【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 e0 ]/ C+ z% F: F1 o; Y. b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 N2 \" v  E# t4 m2 P+ xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 o5 e1 m+ u6 F/ F0 ^) pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ \& W3 [. S8 a- C( J" ^$ x# c3 {5 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; l# t# n! m, N* Z8 z8 u$ zThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 l  ?& {. d& k) y6 \With the moon kissing it every night
/ i$ A/ x/ p0 O0 H; JSeeing the sky content with its love
8 @: E- p( t( JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 {" m/ `# Y" M( U6 @$ x: m0 c' CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; e$ Y- O1 Q) L0 HEvery other word you utter is love
" u4 Q3 R: w7 K1 {- K- ~  UI really want to know just how much you love me
/ a7 k5 a7 [' l" h: `I love you I love you with all my heart
7 o% ~. t2 ~0 Y: ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* I5 y5 s" J; y6 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 O' l; }: t+ [' {  Q  uI’m still filled with fear
* P2 a/ S1 y$ z% A* _5 v$ v' d! M% JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 e. ^0 @/ |. T  R7 ?I regret not dying
% n2 b7 ^# J1 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 |( U7 ^( M# NWith such a tongue as yours,
- N7 r" H# M, [/ o' `1 a; AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; x0 a4 }  D9 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 `2 F$ G, w8 c. K) f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, n5 {- L- Q. n3 J: V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 B: Y3 g6 J- v( g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 t* ^& U5 Y! j* j1 z& H' p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# S( U6 H5 Y% I) V+ W" ^% I1 a% `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& E9 q. o" y- b7 S9 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  a- N' k" i3 r, Z2 c: S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 D2 e" _  X) ~& D5 B" Z* Q! b( e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. t) D& A( y7 C5 o" P1 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. O+ o8 ~) J* L% e+ T" }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) [& F% r+ c) ?4 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, w) ^; a+ P: Y+ B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 s* o4 ?. ]4 d" C5 B( ~. P/ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 l  D. ?5 J$ g) c4 J1 l5 r  k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ }' W2 b0 J) q7 H1 n* |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# ^& C( L* i" C. }5 n: K' w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 \: m, j4 y0 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- y( D+ U* V0 U  F0 L2 i8 {5 K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- I, L( j3 O: ]3 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% Q) N# ^! t0 U- ]) i3 B) j<P>I regret not dying</P>
" t2 M' d8 @* ^4 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" k1 e- s) e2 N* {3 G2 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- U6 V( @! n4 c/ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 V" R% t" B  N4 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 n& x& ]% u5 F3 K6 H* U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# G5 J  ?0 L+ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" k* j, H5 s2 k0 {7 m3 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 p& B$ \6 a0 B: E$ x) c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% O6 {; x; E; V& r! R  Y4 ~我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>