【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 X1 d' s; V& ^! ^歌词我附在后面。
* T+ m4 k" }3 D" n3 RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: ~9 j: N' Y9 H* ?9 n0 n  WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 u, c$ P+ b, v+ @5 E0 e$ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 U( d/ D  |: z- r+ f: KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" H: N9 o! D7 T# c/ J! mYou needn’t fear anything
+ S5 v% Q2 z; V/ R) h" Z4 y- OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  F) L7 Q( G8 I' `' NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- v$ s0 @% b8 E# @4 ^! q) cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 K$ N$ h- u( k. k2 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 K- _( a1 f3 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, P% }/ q1 C* d" O; n" ~) V3 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 }$ x) |; C" m5 i9 I" t( W9 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ p9 S( P1 [' s8 {/ L5 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- c! P, D$ L2 q/ I9 N2 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- X8 }" s0 @! e3 j' \2 H. |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) e- E. N/ V  u- Q( q9 ~0 u( J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  f3 Y$ y& {$ ~0 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 r3 X% ]6 R& `; c1 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: r3 Q0 m; x6 L: A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 Y9 `5 C( i1 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% w6 N& L+ O% D9 B5 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 L) `; o: B, W1 A  J" ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! K: w' n3 b* y8 J; D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' U* r/ \2 R1 A/ q) d9 w9 _1 ^: V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 e# J+ n. c4 I4 ?3 W9 {8 j* D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 w+ H/ _. ]6 B% k4 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 l3 [) k- C. j( \$ y; a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( E0 i6 H$ {! g6 d8 o# f  u8 F5 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ~% m& G5 W) s9 g* L( U, e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 U, ~5 S9 Q2 l; h  d' r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 h: G6 l; H/ o* p2 \5 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 c6 u2 }7 X5 ?; X& b  P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 C+ ^0 V* j+ F  K+ R; B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 @. M: Z6 Z7 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; L" N2 U5 Q. n8 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- A1 d$ D6 Q5 ?+ e( M9 x# l# f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, j0 \7 X& r9 n$ \- D6 z. u我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>