【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- b9 U8 O9 s$ j; z( hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, T; ?( a3 x. Z$ @5 c5 @) Y' RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! ?9 J) x# e6 K: I% x* [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 ]) b9 v- s; @3 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 o5 `+ g& L! x: r2 ^0 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
4 R, X, R& j. J& I: J1 JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 n* t0 R& m; q9 KI want so much to see inside your heart
9 z- D& H( h2 T: v# H2 L$ e. II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& K$ F5 n/ X( |8 d4 [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. o& B- R5 L7 X' L6 h1 M6 u9 d, i8 @: x7 AWith such a tongue as yours,
2 ]- u, O8 l9 }0 ?" j7 `) }. WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 ?4 K- A2 m5 e$ H4 U. y4 R4 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 F9 k7 p' {3 z3 G: T$ r" N( k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" Z& q, a/ c) n2 w  ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 `! ~# d$ F& H5 ^1 L' z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) A. e! c; I* f9 A3 K3 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 I/ M) ~) E  Y7 g' m; T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* X; E( J+ [7 W9 ?9 d+ W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ G# x' g" F7 a% q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- d& o, d; y0 i  @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 z/ S% o: y' f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; U. e& Y/ Y- m) t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& B5 B: |- R- v* r4 T& E! v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. }% }# Z8 z- t0 r6 Y0 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, k, S/ n# c( y; e+ b& }- x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 U; M7 Y$ S1 d, v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 @- }/ ]6 z. n8 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! Q( Z2 J. _% z3 P# M/ \1 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# q7 _/ X* B; @# m3 i+ I. t$ V% `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; r8 F& V! B/ \. b" b! Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) a0 Y3 M" @% c" u2 m' d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. [- t# G. t0 b" O8 e5 S% {# ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ W, F! o' N+ Y- ~2 j: n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# `9 t/ k/ {9 d( d, O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; F* V; v9 ?( K% |  I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& \# f2 l; I8 v! F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" }2 m5 z* t0 U/ ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ O" L3 a! h8 V$ ^- Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' z+ Y* \  b$ C4 w1 `2 ]! r7 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 k7 H8 j2 G4 K7 z3 S. a& W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>