X, u! J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; F! v1 B6 i: E3 V9 h6 ~, H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 U/ c4 q" T, m+ [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' o0 n# K$ ^( M1 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; M/ P# t+ |7 W; g( H& L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( \7 c$ S( D- w/ b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 N/ S1 e' y- B) o& n( J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, }% F8 Z/ W" H7 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! |6 G" `6 `- f/ ]# s$ Q$ F9 }) Q& v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# Q& V* t1 L7 S) g* m& \( }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 @& I6 E) c! S" A1 s/ f/ h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; H( R" t. c( j, B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 o6 C. U' q+ X) u3 i% Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( V: n! J0 d1 _) k" ?/ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( g( I. e: c3 r6 H; H4 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 G' N- o  y7 k, `+ d4 g4 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 d9 y; ~( |) P# q. p! i) L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 K  n4 ]" x$ o% u; }6 B. `: ]. V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 y+ r2 v2 p# E# |1 X% J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ n0 J% t5 m0 |8 p6 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& `& l! V6 F! \( D8 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 U$ u. a5 K1 s* R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ~7 c% b4 C8 O0 ^( p" q7 w/ a  o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* Q3 C8 X, I. }/ W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 x7 t/ b! }# L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& L/ j; \. Z! {- Z* _( C/ {8 V我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# C) s9 W) L  K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>