【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ W! d# S. J& x+ [" ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  i, b* `& v: H& e; p8 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 H" u& ?" H! C" O: aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 U9 R( J6 v% ~# p8 LEvery other word you utter is love
0 A! C2 w7 q3 j2 K/ P8 D, `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" Q& Z$ f2 \- g' HNothing can compare to my love
# X2 [6 H: S: c9 l) \" TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 W3 l0 _  V7 mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 V. n. \) M0 q8 tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% W! a( a3 c2 H, T3 z5 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: _& N6 d% ~: T: D3 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 a* O7 @# O; m$ ?& ^/ H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- w+ \& z( b3 x0 R: m" n' y& u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ m, A4 `: b8 y9 J! \- e( G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, ]* D* [) F: T; U8 ^9 i' _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 _/ u0 \" F5 l0 h6 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ n: b; y; V: ^) {# q0 M' Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( o' O! q" |5 l- e! e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 Z7 W( \, n8 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 Y; y6 G2 q/ x/ J. q' ~, B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. k. N# k2 l* R! i$ G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: k% d. M5 h. p5 f6 u- W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. q: U# \/ n$ y2 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% e3 T; U9 x+ m# e# {7 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& S/ X9 \" U2 x" K  `7 S( _; o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 T% L$ f6 v& h1 a) o& \: v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* G, |2 j, _+ f* U! M' G7 a( n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& x" X% n4 q& ^  \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: v  q8 H2 V$ K9 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, Q5 Y- |3 c. M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- O; d# U- Q" q1 @9 @9 |' {2 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ L0 u" U# @7 ~1 B1 D0 t+ S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 A' m9 K- k1 v6 y' J$ g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 V* P1 B" s/ A+ L- q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 h: e$ U) X/ {0 _: ], [; g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: Y1 U" _3 X. E+ O! f0 C1 y! D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. v6 Q/ T1 }' ?/ j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- P# q  G& i) @) n4 s- X% f! S: w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% x, `( T$ Y! {9 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 H! H; X" ]+ p& T! j& v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# o( i0 o7 n0 n6 D8 {$ k7 p! o- `, d8 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>