【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 X; `7 ?5 x( S9 @+ {The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 |' a. y& }( h( ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
! D" J! X* f6 E" Z$ u5 Y1 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  F" x( M: L: y7 E. XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. x) h/ w9 r2 b+ q0 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, O6 b. |) \; ^  ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( L* [: u8 u% r1 c( PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 B9 p% j  W( \2 ]% FI love you I love you with all my heart
& @) L! W, A& N( qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! w0 h1 z2 A- D7 r7 ]/ ^4 H& DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 r$ J5 C8 H# w1 {' V/ k/ V5 II’m still filled with fear
4 {2 }8 _% r: {% W6 T7 F" C" vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" V' a! ]0 S3 t/ M; K4 [; B# _I regret not dying
! K" s9 \2 z. @  t( J7 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  x7 i0 g1 Z; b& QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% {1 w5 L8 ^1 x. h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. B2 l! H% H" X9 e& \- \, ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 F( Y8 {( {4 P- J* B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- X/ M  s8 G! e# f- u; k4 ?( w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 a  M1 b8 {( _1 q$ o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' |9 X6 ]" j) B, d+ @" o: S3 P7 c2 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& |/ ?7 m; [2 }# M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 |  x8 H5 m, o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ B' Z) S! b' q5 P! V7 F0 N$ \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" N" J# S1 j" |3 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" T: c! Z. Y9 d2 `) a9 E2 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 @" Y+ `: f1 |1 c1 s5 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 F3 N+ A! X- q* G- `0 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 l  m% O9 a* ~% U% Z: n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, e4 g9 e& e$ w: c  Y( k: S. P' w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& A. j; M2 w; Q9 d+ B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 D2 U6 o7 D& C! x. x& \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% M! [1 s$ C0 S" u; x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" G0 m$ u0 O# h# h2 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! y: `9 h- t% @3 A9 m$ r<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 g# B7 o- F5 \  U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% I0 j+ O4 e# A. m6 N( G- C  ~9 T( l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 [! m9 o1 {: S: p4 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 x8 T$ z( [3 R8 v5 H" Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ~4 A6 |7 T: L1 X- L* B3 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* Q# E! m  r( }& d: W- i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! I. N5 |& {4 T3 ~. r9 U9 q' G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ]% q. I) v* c# U/ I0 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>