【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 v, P' c- F, }% s) ?. ?. xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ z$ n- O3 ~' a) ?; UThe sky is happy down to its soul
* @& y* G% W3 E1 _With the moon kissing it every night
. n. b9 |' C/ U: ~! j( l! wSeeing the sky content with its love
- |, Y' a2 F/ [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) m& b/ c# [& ?% r& FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ _7 K+ a" Q* [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 z* e& j# Z# ^) \1 V1 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" N+ h5 k/ D) j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# A9 b8 y- q$ a! J) l& u, `5 @6 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% i9 T9 i2 x. f- V; j/ u. M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# M# ^5 i$ o* E% j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  X; t7 Z$ r+ W! X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 _: L) c' Q0 f/ }7 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 u7 p9 [) Z& w" A3 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 r! X$ Y- n( F& _5 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 S9 e; P6 [2 ^  @0 ~, f7 `- J$ d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 z: z! J1 }. G4 a8 R: r8 g) A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 J& m1 E/ r+ A% z5 X, H- h- O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) w8 P+ Z+ u1 v" D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ g- `% f5 X! {; p* n; @  ]( F* N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' e, N# ~) m: `<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 W0 e7 b2 f' |  x& ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 E% U5 D$ O* r. V: N% ~- ^: `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( |9 K" @7 r7 e  N# ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ y# a, E5 o9 ]7 t  Q1 s' I$ r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 a. a7 f1 |$ \% i2 B* a2 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' F* t. H" F; [) e% ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
; b. }0 N0 \6 _2 V4 G, o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# {; B# O1 I& X# b# i8 j5 C3 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: I  a9 `7 b+ F  i5 M; [; N& v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' k3 \% F' Z( [, m1 j6 a! f% U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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4 x9 A) L: i0 G% b0 S, [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 I; s2 o8 L* i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>